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Reviews for I knew you would find me

By : VRon8899
  • From ANON - kawaiicrimsonkitsune on December 12, 2006
    ^^ Yay! You update fast and that makes me happy. And the people who are being mean to me should shut up cause everyone always ask fro the athors to hurry and update so you all better shut up and when a person reviews they are just telling the athor on what they think so NEH! But your doing a wonderful job and you are defiantly putting action in this and this keeps my interest. Can't wait for the next chapter =3
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  • From ANON - claire on December 11, 2006
    Update sooN!
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  • From ANON - kawaiicrimsonkitsune on December 11, 2006
    Yes much better ^^ Don't worry you aren't the only one having trouble writing a story. I'm writing two already and my spelling and grammar is horrible. But, now I have a beta but don't worry your doing great with your story and I hope you'll check mine out if you have enough time.
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  • From nekochannya on December 11, 2006
    btw... dont you dare change the tone of this you hear??? If somebody wants jokes and actions tell them to go find a movie or something. YOu dont hurry up action, you dont force comedy... it just flows... so if your characters dont feel like being funny... that's fine. Just dont go against the natural flow of the story... there are people that appreciate the effort put into words... I loved the action of that almost fight between them.. it was full of tension, nyan! Me likes a lot! Naruto's feelings and actions are just a bit confusing... when he orders people around. ONLY then... wonder if its planned... nyan... curious... well yeah... dont let those around you change your style...your grammar's good and your style crisp... like an apple. I like that, so dont change unless you want me to be very, very upset....
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  • From nekochannya on December 11, 2006
    whomever said that was boring really doesnt know art from a shopping list. I find those three chapters short and well developed... write more?
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  • From ANON - kawaiicrimsonkitsune on December 10, 2006
    Pretty boring. Sorry but you just need some more action and maybe some more comedy in it to keep our interest ok. I think you can do some good with this but just make it a lil more.... exciting. Other than that you just need to hurry and update now.
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  • From ANON - eien no ren on December 10, 2006
    interesting, not boring...if it was I wouldnt leave a review... hmmmm narugaara... make it good and I will give you cookies...ne?
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  • From ANON - DK on December 10, 2006
    I really like how you have this set out, Naruto feeling so guilty about killing Sasuke even though he knew that he loved him, Gaara would be the perfect person to make him forget or at least take away the guilt, please continue with this story.
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  • From ANON - Kkie on December 10, 2006
    Aaaw, sadness. I luffle it so far~
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