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Reviews for Broken Seal

By : Vague
  • From promise2003 on December 05, 2006
    OMG!!! Yay for Naruto and Gaara...I am so happy to see the small influx of Naruto and Gaara fics starting to trickle in on the site. I love this pairing, it is simply my OTP (one true pairing), and I squeal every time a new fic goes up.

    I think this is a really good start, a bit short (that isn't a bad thing) to fully judge a fic on, but I am excited. I saw a few errors (but lordy my fics are riddled with them too, it is so difficult to catch your own errors). If you would like some help (I'm rather busy), but I'd love to offer my beta skills to you. As I said above, I miss error in my own fics a lot, but I'm pretty good about catching them in other's fics. If you would like an extra set of eyes to check your stuff just let me know (if it means I would get to read your chapters before anyone else it would soooo cinch that deal). I'm on the internet ALL the time, so just drop me a line (email is on my author's page)
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  • From ANON - E on December 05, 2006
    OMG! I love it.

    I thought it was going to be Iruka until the last few lines but... -Sniffles-

    Write moooreee! Feed the bunny! -Points to a pink rabbit.-
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  • From ANON - Mako-chan on December 05, 2006
    Yay! A Gaara/Naruto fic! How exciting! *does little fangirl dance* I found your writing very good. Will definitely keep a close watch on this one.
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  • From ANON - lilithwolf on December 05, 2006
    waaah! i love it i love it I LOVE IT! and i simply cannot wait for you to write more! this is sooo cute! and if you need a beta, I offer my services.
    km1429@txstate.edu
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