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Reviews for I knew you would find me

By : VRon8899
  • From ANON - tasukigirl on January 12, 2007
    Hrm. I've only read up to chapter 5 so far and I really like the story. What bothers me are the simple spelling and grammatical mistakes. You syntax is also strange. I like your story, but I recommend finding a beta. Perhaps you can try editing?
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on January 10, 2007
    I'm always happy to find a non-SasuNaru story (though I guess that's not completely true in this case since there was a little bit near the beginning and slightly scattered throughout). I especially love GaaNaru. I know a lot of people love SasuNaru because they say it's the most likely couple, but personally I think GaaNaru is just as likely, if not more so, because of the connection they have. Look at the chapter of the story when Gaara got captured by the Akatsuki. Assuming that there were no meetings between them in the two/three year gap, Naruto hadn't seen him since the chuunin exam/Sasuke retrieval mission. I think the fact that he was so passionate about saving Gaara says a lot. I like SasuNaru also, but I think it's just likely and possible that they could just be very good friends/like brothers as they could be lovers. But yea, enough of that.

    I wanted to address you A/N at the end of the chapter. I'm guessing that you were saying you ended the last chapter because you hadn't decided on the seme/uke issue, but it seems like Naruto was uke, at least in this case, because you mentioned a sore backside. But maybe I was reading too much into that. But personally, I would prefer to see it go both ways than for Naruto to be complete seme. There's been a personality shift in him in your story, but it just doesn't fit for me to see him as a seme. I think he's more an uke or an equal, especially with Gaara. I know Gaara has his issues, but I don't see him as being so... ______ (I can't think of the word but hopefully you get my meaning) that he can't bottom for someone. I actually see that being more Sasuke's thing which is why NaruSasu is just the weirdest thing to me, Sasuke just isn't realistic as an uke. I barely even see him sharing an equal position. Gaara doesn't strike me as being that hung up so and equal relationship seems very likely/possible in their case. Though of course, I do lean more towards Naruto being a bottom:)

    Anyways, I like what you've written so far. I like the interactions between Gaara and Naruto. And I also find his interactions with the other parts of the 'Rookie Nine+ Team Gai' interesting. I think you can feel the changes in him just through his interactions with them and how they differ from interactions before. I can't wait for your next update and for how Gaara and Naruto are going to work out this relationship. Will be a bit difficult with the villages being far apart and them both being leaders.
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  • From ANON - Aliix..x on January 10, 2007
    Yaaay Naruto's Going Back To Him Apparent Normal Self GoodGood =] ooooh Does Neji Like Out Favourite Blong Hokage Too.....Hmmmm...Great Story...Can't Wait For The Update.
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  • From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on January 10, 2007
    Yeah, we know you are mean!! J/p/ But seriously, a wise way to go about it if you weren't sure about our couple's err..designated positons. Anyway, i liked the chapter. Naruto is unsure of what to think about it all, and considerng his previous train of thoughts it makes perfect sense. Thumbs up. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Hello on January 09, 2007
    Nice update. I can't wiat for next. Aww, I wonder who's the uke.
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  • From ANON - Ukagau on January 09, 2007
    _O_ ohhh my! ^^ *waits* What more can I say? Reading between History chapters.....its...its a good study thing..yeah...relives the..uhh...mind? *Cough* Continue on and what ever you decide on the uke/seme is fine with me...though...Garaa is very dominate...>_>...he dosn't seem like anything else...but...up to you neh? Gambatte!!!!
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  • From ANON - mistress of yaoi on January 08, 2007
    damn you had to end it there? This is my favourite naruto pairing and its been a while since i have found a decent fic. great work please continue soon
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  • From ANON - kkk on January 08, 2007
    thanx for making gaara a great lover ever thought it's his first time. pls let naruto be the uke. i luv gaara too much. thanx (x1000)
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on January 07, 2007
    ah come one, thats a horrible place to end it. i want more damn it...please...Ill bake you cookies.
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  • From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on January 07, 2007
    Funny how writing works...if it was hard for you, you sure as hell gave no indication of it in the ending result! That was an awesome start. FINALLY. Anyway, it was worth it, and you left us hanging! Personally, i wouldn't mind Gaara being seme or uke, cuz out of Gaara's inexperience i could see Naruto letting him do one or the other. So whatever anyone else says is fine by me i guess. Just tally up the votes and whoever has more votes well you know the deal. Or...if you wanna be REALLY nice you could have them take turns! Just a thought. Anyway tight work, update soon!
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  • From ANON - Hello on January 07, 2007
    What? Leaving it there? Wah, more Naruto and Gaara time... please?
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  • From nekochannya on January 07, 2007
    evil evil evil evil... the widdle kitty wanted to see the whole lemon... Yeah, there is a pervert inside me... I liked 'innocent' Gaara... very much. More?
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  • From nekochannya on January 07, 2007
    evil evil evil evil... the widdle kitty wanted to see the whole lemon... Yeah, there is a pervert inside me... I liked 'innocent' Gaara... very much. More?
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  • From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on January 03, 2007
    Another good chapter. So looks like they are getting somewhere. The anticipation is killng me lol. I'm just glad Naruto seems willing. All i can say is, SMUT SMUT SMUT SMUT! Lol update soon .
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  • From ANON - Hello on January 03, 2007
    Yay, love this chappie, but I'm going to love the next. Don't worry, I like the smut parts a lot. XD I'll look forward to some Nar/Gaa action!
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