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Reviews for Kitsune no Yomeiri

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From ladygizarme on January 08, 2007
    kyaaaa yay, wonderful finale! wonderful story all through, love love love!! thank you thank you thank you!!

    and as a post note, woot for sasUKE in this ending! i love when they share roles, and somehow the fact that sasuke as uke isn't as prevalant makes that even hotter ^__^

    oh yeah, final thought, was wondering what the boys' true eye colors turned out to be after their chakra settled?
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  • From ANON - zrina on January 08, 2007
    I absolutely adored the last chapter! I love how you ended it, it was fantastic!!!!
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  • From ANON - eirian on January 06, 2007
    WOOT!

    It's (nearly) finished! I love this fic. I hope the epilouge wraps up the leaf village thing. I'd sorta like to see one more confrontation with Sakura. The idea of Naruto telling Sakura they've already gotten married *and* he's pregnant amuses me.

    As for what I'd like to see worked on next, while both new ideas are interesting I'd really like to see more of Here's to the Fox. Like Kitsune no Yomeiri it's an absolutely fascinating and very original AU. I like how both stories take place in the actual Naruto world but twist the canon to something different. I admit that as a fantasy and ninja fan real world AUs interest me less.

    Good luck on whatever your next project is.
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  • From ANON - jenny on January 06, 2007
    It was a wonderful fic. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2007
    ohhh my god i love Kitsune no Yomeiri i cant wait to see if that the baby will be a boy or a girl! Will Itachi be making an appearance, just for sasuke to get revenge? and i vote for you untitled story that sasUKE! ^_^
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  • From ANON - PyroNeko on January 06, 2007
    Thank you for updating, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, I realy like your story & its going in a great direction

    For the untitled story, I think that Sasuke would be a great proud uke (not proud of being a uke, just a proud SOB that's a uke)
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  • From ANON - AreYouLonelyForMe on January 06, 2007
    Hey, it's me again! I just can't stay away....the story is just too good!! Sorry for not reviewing for so long I was spending time with my family and you know how that can be....took up most of my time. Anyways I really liked those last two chapters!!! I wonder if Naruto will have a boy or a girl.-is hoping that it's a boy...or maybe a twin boy and girl- I wonder what they'll look like...It would be funny if the baby ended up looking just like Naruto but had Sasuke's personality!! That would be a sight to see!! Know that Sasuke's threat didn't put me up to this review...Sasuke couldn't hurt me...he doesn't have the courage...-grins evilly- I can't wait until you next update!!! ^_-

    -Jason
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on January 06, 2007
    Oh my gosh! I was right; where you took the plot is sooo much better than where I thought it was going! That just goes to show why you’re the writer and I’m the reader. Anyway though, I’m ecstatic that you finished the fic, and it was positively wonderful. I think I have to agree with you that chapter 13 is one of the best things that you have ever written, at lest of what I have seen that is. The lemon was really…how should I put this? Sensuous, hot, and erotic should cover it I think. Also, the WAFF was great, and really refreshing. Everything else I’ve been reading lately has been steeped in way too much angst; and I can admit to the fact that more than anything I am a sucker for happy endings. Thanks for delivering another great fic (and educating me on the exact meaning of WAFF!). I’m curious though what else there could possibly be to have an epilogue? Well regardless I look forward to reading it.

    On the subject of your next work, to be honest the plot line involving Sasuke as a writer seems more interesting and original to me. I’ve seen too many of the whole “Sasuke and Naruto meet as children/teenagers and Naruto is able to make Sasuke ‘feel things’ and be happy” sort of thing. Not that I don’t have confidence in you that you could breathe new life into the plot and make into a really great fic, I just think that for someone of your caliber, you could do so much more with the second plot line. That’s just my opinion though. Oh and as a little note for future reference, I’m also a sucker for Naruto/Sasuke, with Sasuke being uke that is. After them it’s Neji/Gaara. I know you’re not doing a fic with that pairing, but I just thought I’d throw that in there under the FYI category. Anyway though, great job and I look forward to the epilogue and whatever you come out with next. My best wishes for you and your writing.

    P.S. By the way, whatever happended to "Here's to the Fox"? Did you abandon that fic?


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - **Hinata** on January 05, 2007
    AWWWWWW, cute!!! I really should have read this story sooner but mpreg kinda scares me just a bit, lol yeah... but this was awesome despite the OOCs I loved it and I say, SASUKE SHOULD GO WITH NARUTO CUZ THEY GO TOGETHER BEST!! Oh and... well, I really like Naruto being the Uke, but as long as they're together is all goes :D Great story, thanks for writing it!

    Hinata-chan
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  • From ANON - Endless Rain on January 05, 2007
    Ohoho~awesome chapter and thank you for updating so quickly! I love that first idea of yours, it sounds so awesome. I can't wait to read it! The second idea sounds very intriguing. I would love for the couple to be NaruSasu, with Sasuke being the uke. Now there's a challenge~uke Sasuke IC. And seme Naruto? ~swoons~
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  • From ANON - Dilara on January 05, 2007
    aaaaawesome ^^ damn, these kind of fanfics make my drawing inspiration kick kill me xD
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  • From ANON - JDSakuraKLi on January 05, 2007
    Ahhh~so very good! I've been following this story all the way through, and let me tell you....I am very pleased with the way it turned out! Kudos to you! As for the story you are thinking of with Sasuke as a romance novelist, well personally it makes me very uncomfortable to see Sasuke in an uke position. He just seems like the ultimate seme to me...and also i'm a huge SasuNaru fan! But that's just my opinion
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  • From ANON - ghost-san on January 05, 2007
    Naruto.....or Shino...yeah...Thanks for the story. xDDD
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  • From ANON - airhead622 on January 05, 2007
    i'd like it if in the new story it was
    a sasunaru just caz i'm a huge fan
    i think they just really go together

    also just caz sasuke has uke in his name
    he shouldn't b on bottom
    mayb he could show naruto y he should b seme??
    >.
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  • From ANON - Allys on January 05, 2007
    Love the concepts - especially intrigued by the one where Sasuke is an author - Now, on to the voting - Sasuke and duh... NARUTO, if not Naruto I vote Neji, and as for the seme, uke question - a charmingly exuberant Naruseme to an always sexy SasUKE - I actually adore switch but ever since I read DARE by Monkey Lady (it's a oneshot and if you haven't seen it, totally check it out it's awesome) and of course Chasing Naruto, I've fallen TOTALLY in love with Naruto as seme.

    The Dare link just in case - http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600090366
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