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Reviews for Kitsune no Yomeiri

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From ANON - Yaoi-Gi-oh on January 05, 2007
    Fantastic story and keep up with those updates, I want to see more!!!!!!

    As for the little input in the end of chapter 13... it will be of course SasuNaru coupling (except if will be any of one side SakuSasu), KakaIru (Hell yeah in this story....ppppplz!)... and from Naruto's attitude from the little paragraph, I'd say he'd be the seme, but if you think about it Naruto has more femenin looks than Sasuke, and well it will be abit(if not alot) out of his character from anime (but then again this fanfic)wouldn't be weird?

    So my vote will be: Sasuke= seme, Naruto=uke/ in case of Irakaka--> Kakashi= seme, Iruka= uke!!
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  • From ANON - emeraldstar0022 on January 05, 2007
    omg...amazing story....i have been waiting so long to read these chapters...i was beginning to get worried...i loved how you ended it...so cute...Uchiha Naruto...awwwwwwwwwww :D...thank u for writing this...oh and ur upcoming fic...sound so good cant wait...and for the one about sasuke...so pair him with naruto...and only as the seme...we all know naruto loves being dominated...and make such a great uke too..hehe...anyway cant wait for you next stories!!!

    ja
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  • From ANON - SharinganEyes on January 05, 2007
    -tear- oh it was wonderful I'm so happy right now. I loved that they got matching earrings and everything! hehe also I think Kakshi would make a good dad, for Sasuke.
    I'm sure you;ll explain as to why they have different last names and all. Also...well I know it's over done but I can't help but be a fan of SasuNaru.
    I mean you do such wonderful work with them as a pairing..and well Damnit I want a Seme Sasuke. All the Naru-seme fans are starting to rise up and voice that Naruto shall no longer be uke anymore...and well... I same damn them XP cause sasuke's sexy on top!
    So yep Seme Sasuke! Woot! and...well...Uchiha comes before Uzumaki in the abc's right?!?!?!

    So why shouldn't Sasuke be on top. Also I know Naruto comes before Sasuke...but! In Japan you go by last name first so boo! Mwhahahaha Sasuke-seme forver!!!

    Hehe okay my rant's over. Great job, love the story, can't wait to read the others!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2007
    Aww this chapter was perfect in every way, the emotions, descriptions, reactions,the circumstance and the two being together with no
    pretences. It was sooo worth the wait and I can see why it is your favourite, it must have been a pleasure to write.

    I love the lemon, hehe,seriously Kudos! You are an incredible writer XD.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2007
    Did I ever tell you how much I love your Fic!
    I am so thrilled with this latest instalment! I'm smiling all over my face now lol.

    So the important people to Naruto now know his true identity, its about time, I am
    glad its has been taken so well, and well I am pleased that Sasuke called off the
    wedding and the Sakura was put in her place. Damn those villagers though grrrrrrrr.

    Wow I had no idea Sasuke had been following Naruto its a good thing he was there
    to catch him before the fall! He was very brave before those foxes, I would have
    been terrified in his place but such are things we do in the name of love.

    I love everything, superb job

    Happy New Year To You as well :D


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  • From ANON - wendyghost on January 05, 2007
    finaly an update i was looking for ur story! of course my fave couple is always sasunaru! so my vote is for them
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  • From ANON - mike~ on January 05, 2007
    wah, double update!

    thx so much for updating both chapters (and thx to the 30 something reviews that prompted it!) i loved both chapters dearly!

    for the previous chapter, i was squeeling with glee when sasuke cancelled the wedding! i was like "wohoo! finally!" how long has sasuke suspected that naruto was in disguise? was it from when he first saw the bracelet? then did he recognize naruto for who he was instead of an illusion when he was drunk? what about when he woke up? why didn't he stay beside him - or did he set off to set things right and cancel the wedding right then and there - but couldn't he have waited for naruto to wake up first? maybe he was still a little bitter than naruto didn't tell him the secret earlier. but then, was he being sarcastic in the dungen when the vassal called "naruto-sama" to confirm his identitiy for sure?

    i loved how you introduced sasuke at the end of the former chapter, i can just imagine the smirk on his face when he proclaimed that he was the "betrothed"... lol, that was really great!

    and the latter chapter was just as amazing! it gave me a WAFF all over - i mean, what better way than to confirm the eternal love for one another than making love in the detention cell and grunting out marriage proposals?? lol, it was great i tell ya! but i sorta didn't get the rain part, does that mean that the leaf ninjas that gathered outside were not invited to join in the ceremony? even tsunade and the rest? was sasuke really alright with giving up his itachi quest and his konoha ninja status? ... and as the "great lord's b!tch" what kind of duties will he be doing? as in, he's not gonna moop around all day, is he gonna rule alongside naruto?

    i really loved the binding/bonding part between sasuke and naruto- about sharing life and his life force, the change of the destiny was really nice too! the earings were a great touch and much more intimate than a normal wedding ring b/c it can't be removed!

    thx for writing this fic, i can't wait for your epilogue.

    oh, as for ur upcoming fics... my vote is that sasuke gets paired up w/ naruto! =)
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  • From on January 05, 2007
    I loved it!!!!
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  • From Fourthiv on January 05, 2007
    Aww! The ending to this story was wonderful! Great job!
    I'm also looking forward to reading Dost Thou Know and Untitled.
    As for the poll:
    NaruSasu! [uke sasuke! Yeah!]
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  • From ANON - lonelyreverance on January 05, 2007
    you made me wait an entire holiday for this fic i demand more......you tease
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  • From ANON - Exane on January 05, 2007
    YAY!! Naruto is pregnant! *happy~~*
    Sasuke better treat Naruto good at the village XDDD!!
    update again XDD
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  • From ANON - Kyo-nezumi on January 05, 2007
    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE I LOVE THIS STORY! I't's really well written
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  • From ANON - Kalariona on January 05, 2007
    I've been waiting ages for this, not that I can talk. This was really good. Quickly update. I want to see what happens next

    Rie
    xx
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2007
    great stuff, Sasuke finally has come to terms to be with Naruto, even if its not clear that he knows the other guy is naruto. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Sunset Serenity on January 05, 2007
    That was great! It was kinda romantic that Sasuke was the one escorting Naruto back to his village. He'll be in a delightful surprise when he finds out what's inside Naruto's tommy. Happy ending yeah!
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