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By : OceanBlue
  • From ANON - Yael on May 28, 2016
    Love this story let me quess it was itachi that got naruto pregnant please continue
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  • From lilkkjo082004 on September 25, 2007
    i just wanted to tell you that you gave too many clues as to who raped naruto.

    Now in the first chap. you said a bug landed on nruto and in the 3rd the guy had black hair.

    now who do we know that has black hair and controls bugs.

    SHINO.

    please tell me if i got it right. and keep up the good work with updates.
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  • From OutlawAngel on July 11, 2007
    hiya!!!!....why did ya let Naruto get raped?..hmmm?...anywayzz...wanna know more of the storie..
    There is a lot of guyz with black hair...so common...waiting on new chappies...
    do ur best..

    ya ne
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  • From Gwyllion on May 18, 2007
    I think I have a clue in who could be the rapist....but I could be wrong. :D Good fic so far. Can't wait to see the next update.
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  • From MikiyuSado on March 23, 2007
    wow...black hair, that narrows it down to about half the village. ^-^

    but because of that bug and now the black hair, my mind automatically went "Shino! How could you!?"

    I love the story so far and can't wait for the next update.


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  • From punkin02 on March 23, 2007
    Hmm, black hair...doesn't narrow it down too much, does it...that cuts out what, Gaara? Well I guess Neji's hair is more brown...Shika's too...and Choji is out...The bug makes me think Shino, but his is more brown...please update soon.
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  • From OceanBlue on March 22, 2007
    Oh. Thanks for pointing out that mistake my fellow reveiwers! ^_^" How embarrising to make such a mistake. Ah, I'm getting old. -_-
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on March 16, 2007
    Me likey the new chappie. But uh almost the whole thing is in italics.
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  • From yeagerbomb on March 16, 2007
    okay... that was kind of cute at the end. i'm enjoying this story, though that whole chapter was in italics. i'm sure it was an accident or something, but anyway, it's not a big deal, just a little confusing for a few paragraphs until i realized you just didn't turn it off. good job, i can't wait to find out who did it!!~
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  • From TrixXx on March 16, 2007
    NICE! I LUV it, PLEASE continue.
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  • From emp78 on March 15, 2007
    Isn't Naruto just asking for trouble at the end? lol.
    BTW, is the rapist Shino? Because of the bug thing.
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  • From LadySubaru69 on March 15, 2007
    I think I know who it is. please update quickly

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  • From llyoung on March 15, 2007
    Thanks for the update. Your story is interesting and I have enjoyed reading it.
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  • From Stacy on March 15, 2007
    Hummmmmmmmmm......I wonder who it is?? Please give us more hints!!
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  • From Lici on March 15, 2007
    Huh....Odd.

    NOt bad, but this is a first for me. Try to not let the emotions jumble up with the outside world too much, it will confuse prople(AKA: me). Otherwise, I await the nest chapter with bated breath....
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