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By : VRon8899

From ANON - Bookworm51485 on January 21, 2007
I dunno how I missed the last update, but at least I got to read 2 chapters this time around, yay:) Anyways moving on, I'd thought the relationship between Neji and Naruto was more Neji's one-sided feelings, and I guess they are, but 'fuck buddies'. I hadn't expected that but it's definitely interesting. It's good though that they had a talk and it feels like Neji's moving past them somewhat, or starting to. I like your portrayal of Neji, he's jealous and angry but he's not a bad guy. I've noticed that in a lot of SasuNaru stories they like to put him down to build Sasuke up, make him an evil bastard, and I know this isn't a SasuNaru story, but it's an easy pattern to fall into. So yay for Good Neji, because in the end while he may be a bit of a conceited ass at times he's not a bad person.

Naruto and Gaara: I hope they figure (or you I guess:D) a way to work out their relationship. It would be sad to see another 'celebrity couple' break up because of distance:D You know there's something else I felt I wanted to say but I am blank right now, damn. Well if I remember I'll come back

But before I finish, pairings for Neji. When I think of the part of the one chapter, Shino comes to mind as a possible pairing for Neji given his coming after Neji and talking to him while he was watching Naruto.
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From ANON - Sancta on January 21, 2007
Honestly the only one that I can tolerate being with Neji other then Naruto or Garra is Shikamaru :grins: Though if you wanted to make it a threesome :evil smirk:
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From ANON - Zetsumi on January 19, 2007
Oh, thanks for the acknowledgement! Yay me! I still don't like Neji pushing himself at Naruto. He belongs with Gaara, you damned brat! So back off! *takes a deep breath before he throttles Neji* Now then, are you still looking for a beta? I'd be more than happy to fulfill that role for ya. Just let me know, 'kay?
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From anapana83 on January 19, 2007
Wow, i really like what you've done with this story. Good job. I'm wondering whats gonna happen here with this whole Neji, Naruto, Gaara thing. Update soon.
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From ANON - Ukagau on January 19, 2007
AGGGG!!!! -Kills the log in page then pouts- That is getting old real quick like. -Eats you cookie...more like gobbles actually- =D So that�s why Neji is all messed up around Naruto...he...heheh...Gaara and Neji really don't like each other. I really liked this chapter; it let me know what was actually going on with Neji. I feel bad for Naruto though; he still isn't completely over Sasuke is he? Now Gaara and Neji like him (Though I suspect Neji won't do anything...O_o....) I can't wait for another update!!! WOOT! I always check your stories before I go to work that way I'm happy...which at work I'm usually not but this story makes me happy. -Gives your special brownies and cookies-
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From MichiyoInue on January 15, 2007
YATTA! a review for the story! it was great I missed two updates, thanks to school, and well planing for j-con! I am so going to be there this year! ie. jealous Neji! awesomness! I cant wait for more!
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From Bookworm51485 on January 15, 2007
Ay, they'd made life so difficult what that 'Must be logged in' rule now. I hate logging in:'( *sigh* Oh well. This time I really am gonna be short. I just wanted to say YAY for Gaara, I'm glad they're back together and also I like the little hints of Neji's feelings that you put into the chapter. Like the part where Naruto was sleeping and Neji was tempted to touch, but he said that Naruto made the situation clear to him before. Like he'd made a move but was rebuffed. He can't be too happy about the situation with Gaara now. He tried to get Naruto but Naruto said no but now Gaara's come in and seemed to get Naruto so easily. I imagine that those eyes at the end could be Neji's, though they could be someone else also. Exciting, I can't wait for your update.
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From Ukagau on January 15, 2007
AHH! I have to wait!? Oh well, I guess I can have a bit of patience neh? Neji keeps confusing me, putting me on the edge. Clearly, he cares for the Hokage, but does he care for him more then he should? No character, by the way, screams OOC. At the same time however, it has been forever since I have watched the show or read the manga. You do a good job in my opinion and are one of the better more�..hmm�.-thinks-�originally refreshing authors of this particular topic. �WOOT for vocab!- I�m glad Gaara is back around Naruto even if it is a meeting of all the Kages because he might sleep better? I have one more issue I swear then I will hit enter and let you read this!! At the end of the latest chapter, Naruto and Gaara are away from the group enough to have privacy. Who were those two sets of eyes�..Neji�that�s a obvious guess but..arg�I hate waiting for something that I thoroughly enjoy reading!! I think I found only a few tense problems in this section but nothing that hurts the reading�and I suck at tense so I should NOT　 be talking =D �HUG- love your work!!!

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From ANON - eien no ren on January 15, 2007
Good chapter... nice and satisfying... keep up the good work, nyan! Evil plot bunnies be gone! *chants madly* nyah! I will continue reading even if you kill kakashi... but you better be prepared for my pained screams, nyah!!
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From ANON - Kaze on January 12, 2007
Only just noticed that this has been updated, but am looking forward to all the new chapters I've missed.

I'll write a proper review once I'm done

~ Kaze
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From nekochannya on January 12, 2007
wonderful story so far... I like it a lot... please continue, ne? There is hope still for Naruto, nyah... Anko died... that's sad, but then... necessary. Just dont kill anybody else... ne? Makes me cry to see that... but yes, it was a great pair of chapters for me... and the smut was very nice... nyan! so, continue!
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From ANON - Ukagau on January 12, 2007
....*dies from suspense*...not fair! I want to know why the group is after him...I want to know!! please!!! *sniff* And Gaara should be there to help protect Naru right? I wonder why Neji dosn't like Gaara at all and maybe not for the obvious reasons. I didn't see any major problems in your story that stood out at first. Mayhaps a fewer smaller ones but no one can be perfect. Novels from great authors sometimes still have mistakes and are constantly being fixed and edited. I do have to say I love the interaction with Naruto and his guards. Naruto not wanting protection and the guards refusing to leave...just like Naruto. I do want to know what is going on with the strange group of Ninjas. One question though, is the kyuubi still inside Naruto? Or does he just have ALOT more control over it? I'm sorry I'm pretty sure you have already explained this earlier so sorry for the trouble. Great chapter and keep up the hard work!! Gambatte!!!
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From ANON - AnA La PaNa83 on January 12, 2007
Aww so he misses Gaara, in his own way. I like where this is going. The prisoners leaving though doesnt sound good. Whats gonna happen? Update soon.
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From ANON - Bookworm51485 on January 12, 2007
NOOOOOOO!!!!! ANKO!!!!!! They didn't show her often but I love her character:'( Now I'm sad *sigh*

Anyways, I'm glad you didn't mind my long-winded review. I do that sometimes, just kind of get on a roll and just find it hard to stop. I don't think I'll be doing that today, not feeling very great (I'd say why but it would probably be oversharing;D).

I wonder if Sasuke realized that this would be happening now when he pushed for Naruto to kill him, since it seems that they are doing this because of Sasuke's death. A bit stupid in my opinion, to go through all this trouble for a guy who wanted to die.

I have to say I like Naruto pining for Gaara, it's cute. I hope he'll get to see him again though how that would work out I wonder. I really don't envy them completely though, that's going to be a difficult relationship to keep going. Living in two distant villages, both leaders of said villages, but needed in said villages. Long absences would be difficult, though I do remember reading a story where Gaara and Naruto were together. They both remained leaders but went back and forth between villages, on one month and the other the next and while they were gong the had someone act in the absence. I don't know how realistic that would be though. And then of course, there is the option of one giving up the position of leadership but which one? Complicated, but I can't wait to see how they work it out.

I liked the interaction with Neji, of course:D I love Neji, he's actually the wallpaper on my computer. He's so awesome, I don't know why some people don't like him. Anyways, I know it might just be genuine suspicion but somehow Neji's reactions of Gaara's pursuit of Naruto makes me wonder if he isn't harboring some feelings of his own. That would definitely be interesting:D

Anyways, I guess I did manage a relatively long review:D Go Me!! Anyways again (you'll notice that's my favorite word) I can't wait until your next update to see more. Maybe we'll get to see Gaara again, YAY (he's my other favorite and as soon as I find an awesome picture of him like I have of Neji he's going on my laptop). Now I just need a third computer to put Itachi on.
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From ANON - Sancta on January 12, 2007
Jerking me around is not very nice. But I loved the smut and can't wait to read more.
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