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By : VRon8899
  • From Zigana on February 15, 2007
    What the hell happens? Is Sasuke really still alive like Gaara is being to think? Are the other Kage's that dumb? Ahh! Not enough sleep, too engrossed in this story.
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  • From tasukigirl on February 15, 2007
    I like your story. There are few Naru/Gaara fics out there and I'm glad to see yours out there. My only suggestion is to get a second beta. There are still problems with your text. Some words are used incorrectly, some sentences have syntax problems and your descriptions/dialogue is confusing at times.

    I look forward to your future chapters. ^^
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  • From Ukagau on February 14, 2007
    That was.........hot. -cough- HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -cough cough- yup! I will thank both of you for the stories! ^_- The interaction between the Kages' is interesting, I don't know much about the other villages (never stayed up with the series enough) to know who is who but it seems plausible to me neh? Smut was hot. Cheers for you once more. Still, umm, if anyone ever gets a hold of your computer there going to be shocked yeah? Anyways. You seem to be getting better at writing and without REALLY proof-reading it I can't tall any grammar mistakes once more (I read really fast, almost skimming fast cause I want to know what happens so bad so I tend not to catch a lot of things that I should.) This is partly why I get confused sometimes, so sorry in advance. I wish I could do actual helpful comments but not tonight. I hope you have a great Valentines day (If you celebrate it that is).
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  • From ANON - Sands on February 13, 2007
    I find it difficult to get into this story. I can't believe that such an incompetent would be left in charge of konoha for however many years it took. This story would be great...if Naruto wasn't Hokage--yeah yeah, I know you want to make him appear like a powerful and romantic figure but he comes across as a dork and your hand (the author) is apparent in the manipulation of the story.

    Plus, what's with Gaara's sand being able to restrain the red chakra when Naruto 'lost control'? As far as I understood from the manga and anime, that's the one thing that can defeat his sand. But Meh~ Just thought I'd leave some feedback and tell you why I didn't like your story...if you care. >_>

    ~sands
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  • From ANON - slytherinsexaddict on February 11, 2007
    ooooo I lubbers ur story! can't wait for the next update.

    Make Neji happy .. I lubbers him too. ^_^

    ~VIVA*LA*SMUT~
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  • From ANON - Kaze on February 09, 2007
    I haven't been able to review due to AFF.net's new policies, but just to let you know that I'm still reading and enjoying. There really aren't enough Gaara and Naruto fanfics out there and this one is really well written.

    ~ Kaze
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  • From ANON - oztan on February 08, 2007
    So cool! Can not wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mey on February 07, 2007
    Noooooo that "Together" was too sweet... auuuuu >_______
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  • From Ukagau on February 07, 2007
    Soo close. Naruto must be careful from now on neh? The Kages are not afraid for their citizens if Naruto stays within their walls? Even if the Nins were only after Hokage it still would seem odd. But, then again, the Kages could team up right? I find it strange that Neji hesitated and mayhap the other group knows what’s going on? This chapter, for me, seemed to go fast as if building up to a miniature climax. I rather liked it. At first, the living corpse part confused me on whether shikumaru was killed or the nin was, but as I read on, I realized that the nin was. Your writing is getting better and better and you can tell that you have a beta, I'm so happy ^_^ Keep up the good work! (And stay on top of your homework, I got too far behind -cry- and now must scramble to get caught up so don't do that! but keep writing as well!)
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  • From anapana83 on February 07, 2007
    Ahhhh, yes i get this. And you have not thrown me off. The raging fangirl in my mind wnats to say that the teme isn't dead. But then how is it that he didn't die if that were true? Ahhh, i'd rather read and find out what the deal really is, and i can't wait. This NarutoxGaara thing warms my heart. Gaara's gonna have to keep a close eye on him. At least they are together. I still feel a lil bad for Neji, but Shikmaru's slinkin around lol, so i'm not that mad. Update soon.
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  • From Digitalkisses on February 07, 2007
    And the plot thickens! what a great story this is, suck detailed information about all that is going on and I love the developing relationship between Gaara and Naruto, can't wait till you update again :)
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  • From ANON - oztan on February 03, 2007
    This is really good. Can not wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Cucumber Monger on February 02, 2007
    I am soooooooooo sorry because i just triple posted this, but i didn't get to add the URL to my page thingey cuz the review thingies have a word amount limit. Please forgive me!!!!! T-T
    *cries self to death* oh, and BTW i'm on a sugar high, so almost nothing i say will make sense, please bear with me, there are no pauses in my speach, i'm too hyper.

    Sincerely,


    ~Cucumber monger

    P.S. here is the URL to my page thingey!
    http://www.groups.msn.com/GreenChoclateBunnies/yaoi.msnw
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  • From ANON - Cucumber Monger on February 02, 2007
    I am sorry because i think i just double posted this, but i forgot the URL to my page thingey, please forgive me!!!!! T-T
    *cries self to death* oh, and BTW i'm on a sugar high, so almost nothing i say will make sense, please bear with me, there are no pauses in my speach, i'm too hyper.


    HIII!!!!!!! watashi wa nihongo wo hanashimasu! ehehe! well, a fair bit anyways. have you ever written a fic in all nihongo?
    i wonder, well, anyways, i luvves the smexyness!!!!! WEWT! LEMONS!!!!!!!! hehe, yous gunna kill me for this but...

    STRAWBERRY MOUNTED LEMONS!!! XDDDDDDD!!!!!! woot!
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  • From ANON - Cucumber Monger on February 02, 2007
    HIII!!!!!!! watashi wa nihongo wo hanashimasu! ehehe! well, a fair bit anyways. have you ever written a fic in all nihongo?
    i wonder, well, anyways, i luvves the smexyness!!!!! WEWT! LEMONS!!!!!!!! hehe, yous gunna kill me for this but...

    STRAWBERRY MOUNTED LEMONS!!! XDDDDDDD!!!!!! woot!
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