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By : OceanBlue
  • From ANON - Renachi on December 27, 2006
    Hmm...it's going to be tough to solve this one....give us more clues in the next chapter!!!>_
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  • From ANON - amyrose on December 22, 2006
    You need to update! I wanna see an update! I wanna read moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2006
    Well this is my first Naruto got raped and is going to have a baby fic, but I really like it. I think it was Sasuke 'cause of the string or it could be Sino *shudders*
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2006
    I like it you rushed it a bit but it's your first fic and it's a lot better then some storys i've seen. also I think shino shoud be the father because of the bug comment and because there need to be more shino/naruto pairings. not to mention the fact that shino is really quiet so maby shino has always had a crush on naruto but never knew ( is that how you spell it?? ) just how to tell him and this is what happened because of it.

    So please please please let shino be the father and well if he is'ent the father can gaara be the father or if not him well anyones good as long as it's not sasuke because theres more then enough of that pairing. but in the end it's up to you but dear god please don't let it be sasuke anyone and I mean ANYONE is better then him I mean it coud be iruka or ino who ues'ed a jutsu to turn into a guy woud be better then sasuke.

    Now I don't have anything against the sasuke/naruto pairing but it's been done so much it's geting annoying to read. but in the end like I said the pairings are up to you but please please please please please for the love of god don't let sasuke be the father.






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  • From ANON - j_narusasu_c on December 17, 2006
    Hey, I like the first chap, so cute... Who is the rapist? I hope he loves Naruto...
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  • From ANON - Darling_425 on December 16, 2006
    I think that this story is very interesting and I hope that you'll update pretty soon :)
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  • From ANON - Maddie on December 16, 2006
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I love the story so far!!
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  • From ANON - Emma125 on December 16, 2006
    GREAT! keep it up, what happens next?
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  • From perfect_blue_rogue on December 16, 2006
    well....now that's a twist. but as the saying goes, "can't rape the willing." nice intro! wanna know more! gotta know more! plz i'm begging u! update now cause i'm going into a masochist's withdrawal syndrome!! -starts to look paranoid- must...have.....more..... -doctors jumps her and drags her away-
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  • From ANON - Kativachan(2 lazy to log in) on December 16, 2006
    I think it's either Kankuro or Shino.
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  • From ANON - givehimback on December 15, 2006
    i liked it. good work for ur first try, don't give up. i'd like to know what happened
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  • From ANON - naki on December 15, 2006
    Was it Shino?
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  • From ANON - Hello on December 15, 2006
    Hmm, seems interesting. I'll like to read more. :p
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  • From ANON - chelzi again on December 15, 2006
    ps- i forgot, i was gonna say, it kinda sounded like shino at the bug, but then kankurou with the strings. or maybe sasori? i dunno. anyway, that was all!~
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  • From ANON - chelzi on December 15, 2006
    well... this wasn't bad, and i've read my share of 'naru-getting-raped' fics. there's a lot out there, but they aren't all cliche. yet. this one is looking pretty good so far, and i hope to see some more soon!~
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