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By : KrickItat
  • From trucrystal on December 15, 2007
    Lol, this story cracked me up! Definitely a favorite. :) But I do have to say something, you had a lot of moments where the grammar gets really bad and it's hard to read almost whole paragraphs sometimes, so I'd suggest have a talk with your Beta, because they might not be pulling their weight. :) Just a friendly suggestion!

    Again, awesome, awesome story! I LOVED the ending. And oh god I agree with that about guys wanting to do the butt thing, every guy I've been with has been the same way... it kinda gets tiring, having to turn 'em down. :( Fun to read about, but definitely not my cup of tea in the sack.


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  • From ANON - Michael Beck on October 01, 2007
    It's great! There's only one thing missing: Tsunade showing Sakura the the issue of Shinobi Illustrated Swimsuit Issue with *her* on the cover, and saying

    "This was just after I started using the rejuvenation technique, would you believe people thought that I was twenty instead of --"

    "Instead of what?"

    "Never mind that, Sakura. But I'm so proud of you!"
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  • From Tricia1224 on September 27, 2007
    Damn that was funny. That was also very hot. Ibiki, I can imagine him being into BDSM. OK on that thought...
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  • From ANON - mirumototsubasa on September 13, 2007
    This story was a lot of fun. I love the comedy, and the sex. I only wish is was longer. *grin*

    Have you thought of doing any more Kakashi/Sakura stuff? (I say this before I click on your name, because I am silly.)Also, since it was mentioned, my e-mail is the same as my username, just at that g mail place. ;D
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  • From ANON - clandestine on September 06, 2007
    That was fabulous... so amazingly funny. You are an awesome writer...
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  • From cat on August 15, 2007
    Yes! That was so yummy!
    NARUTO:*sigh* I wanna be smacked on the ass! *pout*
    It can be arranged......
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  • From ANON - snowecat on August 07, 2007
    This was pretty funny actually. Never saw Kakashi in that particular light though. Not to say it's not possible. Sai licking the pages was a hoot. Did Sakura get paid for her poses I wonder? This is a story you should read. While not Kakashi/Sakura, it is very entertaining. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2800557/1/ The title is: Icha Icha Takutikusu Makeout Tactics I'll be looking forward to anything else you've posted.
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  • From Aoekae on May 05, 2007
    i like it. it was pretty hilarious, and i liked how your wrote kakashi when he was severely pissed off.
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  • From LDE on April 14, 2007
    Simply fantastic work, finally Kakashi as a Dom figure! bless you for it. theres so little of him like that (unless it yaoi, not my thing, not with him at least:P), so it was refreshing to get a taste of what I like. please keep writing, and know I will keep reading! if you ever get the urge to do a darker Kaka/Saka fic, I will be in my glory and bookmark it for future re-reading...lol.
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  • From ANON - lulie on March 26, 2007
    OMG I loved this story! The hints toward Ibiki and Sakura, it would so cool if you made a story about those two! Again I just love it sooo much!
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  • From morgansgirl23 on March 26, 2007
    What a wonderful and fun ficlet. Thank you so much for for writing it and for starting the hetero fanfiction discussion.
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  • From ANON - jennjennr on February 27, 2007
    Me again, thanks for clearing up about the mag, it answered all my questions and made the story... flow better.

    ...Oh my buhahahahha!! I loved it... I want to be punished by Kakashi! Mou! Geez I loved that scene! You have no idea, ooh the idea of Kakashi... ugh what a sex god, so dominating... makes me want to purr... Damn lucky Sakura I'd say.

    I loved the humor! Haha I could so see Kakashi knocking men over like corkboard, it was so easy to picture, and the whole him running around frantically-obessivly attacking anyone who had an SI was so like him... well to me it was anyway... Poor Genma, he never catched a break does he? Oh well I loved the irony of Kakashi's 'phyco' episode happening after the fact that he had been running around totally ignored it in his single minded prusuit of his Icha Icha, great and so like him.

    Ooh another interesting tid-bit was the fact that it was Sakura's and Kakashi's first time together, obviously there was an inckling of somthing because holy hell they sparked fire when they were together. And well he was soooo ferocious about bringing about an end to the SI editions' life, and punishing Sakura... and well that for sure was not a fatherly notion... I just loved it!

    Gosh I love this story, I want it to continue, but I really can't see anywhere it could go other than more smutty dom scenes with Kaka and Saku... though that is always a good idea... Anyway thanks so much for writing this awesome fic, and well setting me to giggling and panting at the images it provided. Sorry for the um absentee review... heh heh.

    -Love Jenn
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  • From ANON - Zpan Sven on February 23, 2007
    *falls out of chair laughing hysterically* I love it! So funny! too bad Itachi wasn't around, I'd have loved to seen Sasuke's face if her had made a pass at her...

    You tempt me to write my own version, with Ibiki as the male lead ;) I wuv my Ibiki-kun!
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  • From ANON - Hillary (Ryokomaru) on January 23, 2007
    Wow i totally love this
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  • From ANON - beliefinkakashi on January 03, 2007
    Wow, that was kind of intense... lol... Sakura probably learned her leason of posin' for that magazine...
    I think Kakashi losts his marbles in this, he totally went wakoots...
    Great fic...
    Cant wait for the next one.
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