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Reviews for Kitsune no Yomeiri

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From ANON - qwerty on July 10, 2007
    YAY! SO GOOD! I read this thing in one go and man, it was worth it! I LOVED the ending. So sweet and perfect!
    AMAZING JOB!!!!
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  • From Chria on July 09, 2007
    God, this story is glorious! Glo-ri-ous! Your Naruto is so badass! I thank you for finally getting it right that Naruto is all man, possessive as all hell, a power house, and I love his logic as well. HAHAHA I mean, if Naruto came clean to Sasuke in the beginning. Sasuke would have been like "hell yeah, baby!" and would have left the very first chapter and gotten married but Naruto's guilt trip and the fact he wouldn't let go of Sasuke made him do it the hard way. It was SO funny that I cracked up the whole day cause Naruto really has weird ass logic like that! I loved how his father throughout was like “WTF?!” cause he thinks like the rest of us. I felt he represented that. Great job. I just love it.
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  • From ANON - Kaity on May 31, 2007
    awesome story line!!! once i started reading, i couldn't stop...^.^
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  • From ANON - eirian on May 04, 2007
    Was rereading this and I still love it but I have a question. What made you choose the term yomeiri? While it apparently does mean marriage it's an obscure (and probably rarely used) term. In my Japanese studies Kekkon means marriage while kekkonshiki means marriage ceremony or wedding. I'm a Japanese major and this story is the first time I've run accross the term yomeiri. So I'm sorta curious about it. Did you grow up speaking Japanese?
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  • From ANON - Jessica on February 13, 2007
    I really enjoyed the concept of your story; very original! I like how you meld each character to make them your own, but kept their authenticity intact...I think towards the end you tried to tie up ~too~ many loose ends, but it was still entertaining to read...the only thing that truly bothered me was your overuse of the word "defection"...but I really loved watching the story unfold and relive all of the characters through this world; I also liked how you took time to develop the relationship between Naruto and Kyuubi-sama...it was really touching! Thank you for sharing! Ja! ^-^
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  • From ANON - narufan on January 14, 2007
    hey i love this story so much and itachi coming was so cool, i love u so much and please update ur other stories i enjoy reading them so much. hehe, k bye
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on January 14, 2007
    OMG!!! That was a really, really superb ending. I think I would have to say that that was the best WAFF ending that I have read thus far, completely devoid of tacky clichés or a slapdash, rushed conclusion. I also really liked it that you didn’t just write the ending in one time period, but rather stretched it out over Sasuke’s and Naruto’s life. It really gives a relatively short fic a real feeling of conclusion, and one that readers can be happy with.

    I think the only part I didn’t like was when Sasuke and Naruto met Sakura again in the forest. I expected a little more of a fight. I realize that people who are mentally ill are not always violent, but given Sakura’s personality, it seemed that she would try to fight Naruto for Sasuke. I also didn’t really like it that Kakashi seemingly randomly dropped out of the trees at just the right moment to take Sakura back to the village. If she had been waiting around for three months to try and “save” Sasuke, it would be more likely that, given that Kakashi is a great ninja, he would have gotten to Sakura much sooner.

    However, this is really only a minor complaint and not really a complaint either, more of an observation. Regardless, I am very pleased with this fic and am very excited that you finished it. It seems that authors these days like to start a great fic but then decide not to finish them more than half-way through them. It’s very frustrating for an avid reader such as myself. Anyway though, I have the bad habit of writing you books of your very own so I will stop here. I look forward to your future projects. My best wishes for you and your writing.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com

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  • From ANON - narufan on January 13, 2007
    such a good story, whenever u update i am always so happy i go stait to reading ur storys they are great love them !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Artemis-sensei on January 13, 2007
    *stretches and yawns* God, that was the greatest non-angst story I've read in ages! You're really good, Nomme. ^_^ I love the whole Naruto demon thing and geez, I hope my yaoi scenes coming up will be as good as yours. XD And I'm so glad you have Sasuke and Naruto sharing seme and uke roles. I believe they both can handle either role, so I love when other people put them into said roles to. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sunset Serenity on January 11, 2007
    Happy ending. Beautifully done. Congrad!

    Your new stories sound promising. About pairing, I read anything x Sasuke if the story is well written, including this one. My very favorite is ItaSasu and NejiSasu. I think many authors have given Naruto new personalities making him far more appealing than the original. Someone mentioned Chasing Naruto, which is a good example of what I meant.

    About your Itachi appearance, it was slightly on the OC side. Then, it was a bit brief to have a fair comment. It was appropriate nonetheless, and it did complete the story on Sasuke’s end regarding his lifetime goal.

    Ja ne! It has been an enjoying ride/read. Thank you so very much. - Sunset Serenity

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  • From ANON - masterLenx on January 09, 2007
    You know, I thought that that was a really sweet story. Thanks for writing it - I really enjoyed it, and I really needed a break from the world. Your fic did just the thing. Thanks a lot. ^_^ I hope you continue writing lovely stories just like this one!
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  • From ANON - NANA on January 09, 2007
    THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!! I LOVVEEEDDDD IT GREAT JOB!!! I will probably read alot of what you write now so be ready for the annoyance
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  • From ANON - XZanayu on January 09, 2007
    What a great ending!! Bravo!! Wonderful and awesome story!!!!
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  • From Fourthiv on January 09, 2007
    Wow. Again, you amaze me. I'm sad to see this story end for good, i had such fun reading it. I cant wait to read more of your work!
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  • From ANON - lo on January 08, 2007
    I liked the ending, that was fun. Nice work.
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