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Reviews for Icha Icha Paradise

By : pieterscheeringa
  • From ANON - kane on December 19, 2006
    this is one of your best works yet. Long, good plot, and good writing. It's great
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  • From ANON - cpotaylor on December 19, 2006
    my god man. couldn't have split it up at least a little it took me 2 hours to read this and im a speed reader, but otherwise it was an excellent story that you have written. good job!
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  • From ANON - diadia on December 15, 2006
    your story is WAAAAY too long and sucks ass dude
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  • From kyuub92 on December 14, 2006
    U R A GOD !!!!!

    Only thing that i could find wrong with this holy tome of porn is, its a bit to big, making it in to su chapters would b easier to break read. It took me over a week to finsh the incomplete version... Please finsh the story. I need my fix man !!!!
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  • From ANON - Seraph on December 13, 2006
    The only problem with this fic/orgy is the grammar. Now if you will excuse me, I must take care of all this white "paint"
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  • From ANON - togepi on December 12, 2006
    first of all, this is not a little story, i think 225,000 words count more than "a little".
    second, ABSOLUTELY FUCKING GREAT STORY, the amount of sex and different characters make this story mind-boggling... great stuff, u've always been a premier author of Naruto adultfanfiction but with this, you've simply outdone urself and everybody else in this realm. Good Job. No no, strike that, BLOODY FUCKING FANTASTIC JOB!!! Do keep up the good work...=)

    togepi
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  • From ANON - twistedmetalcheater on December 12, 2006
    really fucking long very good and descriptive sex scenes i think it is one of the best ive read so far.
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  • From ANON - Kiyouma on December 12, 2006
    THANK YOU! I'm an avid reader of your work and now i have something that will be worth reading over the holidays. THANK YOU!
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  • From ANON - Bob on December 11, 2006
    This story is so good, it's the best i have ever read, and i have read a lot lol
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  • From ANON - Juraijin1 on December 11, 2006
    Three days. It took me three days to work my way through this masterful piece of work. Every second brought me perverse joy(the best kind)and seeing err...reading Naruto ascend unto greatness was a perfect end.

    Now, if you'll excuse me I need new pants, fluids and protein.

    keep up the wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - chaoticavenger on December 10, 2006
    that was great i give ya 5/5

    although the ending coulda been better oh well
    ja
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  • From ANON - Josh on December 10, 2006
    Hey DGOC Just got done reading this long and crazy story.. It took me a few days to get it all in but the only things I found wrong were some words being misspelled and some of your sentences were a bit hard to understand.. Other than that I got to say I was glad I had time to read this story and I hope to see an update of your stories if you make a story like that ever again you might as well become an author and make your own characters and your own world. Hope to hear from you in the future a loyal reviewer JTB8834@aol.com
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  • From ANON - White Itachi on December 09, 2006
    Can you make a Naruto x http://www.animecrossings.com/narutomovie-5.jpg Lemon chapter?
    Maybe even a threesome whit Yukie but centered more on the Snow Kunoichi.

    What about Ino (You could have her be injured on a mission and the only way to save her is to have Kyuubi bound her to Naruto as his (sex) slave or something)?

    Great job whit this fic *bows down to the Lord of Lemons*. It is the Ultimate Lemon Fic :D Hope to see more like this in the future.

    P.S.: How about a Harry x Lily fic but different then the ones on your Y!G, something even more uniqe than the ones over there.

    Thank you a lot Lord-Sama.

    Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - steven on December 08, 2006
    Dude this thing is feaking awesome, get this thing stuffed in a little orange book ready for distribution.
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  • From ANON - Chaotic celestial on December 08, 2006
    The story is one of the BEST storieds I've ever seen And I hope you keep up the great stories
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