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Reviews for In the shadows

By : shadeoftroll
  • From ANON - pumking on January 03, 2007
    is it me or does iruka have a thing for blowing shit up?...sweeeet...lol!
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on January 02, 2007
    Thank you for another great chapter. I loved the jealousy bit between Ibiki and Gai. Sasuke calling them Okaasan and Otousan is sweet, and I especially liked how protective Iruka got over his Ibiki when he saw his scars -- makes you wonder about the circumcision. Ouch! What can I say that I haven't already said? I love this fic. You could make it 50 chapters and I'd read every one.
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  • From ANON - MydridFox on January 02, 2007
    Silly me I just now found the review button or else I would have done it a while ago. I love thi pairing a lot because its just so original and you better believe I tried finding more but sadly you are a visionary that hasn't been mimiced yet so there were none. keep up the good work for all your adoring fans
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  • From ANON - Hestia on January 02, 2007
    Oh--I love what you did with Ibiki's cock--and Iruka's reaction to it--totally awesome! And Ibiki teaching Sasuke--yea! Of course, Kakashi should a bit too, but I love it--father and son bonding! This chapter was excellent! Selfishly I hope this story goes to twenty chapters--I love it! I'd write more, but I'm going to go back and reread this one again, this time to savour it . . .
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  • From ANON - TonTon on December 31, 2006
    oh my god, that was just too much fun ^^ The part with Ibiki and Gai in the sex store, a work of genius, not to mention the long-johns part. I must say though the bitch talk freaks me out a bit, but everyone has different taste I guess. You write well so keep going, for my sake and probably many others.
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  • From ANON - Khaos on December 31, 2006
    I just love that "mother" bit so much. It actually made me facepalm, but shino and neji falling down afterwards saved you from the title of "overly cheezy". Sigh, and the shopping for lube was brilliantly done. It really is that awkward in those places, and the idea of Gai wearing a collar for mistress Anko made me squee. And the Goth kid's assumption that they were a gay couple ^-^.It makes me wonder that if they were, who would top?
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on December 31, 2006
    ROFLAO do you realize how much I've laughed reading this?? Oh it was really good don't get me wrong, i luved it but i'm picturing it in my head and i can't help but burst out laughing! i luv it, the picture perfect family ^^ and hey, you have to have at least ONE set of embaressing pjs. I have 3 sets! ^^ man, three dominating mistresses. eee i luv it! more soon plz! oh yeah, iruka is cruel when it comes to threats and i honestly don't blame ibiki and gai when it came to lube :p
    Good Bye 2006 and Hello 2007!!!
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  • From ANON - Cindy on December 30, 2006
    YES, I missed you - more, more~!
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on December 30, 2006
    Oh, you've outdone yourselves! This was an awesome chapter. It had a bit of everything and all so good. The lemon was great, and even funnier when the boys overheard it. The Sasuke/Iruka moments were so sweet, Ibiki-papa and Iruka-mama and the bit about Sasuke's new mommy -- loved it. Lube shopping was inspired (poor Gai), and poor Neji and Shino, too. I would love to see them in their cute jammies, too precious. It was over too soon and now I have to wait again. Aw, man...
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  • From ANON - Hestia on December 30, 2006
    Thank you!! I love the family!!! (the line about his bitch and his pup--oh pure gold!) Love Gaara as a goth at the porn store--awesome!
    Lots of great moments in this chapter--wow--the sex the boys overhear--awesome; The mistress sakura and anko--fun and kinky; the scene in the lube shop--funny; the pajamas--oh so cute; Iruka protecting his son and the embrace with Sasuke--awww, so adorable. Oh and Ibiki taking those two home! God that kitchen scene--sorry, this review is terminated--I must go reread, need Ibiki/Iruka smut now . . .
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  • From ANON - randomgrl13 on December 29, 2006
    well, its about time someone wrote somthing other than kaka/iru, i hate that pairing! this one is so sweet... and full of crack so i love it! but are u gonna put sasuke with naruto when he gets back? cause that would kinda ruin it...
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on December 28, 2006
    Do you realize how happy I was to come back home from holidays only to find not one, not two, but three new chapters? I laughed, I cried, I nearly made a mess all because of you two. I love it all and I like how Sasuke doesn't act like he had a below-zero icicle permanently glued up his ass. I was scared for a sec at the end of ch 8 and when I read 9 I was like 'Whoa.' Didn't see that coming that's for sure! I live this fic, and I hope you two continue it soon. I'm in mourning for Iruka's lacey garments but he can always get some more--or walk around butt-naked. Ooh I know Ibiki would jsut love that. I gotta go but hey, you two are by far the best writers around. I'm so glad you two decided to share this with us :)
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  • From ANON - eve4mem on December 28, 2006
    I was not expecting that. I thought it was going to be Naruto you know like a surpirse visit. But with the odd pairing I really shouldn't let things like this sneak up on me. It's great of course hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on December 27, 2006
    I suppose I should have seen that coming. Ibiki is just a big teddy bear. I like the way you portrayed Sasuke, letting us see his softer, actually human side. So much for quiet, romantic evenings, especially when Naruto returns. Loved this chapter. (Does Gai LIKE snakes?)
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  • From Hestia on December 27, 2006
    Oh my god, it's a family!!! And Iruka burnt his underwear! Another great one!
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