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By : VRon8899
  • From ANON - deathscythe70 on June 29, 2007
    It looks like a good fic, if I didn't have scroll over it read it. If you can fix that problem I'd love to read.
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  • From ANON - Kimiko-kun on June 27, 2007
    He lives! yay! *all thanks to kyuubi being his usual manipulative self ^.^* poor gaara tho, getting all worked up like that, i want to hug him *he'd probably kill me tho =P*

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  • From DHH on June 27, 2007
    I just started reading your story...So far, so good, i guess...The thing is, your stories are being
    beta'd, right?? Well, i suggest you get new betas, becuz there are still alot of mistakes in the
    grammar and punctuation dept..and i'm only on chapter 2!!!!
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  • From anapana83 on June 26, 2007
    Poor Gaara. So much pain! And in regards to Kyuubi and Naruto, I figured that would be the accurate way to god Naruto into getting the will back. That one part with Sakura i could imagine perfectly in my mind. She did good! I wonder how things'll play out from here now. Great chap! :)
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  • From Ukagau on June 26, 2007
    Gomen! I did not mean to make you worry. If it’s because I was late, I do not have internet myself (I don’t pay for it) I just use someone else’s network for my laptop, and sometimes it does not come through so I cannot respond as fast as I usually do. No worries though, I would never just not review, even if I completely despised the chapter ^_-. About Neji, It is not really an e'ff up per say because, that is the last thing Naruto saw (or was told? few chapters back) so it makes sense that he might not know that Neji actually survived. I still do not know if that would keep Naruto from killing Sasuke. There was no other way for that string of events to be ended. Poor Naruto. On your newly updated stories, I will review them perhaps after this story is finished so I do not get confused….which happens a lot. Gomenasai!

    Anyways! Yeah for Sakura. She kicks butt in the medical field. I do not know what Naruto would have done without her. Good description of her healing him. It is true; it would not have been easy for her to do. Kyuubi is manipulative! It is reasonable to concur that he is found of his host. Funny how threatening his country and Gaara woke Naruto up. I hope you let me in on how the council is going to deal with a neurotic Gaara. -Waggles eyebrows- It is going to take a bit for him to get over this battle. It is sad that he blames himself for this, but Naruto needs to knock some sense into him! His name was the first one that Naruto said when he woke up.–Snickers- Actually, it seems that Gaara is the reason the Naruto woke up, right? Naruto has to do some recovery and soothing Gaara’s fear. Overall, this was a nice wrap up chapter for the fight scene, letting the speed slow down (for me at least) to not as fast. I do not think I have been this excited over a Naruto story except the original story itself! *except fillers* Good job! -Hands more candy-

    Yeah, I like those cadies, and the Ramue soda pop that comes in the glass bottle with a marble as the stopper! Horribly expensive in the Mid-West, but worth it for me. –Hands out more Botan Rice Candy and various others- write on!

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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2007
    You killed my Sasuke!!! You killed my Naru-chan.

    Anyway, I totally didn't expect you to bring back Naruto this way (you are going to bring him back aren't you?). Hehee...Kyuubi is good after all.

    However, wouldn't Naruto be sad? He killed Sasuke the second time?! I don't think I can live on with such burden. He will be soooo sad.
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  • From serenagold on June 26, 2007
    Oh my. Cue the cheerleaders! (Fight! Fight! Fight!)
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  • From Ukagau on June 24, 2007
    Squeal- Thankies! It is a good story so why wouldn't I neh? I think I might have almost cried when Sasuke died. Innocent all along, then he f''ed up. -tear- But Neji isn't dead and Gaara will live, but will Naruto? In the end, I think the way the two went out was realistic. Even if there is nothing romantic, there is still a lot of history between the two and Sasuke would only accept dying by Naruto's hand. Nevertheless, I need closure!!! I think about this at work, so please do not let it eat away at me! Even if Naruto is dead, give a brief chapter on the aftermath, and Naji!!! He needs some loving. -Grin- And Gaara! What about him? What will he do without Naruto or how will he care for Naruto and fix him all up afterwards? I fee so bad for him and Naruto, but a lot for Gaara because he might think that it was his fault for not protecting Naruto. However, I could just be wrong. ^^

    The grammar was okay; I speed-read so grammar does not hit me in the face until about the fifth or sixth time. Good job! On the issue of Naruto seeming weak, I did not see it at all. Those three characters are strong, Naruto is not weak he has just been through a lot. -Hands you Poky and Botan Rice Candy- Its awesome, with an edible inner wrapper!
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  • From ANON - cjandre on June 22, 2007
    So I jus got caught up, and the fights were definitely exciting. I don't think you made Naruto any weaker than he has been in the manga/anime during really drawn out tough battles. My only question now is, will he live? And what's Gaara going to do without him?
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  • From EmoPandaManin on June 21, 2007
    WOW!!....just....Wow! I love your story I've followed it since the beginning, I'm sorry it took me until this chapter to review, but I couldn't figure out how it worked ^^;; Gomen...

    it would be really sad if you just ended it there, I would be a very sad fangirl if I couldn't at least know if Naruto lives or dies...

    I loved how your story captured my attention and kept it until the end, not many stories can do that, kudo's to you!!

    you are an amazing author! it would be so awsome if you wrote another Naru/Gaara story.....well best reguards.

    -manin-chan
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  • From serenagold on June 21, 2007
    Woo Hoo!!! Sasuke is fucking dead. Its about goddamn time. The prick.


    Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see how you conclude this.
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  • From ANON - MysteriousStranger on June 21, 2007
    This is the last chapter?!!? NO! I WANT AN EPILOGUE!! T.T One last moment between Gaara and Naruto please! Pwetty pwease! this fic is so great, it NEEDS an epilogue!
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  • From anapana83 on June 21, 2007
    NOOO!!!! I demand an epilogue/conclusion! That was a very good chap btw. I had a feeling Naruto would have to end it. Poor guy. I felt bad for Sasuke but i gotta say i feel worse for Naruto now. About Naruto being weak and stuff, i never felt that way. Then again ive never had gripe over that issue. You did good kid. Nice job!
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  • From ANON - Kimiko-kun on June 21, 2007
    *hmm, jus realised i havent written a review here, oh well, better late than never :D*

    this is the first good naruto fic ive read *its so damn hard to find a good story -_-*.i love the plot, plus its naruto and gaara,with a splash of over-possessive sasuke ^-^ *they did hook up a bit fast tho, but besides that i love it XD*

    as for chap. 33...you cant end it there! sasuke's dead n naruto's pretty much making out with death with the amount of injuries he's got! *nice death scene there by the way =)* i wanna kno what happens next! *the chap needs a grammar check tho,there's a few words out of place*
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  • From cynaga on June 21, 2007
    HEY! What happened to Naruto and Gaara? You can't stop here! (can you?)
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