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Reviews for Finding Destiny

By : animechick262003
  • From Ekedsad on May 25, 2007
    This was pretty darn good. You have a very good writing style, not to rushed, and very full of detail. Normally I'm not a huge fan of modern Naruto fics, but this one is kind of growing on me. Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Goodchaos on May 24, 2007
    >_< Oh dear God Pleaze!! Don't torture Me like this! I NEED to know what happens PLEAZE continue. PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Kyuubi Fanatic on January 01, 2007
    First off, i just want to say I LOVE your writing. I come for the smut but get sidetracked by the story instead, well done. that's a testament to how good ur stories are. Also, i was a big fan of Grind and im sad u dicontinued it. Good NarutoXSakura fics are hard to find, w/ smut or not, as most people hate her or pair her up w/ sasuke. This in mind, this is a great fic and i look forward to reading this through to completion (please finish this one...*.*).

    Good luck w/ the romance and eventual smut, and i hope u update soon and frequently. (i can never get enough of a story until i read it thru to the end -_- )

    best of luck,
    KF

    (P.S. i dont think most people really care how long a chapter or story is as long as its good. Another 10 pages is nothing, so keep em long and in-depth ^_^ [chibi KF sends huggles and stars])
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on December 26, 2006
    how could you stop there!!!!! i love your story please update soon.....will we know about sakura and naruto's heartbreak from the first chapter?
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  • From ANON - TerraChrono on December 26, 2006
    a bit cliche, don't you think? However, decisions such as that are entirely up to you. Mayhap you have a goal for all of this, mayhap you don't. However, this setup already predisposes it to predictability, the downfall of many otherwise good stories. I would suggest that you carefully consider how you might be able to veer this story off the traditional track, so to speak, so as to maintain this fic's excellence. Other than some minor issues with comma usage and placement, this piece is thus far shaping up nicely.

    Looking forward to future developments
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2006
    you doubt that a reader would like more of such a great story?!?!?! you are crazy!
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  • From ANON - Soul of the Phoenix on December 25, 2006
    Personally I wouldn't have minded another ten pages, but I guess this is a good stopping point for now. I'm curious juts how much of her memory was gone and how far Naruto is willing to go to help her. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - mel on December 25, 2006
    What a great chapter. I love the amnesia bit, it's always a good plot line. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good job, and a great Christmas Present.
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  • From ANON - fanfic_lover on December 22, 2006
    THAT WAS AWSOME, KEEP IT UP!!!!
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  • From ANON - poornmiserable on December 22, 2006
    how could you stop there!!!!.....its ok, naruto/sakura stories are better when they have plot mixed in with smut :)....how old is narutos kid?...did he already have him when naruto first met sakura...who's the mom? please dont say hinata...make up a character that would be best i cant see naruto with anyone else from the show except sakura.........well please update as soon as possible please and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2006
    that was amazingly good.
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  • From ANON - solar phoenix on December 20, 2006
    nice AU so far. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - benn454 on December 20, 2006
    Sucks that you deleted Grind, but this fic is pretty damn good so far, so it's ok. I think the modern touch and making Naruto an erotica writer was pretty cool. First fic I've read with that premise; I've been reluctant to read AU fics, but after reading this one, I think I could get into them. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - fooxie on December 18, 2006
    OMG!!! Your still alive!!! yay......im so happy that you are still continuing to write stories, ur an amazing writer and your stories are full of interesting drama....anyways i hope you will repost "suddenly daddy" as long with the last chappie....it's been so long since the hiatus as well as the stupid comment made by the contest people.....their stupid for not understanding creative writing.....anyways you should definitely post your story on fanfiction.net i think mature content is allowed plus you will definitely get traffic and reviews for that story!!! Take care....hope you will post soon ^-^
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  • From ANON - Wrathchylde on December 15, 2006
    Grind is a tough loss. I was really getting into it but alas. This has the same style and feel to it so I should say it will be great. I'm one of the few who prefers an innocent Sakura but that's not going to stop me here. Cheers.
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