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By : aranel
  • From LJofTheDarkThrone on June 19, 2007
    I hate this couple, I hate Sasuke-bashing, I hate reading about detailed heterosexual sex in fanfiction, and I, for the most part, dislike the extended use of Sexy no Jutsu, especially for pregancies.

    But I absolutely love this story. Everything about it. Bless you for posting it. God bless you.

    Of course your health and schooling always comes first; your life outside this always comes first, even in my eyes, which are by now clouded and biased with fangirlishness. But- I still must ask you to make sure that the rest of this story is put up and finished. When it happens, I don't care. A month from now? Fine. Two months? Fine. Four months? Fine. A year? Fine.

    I just want to see it done so that I can marvel in it's full-form beauty, enjoying the way that it's grace and romance smooths over all my worries, and anxieties. The way it makes me numb in the best possible sense of the world, filling in what it coaxed me to disregard with wonder and life, until I can barely breathe, much less keep the smile off my face.

    Okay? I don't care when it happens. I just want to see this story done. It makes me more happy than I believe can be healthy and I love it for that. I can't remember the last time that I've been so attached to a fanfiction, love one so much, so please.

    Please.
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  • From animelovergirl on June 18, 2007
    I hate you...no, I love you...no, I hate you...argh, I don't know...I love you for your brilliant story and I hate you for leaving us with this evil, evil cliffhanger!!! No, really, you had me sitting at the edge of my chair, gripping the armrests so tightly I got cramps in my fingers and then...end of chapter! I cannot believe you did something so cruel ...^_^' Your story is so beautiful and sad and heartstopping and...oh my god so gooood!!! I know you're very busy and I won't pester you but know that I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Damp on June 11, 2007
    I think I have yet to tell you that this story is going to be one of the main reasons of my death XD!

    -Damp *I'm just kidding!*
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  • From ANON - ML on June 11, 2007
    No. You cannot DO that! Just . . . gah! That was one of the most well placed cliffhangers I've ever seen. I . . . argh! I HATE you for it! (not really, but yeah. Ack!!!)
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  • From emp78 on June 11, 2007
    Wonderful chapter! Death to the council!! I loved the bit with the fox; was Takashi speaking demon?
    Hiashi's finally removing Neji's curse seal! Yay! Hope to read more once you're back on a decent schedule.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on June 11, 2007
    No update for a month? NOOOOOOOO!!!! :'( Your making me sad, though I do understand. I had to do a 6 day week once for my job, let me say I will never do it again. And I'm only a part-time worker, though my boss does enjoy stuffing an 8-hour workday into 4 hours. At least for some of us. But moving on:

    Is Hiashi removing the seal? Neji seems to think that Hiashi's going to kill him but I find myself doubting that given his comments before. So would that mean he wants him to be a part of the Main Family and not the Branch? Would that make a difference with Takashi if they found out about him. I know that as a Branch member's child they'd put the seal on him, but if Neji's main, wouldn't they not? Though I'm guessing if he is doing that, removing the seal, with other comments, he likely is planning to arrange a marriage for Neji. And with his 'pure' comments, I'm thinking it would be with someone from within the clan. Someone needs to have a chat with him about inbreeding:) and the future detriments of not having any genetic variation.

    I have to say, I'm surprised that Naruto didn't flip out on them when they hurt Takashi. Especially that he actually cried, given that that's something he doesn't do. But I guess he didn't/doesn't want to make a bad situation worse. Neji too.

    I have a question. Who knows about the kyuubi? Obviously Neji doesn't, but it seems like Sakura does. Is there anyone else from their generation who knows?

    And are we going to see Itachi and Sasuke again at some point? And the Akatsuki. I can imagine they'd pissed about the Kyuubi thing, though I could almost see them attempting to take both Naruto and Takashi and see if they could salvage the Kyuubi from the two of them. Though I will say I don't completely understand. I know Kyuubi is sentient and exists within Naruto and has personality and evilness and all that. But now he's partially within Takashi, or Takashi has a part of him? Is it just one tail's worth of his power or is Kyuubi someone split between them both? Or does Kyuubi not exist as a sentient being anymore, now just being power and it's split between Naruto and Takashi, with Naruto having the lion's share of it? And I hope I'm not bugging you asking so many questions.

    I hope your job settles down soon. 6 days a week is harsh.
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  • From ANON - Mitsuko on June 10, 2007
    You continue to drag me further and further into this story....lol. Great chap as always, patiently awaiting the next!
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on June 10, 2007
    my god their son is the cutest little thing. sad to hear we wont be getting updates for a while but as long as this fic isn't being abandoned i dont think we'll mind the wait. looking foward to the next update whenever that may be.

    ~Devious
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  • From MidnightsKeeper on June 10, 2007
    sad to hear you won't be updating this much. i almost didn't read this because i didn't think i'd like the way things would progress. and even though what i thought might happen did happen, i liked it anyways. which suprised me. and now i can't wait for the next chapters. it really isn't fair. you're a really good writer and i hope you'll be able to update more than you expect.
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  • From emp78 on June 08, 2007
    Yay! Neji and Naruto finally got together as themselves! For the first time being a true uke, Naruto didn't seem to have much pain. I guess he was just uber aroused. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on June 08, 2007
    I probably shouldn't be reviewing half asleep but I'm afraid by tomorrow I'd forget to come back and review. So please excuse me, because I am half asleep.

    I'm surprised that Naruto and Neji would go that far. I kind of figured that they'd keep their relationship platonic just in case, but they're having loud sex and declaring their love for each other where anybody passing could hear. Hopefully if someone does hear it'll be someone who cares about them and Takashi and who won't rat them out.

    As for the end, I hope so too Neji. It's just sad that he has to be so far from his son and Naruto. Though at least he was able to be named godfather. It gives him more of an in. I have to say, I found in the trials, I was almost rooting for Neji's clan to find out about Takashi. Except then they'd try to exploit him, I think, especially being Naruto's too. It's sad.

    And my brain is just freezing up and I can't remember anything else I wanted to say. So I'm gonna say, woooo for the new chapter and I hope the next update is soon. And that Neji's little promise at the end comes through.
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on June 08, 2007
    *tears up* that was so sweet. i eagerly look foward for the next update.
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  • From bears24 on June 08, 2007
    I LOVE this story. I promise to leave a more insightful review later on, but I just had to let you know.
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  • From ANON - Damp on June 08, 2007
    Yes, yes, we all know that one day the whole ninja world will know, And yes, that's all fine and dandy...question is: WHEN will they know! And WHEN will Neji and Naruto be able to live freely? These questions are HAUNTING ME
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  • From ANON - Damp on June 05, 2007
    Okay. What. The. Fuck. Just. Happened. I don't understand what happened just now. Please explain.

    -Damp * o_. *
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