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By : VRon8899
  • From ANON - Rose on May 18, 2007
    FINALLY A GAARA PAIRING !
    *dances around in circleS*
    DEMM YOU T_T youre goin to make me fail my exams, i started today and finished all ur chapters today too. can barely wait for more !
    btw there are a few things that i have noticed that i would like to point out.

    ''She rapped watching as the chuunin fled from her presence. She released a low sigh at his departure, Gaara being gone had caused such instability within the council and the village itself. Some of the Elders had even gone as far as to proclaim that Konoha had been the cause of this and all treatise should be cut immediately, luckily Kankuro was able to threaten them all into reclaiming those views''

    how did she know of that when she wasnt in the village ? as far as i member the whole time she was with gaara then wennt to erm the mist village or w.e (bad concentration and memory span).

    oh this line ?


    ''Oh just let me in I don’t need to be announced for my own brother''


    was the love LOL that is so like her !




    jus a lil mistake i noticed here.


    ''but the mention of Sasuke killing Gaara caused more then anger to fill his body, it enraged him and that anger curled red hot through his belly easily fueled by the demon within his body''


    ''more thEn anger'' s'pposed to be thAn.

    erm i might be able to beta for you MIGHT but really you should use me as a last resort with my concentration span and the fact that i have exams atm O_o. (yes thank you very much for posting something i always wanted and jus at the brink of my exams). erm if u would want me as ur beta would u plz contact me on laterdeeplove@hotmail.com with a subject sayin so ?


    oh and btw i noticed ur gaara is a BIT OOC. tho i dont blame you, that character aint easy to write ^^, especially if youre aimin for intimacy while dealing with him.
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  • From Ukagau on May 18, 2007
    Oo Wow. Sasuke is a bastard or what! hehe. I think he might push a few to many buttons with telling Naruto that he is going to kill Gaara. I still think that Sasuke might do the "I'll kill you to keep you forever my pet" Kinda thing. That would be a little macrabe in my opinion (Maybe thats why it kinda..slightly, appeals..-squeak for being a little darker then I thought) I know Sasuke is a bastard just in general but has he gone kinda crazy like Itachi when talking about the Sharingan? Even if he hasn't, the chracter still hits me as very possesive and.....bratty. So good job on actually keeping them in character this long! -pats your back and offers Pocky in all flavors and coffee, and tea- Now I wonder who else your bringing into the picture now -raises brow- do you just lie in bed at night and drum your fingers together with a little evil smile cackling at how to make your readers weep in anticipation???? O_o...
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  • From ANON - Mey on May 16, 2007
    Yayyyyyyyyyyyy. Yes!!! New chappie ^^
    I've said it once and I will many more: Sasuke sadism is absolutely gorgeous ^^
    Dunno how this will end, but I hope he gets to lay his fingers in poor Naruto once more :drooooool:
    Well, hope to read you again (kyaaaa, can't wait for the next... they are just so great TT____TT) and thanks for allways answering ^^
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  • From anapana83 on May 16, 2007
    Tricky tricky indeed. Me likey the sadistic Sasuke here. It's not right but still...oh, and the lil SasuNaru action there....hawt lol. Naruto must find something he can do. Else Gaara's gonna be in trouble. That showdown between Gaara and Sasuke is something i'm looking forward to. My my, what jealousy in a bastard can fuel huh? Anyway, great job.
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  • From serenagold on May 16, 2007
    (user formally known as Nailbunny ^^)

    Awww, I feel so special. This most recent update was all mine!!!! =^^= hehehe

    ...And I loved it!!!!

    Sasuke always seemed like the violently possessive obsessive type. Keep up the great work!!
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  • From Kingcobra on May 16, 2007
    Sasuke had better NOT kill Gaara!

    What happens next?
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 16, 2007
    Wow. Happy to be able to read your new updated. ** dancing around **

    Btw, I'm confused. Why the men called Sasuke 'Kabuto' ??
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  • From ANON - Ana on May 16, 2007
    That chapter wasn't confusing at all. I obviously want some questions answered at certain parts but other than that I could follow what was going on. Basically love Naruto with everyone but Sasuke with only a few exceptions. I love the plot and can't wait until Gaara finds Sasuke and hopefull kills him. ^.~
    ~Ana~
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  • From serenagold on May 14, 2007
    Holy crap. I just read this whole thing in one sitting and I feel like my eyes are about to bleed... but I had too! I had not choice! The story is too good!! I couldn't look away!!!!!!


    Seriously, this is the best GaaraXNaruto paring I have ever read and rakes in amoung the top Fan Fics I've ever read on this site. I'm so impressed and at the same time inwardly upset that this wasn't a completed story yet. I eagerly await the next chapter!!

    Stupid freaking Sasuke. I hate him so. (^^ hehe, I always knew that bastard was no good)
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  • From ANON - Mey on May 14, 2007
    Maybe what I'm gonna say next won't make you happy, but the picture disappointed me U___U
    Not cuz I didn't like it (because it is so f***ing cool!!!!)... but when i saw another entry I thaught "Yayyyyy, new chappie ^^"... and it wasn't there TT_____TT
    Sad story ...
    But it can be fixed, please updaaaaaate ó____ò... I'm so wanting to know how this goes on >________
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  • From anapana83 on May 12, 2007
    Wow, not bad at all! Great picture!!!!!
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  • From Ukagau on May 06, 2007
    -squee- Wow. I figured that Sasuke would be a bit insane and/or aggresive to Naruto. It dosn't seem like he wants to kill him but it could be: Kill you and I get to keep you forever type thing. Make him into a corpse or somthing. But then again, Sasuke could just want his lover back. Tsuande dosn't seem to happy about the fact that Naruto and Gaara are in a relationship ne? A cute moment with Neji and Shikamaru. Not alot but at least you can tell that Shikamaru has concern over his teammate. Gaara is....on the edge I guess you would say. I'm enjoying the veiws of the diffrent parties. How are the relationship ties to The Leaf and the Sand countreis going to be if Sasuke is on Gaara's land and they do end up in a bloody battle over a certin blonde Hokage? Cheers for another good chapter.
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  • From ANON - oztan on May 06, 2007
    Things are looking good. Can not wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mey on May 04, 2007
    Yayyyyyyyy, that was yet another great chapter ^______^
    I love how you make Sasuke molest poor chakra-drained hot-headed Naruto... duh, he's just so easy to tease xD
    I'm cheering on, and hurry for the next update ^^ they make my day
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  • From anapana83 on May 04, 2007
    Ha! So i WAS right in the beginning. Dammit, you tricky tricky thing you! I have to admit that last scene between Naruto and Sasuke there was kinda...hawt. Even though Sasuke's a bastard here. Anyway, i cant wait for the next update!!!!!!

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