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Reviews for Hope's Desire

By : KitsuneNoMari
  • From ANON - qwerty on December 07, 2007
    Quick and tidy ending
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  • From serenagold on December 07, 2007
    This ending left me speechless. I mean what.. how... everyones just cool with it? What? Who? Geh!

    Kabuto rapes Naruto. Then gets his brother as a reward? I don't.. how is this ok?

    What. The. Fuck?

    `ø_ø`

    I just don't understand.




    That said, the rest of your story was well written and very much reminded me of traditional Chinese folklore. The Helen of Troy element gave it a nice epic quality. But the ending...? I meah huh? I'm sorry, its an otherwise great story, but chapter 8 made no goddamn sense. :(
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  • From ANON - animelover on November 24, 2007
    oops! didn't finish reading before i commented ... sorry! sigh, this was so romantic. itanaru declaring their love for one another WAFF supreme!

    thanx 4 sharing!
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  • From ANON - animelover on November 24, 2007
    ooooh, this is sooo cool! i love fairy tales, and although i've never thought of anything in the naruto world that could fit, this does perfectly!

    plz upd8 soon!
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  • From spoon10488 on November 18, 2007
    Wow so intense. I laughed when I heard King Sasuke.
    Itachi fight you have to save Naruto!
    Great story can't wait to read more.
    =)
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 17, 2007
    WHY would you end it there? WHY? ACK! I like this story. Good writing.
    update!
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  • From himesamadakko on November 16, 2007
    for a first timer it's s pretty good one, I could practically imagine Naruto doing that modified chicken dance, god it's hilarious! my fave pairing After SasuNaru and NejiNaru is ItaNaru so rock on and do your best!!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 29, 2007
    NO! Naruto! Great story.
    update!!!
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  • From Hen on September 29, 2007
    This is really good! I hope Kabuto gets his ass kicked!
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  • From ANON - Memphis Atari on July 10, 2007
    i hope you rectify Naruto's personality soon. for one this story is so far ooc its not even funny. what's the point of using characters if you're not even going to use them as they are? where's the challenge in that? Naruto is such a whimper here its entirely laughable. what happened to his courageous and loud ways?
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  • From Pyrokage on July 10, 2007
    Please send me an email when you update this story.
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on May 18, 2007
    this is so cute. but that damn kabuto is getting on my nerves. anyway, looking foward to your next update.
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  • From anapana83 on May 17, 2007
    I just read the story in one go. Wow, seems like things are getting antsy here. What's gonna happen! I hope Naruto doesn't get caught or worse, hurt. If Itachi's there then it shouldn't get too bad right? Damn Kabuto. Update soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - kati on May 17, 2007
    youre story is so cool there really arn't enough itanaru fics out there that have nothing to do with abuse or sasuke ( not that i dont like sasunaru!! ;) ) So, yeah im really njoying this, update soon!! xx
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on May 08, 2007
    so cute! i was worried about you and i thought maybe you'd dropped the story, but i'm glad to see that you're still writing. i'll keep an eye out for your next update, and i really enjoyed chap 3!
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