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By : aranel
  • From Bluesake on June 03, 2007
    wow this is an interesting story I would like to read more of it, Due continue!
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  • From ANON - Brittany on June 03, 2007
    Great story, I love it. I can't wait to see how thier lives end up.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on June 03, 2007
    Well.... that was interesting:) I have to say I was somewhat expecting them to find out about Takashi given Naruto's exertion of himself. It didn't seem like be able to hold on to Takashi's disguise, like he couldn't hold on to his own. But I guess if that was the case, Takashi helped out by not opening his eyes. No give away there. He's just the ideal baby isn't he:)

    During that last conversation, it took me awhile to figure out what they were so upset about. But maybe that was because it was being told from Neji's pov and he doesn't know what's going on. But that made me feel a bit slow:) But anyways, it would have been interesting to see her reaction if she examined Takashi. Things are going really well for them in this secret keeping thing. I'm just waiting for something to go wrong, and for them to be found out. Though hopefully it would be by someone who wouldn't cause any issues for them.

    It would be cool to see what Neji mentioned happen. A select few knowing and it becoming a little internal conspiracy. Though I find I wonder what will happen if/when Sasuke comes back to the village. You never went into any real detail about what happened when he was there but I imagine he knows that Naruto was pregnant. So he'd know that Takashi is Neji's son too, born of a male. I guess out -of-sight, out-of-mind but if I was them, or maybe just Neji since we don't know what happened with him and Naruto, I'd be a bit worried that someone out there who knows who they are knows the circumstances that they're trying to hide and has unknown motives. That's a long sentence, I hope it made sense. Anyways loved the chapter as always and I can't for the next to see how they settle into this life they've chosen to try to protect Takashi from his lineage and to also see if maybe they'll decide to tell anyone.
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  • From emp78 on June 03, 2007
    Cool! Takashi is going to be a strong kid!
    Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From tovah on June 03, 2007
    WOW (plain and simple) Awesome chapter, I can't wait for more!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 03, 2007
    WOW
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  • From ANON - snowecat on May 28, 2007
    Cool, though when the kid gets older, what sort of power will he have? The eyes are a dead giveaway if it falters, and who's going to keep him? Can't wait for more, this is really wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Feion Phylar on May 28, 2007
    Oh crap! They're under attack! Nooo I don't want anyone to die!

    Hmm...But I wonder who's attacking them? Don't let their baby be kidnapped! I'd die! Sweet Takashi-chan. This has DRAMA written all over it. ^_^ Oh I'm so excited! Next chapter in June neh? Hmmm I'll be rrrriiiight here ^__^.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on May 28, 2007
    That's a crappy way to end the chapter, evil cliffie you added in there. Who's come after them, and will this mess up their future plans any? I almost hope that it does, but it makes me wonder what would happen later on if it did.

    Anyways, I hated and loved this chapter. Seeing Neji and Naruto interact together as new parents with their son. It was sweet. But the knowledge of what comes later and then the little mentions of it was just depressing. It's sad to think that this family that loves each other so much, the man who loves his partner and his son so much has to give them up. But I hope that Naruto and Neji can succeed in that little 'oath', that they'll manage to change things. So even if they must be apart in the beginning, they might/will be together eventually. And that Neji will get to be with his son, not just as a good friend of his 'mother', but as his father.

    I find I almost wish that they could tell Tsunade the whole truth of the situation and that she'd let them go on a really really long term mission, but I doubt the Hyuuga clan would love their pride and joy, or maybe just pride, being gone for that long. *sigh* This story, I can't wait for next week and your next update. Especially to see what happens after this cliffie.

    BTW I almost wish you'd included a breastfeeding scene. That could have been interesting :) Oh well
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  • From emp78 on May 28, 2007
    Who's throwing exploding tags at them? Update soon. This is one of the best stories out there right now.
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  • From LadyRainrin on May 28, 2007
    I have to say I love your story I hope you update real soon.
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  • From ANON - Damp on May 28, 2007
    ZOMG!! What the hell happened!! Crap, I can't believe they have to go back to the village...it saddens me greatly that they have to go back to that hell hole. I really didn't want them to leave the village. I just hope that they're okay, seeing as they're under attack. How embarrassing .///. Your suppose to be one of the most powerful shinobi in the Fire Country...and you then you ge tattacked... .//. how embarrassing.

    -Damp *That is very embarrassing*
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on May 28, 2007
    evil cliffie..... but such a wonderful update. they are so perfect together and takashi is too cute. i eagerly look foward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Feion Phylar on May 23, 2007
    Oh my gosh! I read this and tears came to my eyes. This is THE BEST NarutoXNeji Fanfictions I have EVER read. I just so happened to check up on it by clicking on the link in my favorites and low and behold and update! ^O^ Sweeeet!

    I was really hoping for Takashi to have blonde hair or at least a dirty blonde a mixture but hey, can't be picky. ^__^ But Takashi is kawaii~ and Neji is already a wonderful father! Hmmm...I am concerned about them going back to Konoha and what happened between Sasuke and Naruto. But other than that keep the chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - snowecat on May 22, 2007
    You have to keep going on this, it's really wonderful. What did Itachi want with Naruto so long ago? Will he be back? What will happen when they go back to Leaf? Can't wait to see what happens next.
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