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Reviews for Kitsune no Yomeiri

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From ANON - Star on December 17, 2006
    The action was awesome. Techniques and everything. Loved the little lemony scene. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on December 17, 2006
    "Sorry for the evil cliffy"? Oh come now, you know you love them, and you know it makes your loyal readers unbearably anxious to read the next chapter. In reality, it's really a great literary technique, especially in this type of situation. It keeps readers coming back for more, even if it’s been a while in between updates. Although I must admit that cliffhangers do in fact drive me crazy, I do not deny the fact that as soon as I see you've updated, you better believe that I am reading the new chapter(s) ASAP.

    In regards to the actual chapter, I thought that it was rather interesting. I think the way you undid the curse marks on Anko and Sasuke was very clever. It would have been really disappointing if you had just had Naruto wave his hand over the marks (or something equally simple and lame), and then the curse marks would be gone. I like Naruto being strong and extremely powerful, but making him all-powerful would just seem overdone and bring the plot down a lot. However, you have great instincts for your writing so I am not very concerned about the plot or its characters. I was more so making an observation rather than anything else.

    Speaking of lemons though, I am definitely looking forward to it. I have read Shakespeare Was Never So Hot and that was positively sexy and yes, very HOT. I’m extremely curious to see if Naruto reveals his true identity to Sasuke before, during, or after the lemon. Oh well, I suppose I shall just have to wait and see. Until then, my best wishes for you and your writing.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - asds on December 17, 2006
    come lemon come!!

    Damn..You're Kazahaya is so smexy! :D

    I hope that Sasuke WILL finally make a decision regarding Sakura and Kazahaya's proposition! HEll....WHat he is even thinking now! Get the damn demon lord and get rid of the Pink haired Teletubby
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  • From ANON - Hello on December 17, 2006
    Aww, leaving a cliffy? Love this chapter can't wait for the next. :D
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  • From ANON - Aidis1990 on December 17, 2006
    O.o The SOUS have been delt with! XD Great chapters, can't wait for more! But seriously... I look at girls and they're always coddling the bad asses, how can you say boys being emotional is a turn on? It seems to me, unless the guy is insulting, the girls arent interested!
    -Aidis
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  • From ANON - eternallylaust on December 17, 2006
    I eagerly await the next chapter. Write faster! Want next chapter very very much. *cries* The suspense is killing me!
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  • From ANON - animehead on December 17, 2006
    I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you update soon. I really love this story.
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  • From ANON - Too Preoccupied To Sign In on December 17, 2006
    Hell yeah baby! That's what I'm talking about! Go on Naruto, eat his flesh and suck the marrow from his bones!
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  • From ANON - Anna (and Yura) on December 17, 2006
    By all means, write that lemon!
    Although, I hate Orochimaru so much that I will LOVE to read a gory description of his dead...
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  • From ANON - minjin on December 17, 2006
    You wanted to know what i think, right?? Well I THINK THAT THIS IS SO DAMN GOOD!!!!!!!! THIS FIC IS JUST SO COOL AND SEXY!!! Oh yeah i want a pregnant Naruto its so damn sweet *_*

    Oh yeah die Orochimaru!!!
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  • From ANON - Allys on December 17, 2006
    XD I LOVE THAT CHAPTER!!! It had little bits of everything! HOORAY for bloodlust and rutting!!! Okay ... I'm calm, but I can't wait for the next one - Gimme gimme gimme gimme XD LOVe this story @--'-,--- @--'-,--- @--'-,---
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  • From ANON - Kameh on December 17, 2006
    omg! that was totally cool!

    im trying my best to not get paranoic for the next chapter :P plz update the next as quickly as possible ;_; love u! i love ur fic! its really great!
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  • From ANON - XZanayu on December 17, 2006
    Yay!! Finally a lemon will be coming soon. As long as its between Naru/Sasu-chan. And you would want to mess up a great chapter with the pink bitch attaching herself to Sasuke about getting married and that idiot Jiraya agreeing. If anyone should get married it should be Naru/Sasuke. But, other than that setback, this chapter was great!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - PyroNeko on December 17, 2006
    Oh, almost forgot, please more smut (of the NaruSasuNaru type) thank you
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  • From ANON - Zrina on December 17, 2006
    But, but but... I wanted Naurto to eat Sasuke not Orochimaru :( /wink Sasuke just needs to come out and tell that pink headed fluff that he wants the demon lord and not her!!
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