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By : aranel

From ANON - Bookworm51485 on May 14, 2007
What a nice present for my birthday. I get up early in the morning and there it is waiting for me, a new chapter from one of my favorite stories ever:D You've definitely started my day on a high note, so thank you for that.

I must say I'm a little disappointed that we don't get to know what happened with Sasuke and Naruto (at least not yet maybe?), but at least he's gone for now and not causing problems. I must say though that I found that little exchange between Neji and Naruto on the roof interesting. Neji asks him if he's alright and instead of answering about himself he says that the baby's fine. Somehow that seems a sign of something, though maybe I'm reading too much into it.

You know this whole story has become bittersweet. It's nice to see Naruto and Neji living together, loving each other, jointly looking forward to the birth of their child. But then to think of what'll happen when they have to go back home. It makes me sad. I'm still holding out a bit of hope for a somewhat happy ending, though it's seeming hopeless the more info you give on the Hyuuga clan.

Though I find myself thinking about the birth of the baby. They're planning things very closely and as if things will go as well as they can, but I wonder what would happen if there were unforseen complications and they couldn't go back on schedule. Would Tsunade send people, and what would happen if she did?

Anyways, before I end the review I would like to humbly request, on my birthday:D, that their baby be a boy. I love baby boys, there's just something about them.
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From ANON - Mitsuko on May 14, 2007
its chapters like these that make me think its the calm before the storm. I keep expecting something bad to happen! But lovely update! Patiently awaiting the next!
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From ANON - Feion Phylar on May 06, 2007
OH MY GOSH!!!

ARRRGH! You better continue this! I have never felt so freaking-Oooo I am pissed. Keep it coming I can't wait. I don't want Neji to end up alone.

Gaaah NARUTOOOO!

Please continue!!!

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From akume on May 04, 2007
I want more. So much more. Thanks again for the update. Until next time. Ja.
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From ANON - Damp on May 04, 2007
I am so so sorry! Please forgive my stupidness! *bows down again and again* But I didn't understand it still! I'm still so very very very confused! I don't understand what's going on at all! All I know is that Sasuke is back in the picture...ARGH! This is SO FRUSTRATING! I know these chapters are like, the big climax *at least I think they are* Yet, I still don't get them!! ARGH!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN!
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From ANON - Bookworm51485 on May 04, 2007
Ahhhhh, you end it at the worst possible moment. I hate cliffhangers, they suck :'( Now I'm stuck waiting until your next update to find out what Sasuke's planning. I hope it comes as quickly at this one did. I can't help wondering if Sasuke would be a physical threat to Naruto or if he would be more inclined to do what Neji fears and attempt to take Naruto with him once he finds out Naruto is pregnant. At least I'm assuming he'll find out, because I'm again assuming to he knocked Neji out so he could get to Naruto in person.

I also find myself wondering if Sasuke would be a threat at all, physically or to Neji and Naruto's relationship. If he would just talk to Naruto and leave. I can imagine though, that messing with Naruto wouldn't be his priority at the moment considering that Itachi is still alive (he is right?) and Sasuke just (or would it have been awhile ago?) killed Orochimaru. So I imagine his next step would be to go after Itachi, unless of course he wants to try to revive his clan first before going into this fight with Itachi. And I'm overthinking it. So I'll stop now and hope that your next update comes very quickly too. I can't wait.
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From ANON - Anon on May 04, 2007
EVILLE CLIFFIE! sorta lol. Its been sooo long since you updated! I was worried that you werent going to continue it. However, good chap! Hoping for another one soon!
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From DeviousLilDevil on May 03, 2007
damn it, no!!!!!! ye be a cruel mistress (how could you disrupt that beautiful moment *cries*) but i love this fic so i'll put up with it. (^__^) looking foward to your next update. i want to hear what that uchiha brat has to say.
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From ANON - Damp on May 03, 2007
I just have one samll question, I'm pretty sure you'll be able to answer it, being as this is your story.

WHAT THE FUCK JUST HAPPENED?! NO SERIOUSELY! WHAT THE FUCK JUST HAPPENED?!!!! >.< PLEASE ANSWER THAT!!

OH YEAH, and before I forget... UPDATE AS FAST AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN! I'm in suspense!
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From ANON - Bookworm51485 on May 03, 2007
I'm guessing 'he' is Sasuke? I can't wait to find out what happened while Neji was out. I'm quite curious to know if Sasuke was especially hostile, and if he was what Naruto did to keep him from seriously hurting Neji and/or himself.

And I'm still hoping for a happy ending for Neji and Naruto and their baby. It's just sad to think that Neji would never get to truly be with his child beyond the period shortly beyond it's birth. Though if nothing else, at least he would have that.

Btw if it's possible, can I express my preference for a baby boy? I much prefer boys. There's something about them that's so sweet.
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From Zigana on April 05, 2007
Itachi again? Is there no way to let Neji and Naruto raise there child together? The Hyuuga clan sometimes just absolutely sucks. Please update soon.
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From ANON - Damp on April 01, 2007
Itachi! No, SASUKE! Holy crap what the heck just happened! And are you being seriouse as to making Naruto a single mother! WTF >.
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From ANON - Bookworm51485 on April 01, 2007
First, your welcome (I try to let any that I notice know. I did try to get the mods to switch their policy so instead of having to allow anonymous reviews, you'd instead have to disallow them if you felt it necessary but they decided to play it safe) and thank you for the new chapter:D I wasn't expecting one so soon, was quite excited when I saw it.

And now on to the review: is that Sasuke? Someone I don't see Itachi being the physical, not unless he had to be. And since there's a Sharingan, I'm going to assume that that was Sasuke. Now I've found I'm very curious what's going to happen next. And what's going to happen to their mission. With Sasuke there, unless he chooses to just back off and leave them alone, if they have to fight I can't see how they'd maintain their cover within the village. I imagine that any fight with Sasuke would end up being a major landscape destroying battle if he was set on making things difficult. Or finding answers I guess, since he seemed to be asking Naruto something when Neji came.

And from the thought on what would happen to the mission, I start wondering what would happen if they're forced to end the mission and ordered to come home while Naruto's still pregnant? Would they run? Would they go home and hope for the best? Hmmmm..... this whole chapter just brought up so many questions for me. And it was quite sad. They've finally found love with each other, two people who've had a major deficit of it in their lives but they can't be together. It makes you almost wish that somehow the Hyuuga clan would accept Naruto, but for people so obsessed with image and power and status, unless the search into Naruto's past finds a connection to something powerful and prestigious, I'm disappointed to say that they'd likely have quite a fight on their hands.

I swear, every chapter you post just builds more anticipation for me. I want to see if I'm right and it is Sasuke and what's going to happen. Does he know it's Naruto? And if he does figure that's it's Naruto, what would his reaction to situation be if there is no fight? Or will his reaction be to choose to fight? Or will he just fight anyways? What happened to Neji at the end? What will Naruto do? Too many questions. I hope your next update also comes quickly:)
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From akume on April 01, 2007
Sugoi! They're keeping the baby. Ano, I hope everything turns out alright for them. They so deserve some happiness. Maa, was that Itachi bothering Naruto-kun again? Anyway, thanks again for the quick update. Until next time. Ja.
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From emp78 on April 01, 2007
Loved the part where Naruto would stand in front of the mirror, as well as poke his stomach. (Did that with my first also; was told couldn't have kids. LOL.) Which of the Uchihas is messing with Neji and Naruto? Have them kick his ass!
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