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Reviews for Icha Icha Paradise

By : pieterscheeringa
  • From Tleilaxu on December 05, 2007
    Dude you should put it to book form LOL and get it published, perhaps even make a hentai out of it. NICE work man!
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  • From raiykazuma on November 19, 2007
    The story was enjoyable... but I do have a few problems with it. First, although the story is sufficiently long, it is still incomplete. The part where Konan, the female Akatsuki member, talks to Naruto (and all subsequent scenes) is cut off and then skips to the ending orgy. Second, again it is long but unnecessarily so... reiterating Fyberness' review, there are some details that you can do without... I know you worked hard on this and it would be a pity if it was never truly finished. I look forward to you finishing your masterpiece... Good luck!
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  • From Lunchbox on October 09, 2007
    tis a pure goldmine of smut... I LOVE IT!!!! Wow, its was long but worth the the read, this is puts a lot of other storyies to shame, this is a masterpiece... wow thats all I can say... wow...
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  • From Blade1986 on October 03, 2007
    All I can really say is...WOW! This is one of the biggest and vest of your stories so far. I look forward to seeing more work like this in the future.
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  • From Fyberness on September 25, 2007
    Alright, first things first.

    I commend and respect you on writing a story that involves Naruto and the more interesting part of the female cast. However, I have a few gripes and they really stop me from enjoying what you write.

    Mainly... You really need to stop explaining everthing with what they feel. He felt this because... The feeling was like... The feelings he was getting were... This happened because of what he felt and that caused...

    And so on, and so on. You keep repeating it so much, and it seems you want to explain so much on what happens and what sensations you'd like characters to undergo, that you let it interfere with a solid flowing story.

    It's truly a pity.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2007
    I do think that this is your masterpiece, but I don't believe that your best work is behind you so keep at it and great job
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  • From EragonFanatic2007 on September 18, 2007
    This must have taken you a good while to finsh this up. After i read it i was like damn. For some goddamn fucking reason i can't read the fucker and it's pissing me off. I getting ready to say fuck it and take it off my favorites if it keeps doing ths goddamn bullshit.
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  • From Phoenix477 on August 30, 2007
    You are the king of hentai
    There were a few grammar errors nothing big though
    I would like to thank you for this amazing piece of work
    I hope you make a sequel
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  • From AngelicChild on August 15, 2007
    Oh my god man how long did it take you to write this?
    It's really good.
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  • From shinjithegoodsharer on April 27, 2007
    I love this story, but i have to say that the comment "(I’d like to have her as a girlfriend… a girl who doesn’t mind someone watching porn… that is the stuff that dreams are made off… or more likely, that girls are not made off… just put on a porn tape and they’ll instantly label you as some sick pervert… makes you wonder what they will say the moment you put in La Blue Girl and they see the tentacles… then it would be like OMFG! YOU HYPER PERVERT! I’d laugh my ass off though…)" is mostly inacurate. My pet Angel, her sister Michelle, her best friend Anna, and all 16 of my sisters have actually sat down and watched porn tapes WITH me after they'd walked in. In my sister's cases while saying "What the hell?! You didn't invite us?!". While they're not sluts, i'll admit my sisters are nymphos, and my fiancee willingly lives as my personal sex pet. So, while i find that comment funny in an anime universe sorta situation, i don't think it's accurate... or you only know a bunch of prudes who've never gotten anything GOOD in bed. :-P Keep up the awesome fic work!
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  • From JudgeofRokubi on March 12, 2007
    This is a great story. I love it with a passion.
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  • From Backlash on December 31, 2006
    There are many many things I can say about this. The first and most important is that this was the single greatest thing that I have ever read, seen, had the privlage of reading, ect. This goes to show why you are my favorite author and why I go nuts just thinking of how you can come up with this stuff. It's all just so damn good. It' just brings a tear to my eye, I'm serious thats tears on the keyboard not.... well you get the idea. I love this story, I love all of your stories, I love your writeing and I just have to say thank you for everything that you have done and wrote.

    PS THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL YOU HAVE DONE
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  • From ANON - Church on December 30, 2006
    FINALLY WOOOOOHOOO!!!! I get the chance to read this great creation and also finish it in a long ass time! Words probably cant express how much i feel but ey im writing it alrdy so wat the hell. Kyuubi is my fav! :P such a hot bitch indeed amd Ayka dang if der was a pic of her or something id want to see that man and that titty fuck scene with her was out of thid world since she still had her top on. Tsunade in chocolate ho lee shiet who wulda thot of dat man? well you did but godamn it was good. The BDSM thing wiht Anko and Kurenai was way awesome since the way Anko serviced Naruto is a mmeorable scene embedded in my mind. the orgy was surprising hella long and good but whos complaining its a great scene. This story is beyond awesomeness and rocks my socks off to dust! id give this over the scoring scale over w/e it is! Nice job hope that in the future something like this will happen again from oyu!
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  • From ANON - Church on December 30, 2006
    FINALLY WOOOOOHOOO!!!! I get the chance to read this great creation and also finish it in a long ass time! Words probably cant express how much i feel but ey im writing it alrdy so wat the hell. Kyuubi is my fav! :P such a hot bitch indeed amd Ayka dang if der was a pic of her or something id want to see that man and that titty fuck scene with her was out of thid world since she still had her top on. Tsunade in chocolate ho lee shiet who wulda thot of dat man? well you did but godamn it was good. The BDSM thing wiht Anko and Kurenai was way awesome since the way Anko serviced Naruto is a mmeorable scene embedded in my mind. the orgy was surprising hella long and good but whos complaining its a great scene. This story is beyond awesomeness and rocks my socks off to dust! id give this over the scoring scale over w/e it is! Nice job hope that in the future something like this will happen again from oyu!
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  • From ANON - the big cheese on December 20, 2006
    Oh my giddy aunt, that took me two weeks to read through, and just to make it clear my penis is happy with your performance, my penis is also saying that he would like you to keep up the good work ^^

    Now poor Flossy's dead and never called me mother
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