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By : aranel
  • From ANON - SeveredWings on December 07, 2006
    Oh! Thank you for posting this! It's so refreshing seeing something new, and well put together I might add. I'll be searching avidly for your next chapter!

    Ja,
    SeveredWings
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  • From ANON - blancasg on December 07, 2006
    You're very descriptive. I love the story so far because it has my favorite pairing. Neji/Naruto. A female Naruto to boot. What did Naruto mean when she said, "I just got lucky." Should we take it at face value? Or is there a deeper meaning to the phrase? Is "Nanako" really pregnant? Or was it actually just a chakra trick? Only if Nanako-san weren't so recluse than maybe she would finally be able to tell Neji what was really wrong. I'mm actually hoping that "Nanako" is really pregnant. I'd like to see a father-to-be-Neji in full "Mother Hen" mode. Would you believe a Hyuga can actually act like that? And then it'd be coo-inspiring when Naruto starts wadling along the house. It'd be kind of weird to explain it to Godaime-sama once they got back to Konoha. That's for sure. But hopefully all this pregnancy thing happens after the Sasuke-angst-spiel. It wouldn't be good for Mama-Naruto to be stressed!

    Oh! I love your imagination because without I would have been deprived of this treasure people call a "fanfic."
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  • From ANON - Hello on December 06, 2006
    Aww, Naruto! I wonder what's going to happen further on. Such a sad time. :(
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  • From ANON - Selow on December 06, 2006
    oh, this should be interesting. i wonder which uchiha was that...
    meanwhile, you've got a piece of writing with class here. funny that the two so far most interesting naruto fics from the psychological point of view both deal with crossdressing/changing gender, respectively. and are totally different at the same time. yah, it's great to read such good work :)
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  • From ANON - Hello on December 06, 2006
    Wow, it's getting interesting. Uchiha is there... What's going to happen? Uh oh...
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  • From nekochannya on December 06, 2006
    AAAAAAAAARrrrrrrrrrrgggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    You are evil! Nyan! Pure, unadulterated evil!!!! How could you do that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! An Uchiha cliffhanger!!! nnnnnnnnnnooooooooooo !!!!!!! Please update... I need to know what happens, oh god! please!!!!!!! the unknown is killing me!! please!! nayn!!!
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  • From nekochannya on December 06, 2006
    Ok, chapter 4 was really powerful... nyan... very much so... and I wonder how you do it! I loved the vulnerability and the emotions behind Naruto as much as the sex between them. It was beautifully crafted nyan... I want to write like you when I grow up, nyan... but I fear that will not be possible... I love this! nyan! More!!!
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  • From nekochannya on December 06, 2006
    *glomps* That was so insightful! Nyan! I loved it! I want a Neji husband...where do we find that???
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  • From nekochannya on December 06, 2006
    oooohhhhh.... sexy! poor Naruto... not knowing how to was so logical and such a terrible thing! IT was erotic...nyan! me likes!!! more please!!
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  • From nekochannya on December 06, 2006
    Nyan... That was perfect... so gentle and sexy and nice! I love the way you portray Neji... its very interesting even though I dont particularily care for him. THe mission and the flow of your words is seamless and helps me forget I am reading, not watching anime. It is really a pleasure to read such a story, nyan! Please update soon!
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  • From Tesp71283 on December 06, 2006
    Noooooo! That is a bad cliffhanger! Too intence for reader's health. I won't be able to withstand and wonder about what will happpen next. I was caught from Chapter 1 and I couldn't let go, this story is flowing very well, and I'm actually excited what you come up with next! Thanks for starting this fic!
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  • From ANON - StaplersBreak on December 06, 2006
    Wow. You know how to add tension, dont you. Great writing. Cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Talia on December 06, 2006
    SAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSUUUUUUUUUUUUKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - koi on December 05, 2006
    There are just not enough NejiNaru out there. So thanks for being a supporter. These two belong together and the more fics we get out there, the more GOOD fics, the better. I love the way this is so deliciously fucked, with Neji not sure if he wants Naruto or Nanako. I want to know who taught Neji how to get a girl off. I'm a little upset on Naruto's behalf. But, it's all cool. Because it's still a great fic. I am looking forward to sex and babies. Yes, babies. Because nothing would make this fic better than a nice slice of mpreg. Oh yeah.
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on December 05, 2006
    I love it:D I wasn't going to read it at first (I'm following too many stories as it is) but I decided to go ahead anyways and I'm so glad I did. I love this story. First of all it's not SasuNaru (which is just waaaaaaaaay overused), second it's NejiNaru (which is one of my favorites), and I actually love stories where Naruto pretends to be a woman using the sexy-no-jutsu (though I really haven't seen that many of them). The only thing that would make it better is if you made it an mpreg (because I love mpreg stories, at least I love the well-written ones). I've never actually seen a NejiNaru mpreg, it's always SasuNaru. Everything's always SasuNaru..... anyways I'm sure not interested in me whining about that. I think I've pretty much said everything I wanted to say, so I'll end with yet another I love your story and I can't wait for your next update which I'm hoping will come soon. Oh and I hope that you'll finish this story, there are so many stories I love that are being abandoned and it's starting to make me sad:'( So many good stories that will never have an ending, I hope yours won't be one of them
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