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By : aranel
  • From ANON - Mitsuko on May 22, 2007
    Hahahahah! should have seen it coming though! aww its heartbreaking, Neji having to spend as much time as possible with his son! I think imma cry when the time comes..... Again another speedy update...im impressed!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2007
    i love this story. i do. i do. i do.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 21, 2007
    A new chapter so soon? Your making me a very happy camper here:D And Naruto finally got to meet his son.

    I wonder what's they're going to do about Takashi's looks. If he really looks like Neji then that might cause some suspicion, might give them away a bit (at least to some maybe). It would be nice if they could stay in the village they're in. They really seem happy there. It's too bad that hokage couldn't make it a loooooooooong long term mission, and they could come back when Takashi was an adult.

    *sigh* My brain is feeling so fried at the moment. I want to be organized and I want to write more but it's all escaping me. So I'll try to wrap it up and please forgive me for disjointed sentences and thoughts and such.

    I'm glad to see that Neji got to spend time with the baby. It was almost nice that Naruto was out so long. Gave Neji time to really bond with his son, especially given that he likely might not get to spend much time with him in the future.

    You know, if Neji and Naruto can't be together the way they want (though I'm still hoping and crossing my fingers) they could just pass each other off as best best friends. The mission made them really close and Naruto could use Neji as a convenient baby sitter. Though the preferable situation would definitely be for them to be able to be together as a family. And maybe they could have more kids, ooooooooo.....

    I'm still wanting to see more of Naruto's interaction with the baby. And I find I'm still wondering about the breastfeeding thing. Does Naruto's female body have a sort of state memory. Meaning although he changed back to his male form would his female form remember that he was pregnant and just gave birth and still be able to breastfeed? Or does it kind of renew itself each time he switches back. But then if that was true wouldn't the baby have disappeared during the body flickers...... I think I'm thinking too much. I'll stop now

    I'll just end my incoherent rambling here before I drive you completely nuts. I hope your next update comes just as quickly as the last few ones. I get very happy every time I see them. And I can't wait to see more of Naruto's interaction with their son, and Neji and Naruto's combined interaction with their son.
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  • From roro237 on May 21, 2007
    Oh so sweet! I'm loving Neji and his son. The love Neji has for Naruto. Looking forward to what will happen when they get back to the village. I'm enjoying your story very much.
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  • From ANON - Damp on May 21, 2007
    “Taka-chan, after all that I’ve done for you. You choose to be your father’s son.”

    Haha! That was so true! Aww, you're breaking my heart even more!! How could you do this to us!! Your fans! You're readers! Isn't this breaking your heart as well??~!!

    -Damp

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  • From HumanInfiltrator on May 21, 2007
    Beautiful.
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  • From littleolmee on May 21, 2007
    Can you believe I just found your story? It is so wonderfully written, I love all the detail and how you progressed things between them. Now they have only two months left before they return and Neji is naturally concerned about his son. Why does Takashi have a little red in his chakra? Is the red chakra inside the child the offspring of the Kyuubi or Kyuubi himself? Will Naruto be able to lie to Tsunade about where the child came from? I can see Naruto breaking down and saying he is the mother but lying about the father. How will Neji keep himself away? He loves Naruto and Takashi so much I can't see how he will stand to walk away from them or how his clan will keep him away I should say. Is there anyway being Naruto is also a man he could claim the child as Uzumaki and not allow the Hyuugi to touch the child? Can't wait to see what you have in mind for the story. Please keep up the great work, take care.
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  • From ANON - Mitsuko on May 21, 2007
    Aww!! A baby boy!! Well they do say that childbirth is the most excruciating pain there is... :D:D:D:D:D:D Another update so soon! I just realised that you also write Throw It All Away...which is another story i love...kudos to your writing skills!
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  • From emp78 on May 21, 2007
    Ooooohh!! There's a new Hyuuga baby! YAY! Does it have blond hair or brown?
    Are Neji and Naruto going to have to go back to Konoha now that the baby is born?
    What about Itachi saying he would be back? And Sasuke knows that they're there.
    What about him? Update!!
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  • From tovah on May 21, 2007
    I swear this story just gets better and better. I can't wait for when they get back home. Please keep up the good work!
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 20, 2007
    AWWWWWWW It's a boy!!!! Yay, thank you:) And thank for a realistic birth, it's nice to finally see one after so long. Most stories either skip over the birth completely or it's wham-bam-thank you ma'am kinda thing. Over and done with in hour from start to finish. It's was nice reading a story where the author took the time to make it realistic. And they have their baby:D Awwwwwww and I loved Neji's little freak out at the beginning. It's interesting to see him acting like a normal expectant father who's spouse is in labor. Cute:) But he pulled himself together so he could be there for Naruto. The love between them is sweet to see, and a bit sad too.

    And Neji had his first talk with his son. I hope they get to spend a bit more time before they have to leave. I'm so not looking forward to that part. I'm hoping for a happy ending. *sings* Wishing and hoping and thinking and praying, planning.... sorry sorry. Weird mood just hit me and I couldn't resist. I'm just happy they finally have their baby, and that it's a boy (yay and thank you again:D) And that Naruto didn't give himself away in the birth. I can't imagine what they would have done if Naruto had changed back in the middle of the birth, that could have been disastrous.

    I can't wait for your next chapter and to see Naruto's introduction to their baby, and to see how he handles other first time mother things (i.e. breastfeeding). I'm imagining that would be something to see :D Anyways, hope to see an update soon again
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 18, 2007
    The baby's coming, omg. I can't wait for the next chapter, for Neji's reaction to being confronted with his child, and to find out what his child is. I'm still rooting for a boy :)

    I'm glad that Neji finally got the request approved, though it would have been interesting to see what happened if it hadn't been. Would they have just not come home? Would Tsunade have sent someone after them? If I was Neji I'd still be a bit worried that someone might be sent because she's feeling a bit worried considering the reason he gave. But I guess his focus is more on the baby and it being born healthy.

    I hope that Neji gets to spend some time with his child in this period after it's birth if he won't get to be with Naruto and him/her in the village. Though of course, I'm still hoping for a happy ending for them. But anyways, I can't wait for your next update. The baby's finally coming and I can't wait to see how it turns out and how the birth goes. With Neji's comment about Naruto's fluctuating form, I wonder if anything will happen connected to that.
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  • From ANON - Damp on May 18, 2007
    Crap, the more I read this, the more heartbroken I get at the prospect of when Naruto and Neji have to go back the village. Man, I hope you give them a happily ever after. YAY! next is the birth right?!! Oh, I can't wait for the next installment!

    -Damp
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  • From ANON - Damp on May 14, 2007
    Crap, tha was so cute!! You're making me feel bad! Do they have to be seperated? I mean, can't they life together forever? *wishful thinking I know* Can't wait for the next installment...I still don't understand what the hell happened back there with Sasuke though...
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  • From emp78 on May 14, 2007
    That was so sweet! Please update soon?
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