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Reviews for Dragonheart

By : UmbreonMessiah
  • From ANON - ranneal on February 19, 2012
    Wow!!! This is one beautiful piece of writing. I just finished chapter three and just loved it! You are a superb writer. What a cool & hot chapter. You are so..so good with Hinata and Naruto!
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  • From DragonMan220 on March 07, 2009
    Kakeru is a grade S bastard and I hope Naruto goes six tails on his pathetic scaly butt so he can rip him apart!
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on September 02, 2008
    UM,You've Outdone Yourself.

    Kankeru Is The Meanest Piece Of Shit I've Witnessed So Far...After Katai And Sakai,Of Course.And How Dare He Say Hinata Wasn't Pretty Enough?!That's Enough To Make ME Go After HIS Sorry Ass!Also,A Lump Of Chakra?! *Growls*

    He's So Hateable That I'm In Love With His Maliciousness.

    Also,Please,I Want To Hear Him Realize Hinata's Beautiful. *Blushes*

    And Naruto.So Sweet.Obviously,He Cares About Hinata And Wants To Save Her.

    Somehow,I Enjoyed The Fact You Put Such Humor Even Into The Vicious-est Of Dark Scenes.

    Yosho,Kosu,And Hiruko Are Pretty Cool Characters.Yosho's Much Better,Actually.The Verbal Battle Between Him And Hinata.

    I Want...You Know What I Want.

    On To Next Chapter!
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on September 02, 2008
    Like...Wow. o_O
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  • From Shadi88 on August 04, 2008
    Wow your second chapter is long. I like it. I enjoy long chaptered stories with many chapters. Looking forward to reading the rest, tomorrow maybe but hopfully soon. I enjoy your story.
    Butterfly Beauty ~ Wishing you good luck, best wishes, and bessings to be yours.
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  • From Shadi88 on August 04, 2008
    It's only the first chapter and I already love it! Go Naruto!!! I love it when he's happy. So much saddness in his life he deserves to be happy. Good job with your story and best of luck with future ones.
    Butterfly Beauty
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  • From Everblade on August 02, 2008
    I'm eagerly waiting the upcoming fights, nice touches on Ryuugakure's destruction and Sakura's guilty pleasure.
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  • From Archfiend on July 28, 2008
    I stumbled across your storyand after a cautious eyeing I began to read it. I was instantly hooke and read the story through in nearly one go from the beginning to the end, only stopping because it was getting far to late to continue reading with the proper concentration. First thing in the morning I continued with the story and i must say, this story is fantasstic a masterpiece, certainly one of the best stories I have read so far, and wonderfully set out and thought out. Though if the seal needs so much chakre and they are after the bijuu, then wouldn`t Akatsuki not take notice? Also how would they extract the bijuu from the Jinchuurike, as I do not think they have enough persons of enough power to perform the technique that Akatsuki uses. So a mystery remains. oh yes and for god´s sake Sakura and Yakusho ahould get their act together and stop dithering around, I mean it is so clear that Sakura was the cause of much of his repentance andjis actions clearly show that.
    P.S.:I wonder who would be stronger. kagura (boss raccoon) or Gamabunta(boss toad)?
    P.P.S.: I hope we see the raccoons again, I like them.
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  • From Barbai on May 09, 2008
    Excellent chapter again, I figured things would be tying up but looks likes there are more things to come.
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  • From ANON - Koumori on May 08, 2008
    Very good indeed. I presume there will be a more detailed chapter about Jiyumaru's tragedy, unless Ayame has already explained it all and it doesn't need to be discussed further. I think the wait was well worth the 17 pages of reading, as it was very fulfilling. :3
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  • From Barbai on March 18, 2008
    Excellent work on the fight scene. I was a little confused on the red glowing eyes part it took awhile to figure out it was a new character and not a old one that was trying to escape the hospital.
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  • From ANON - Koumori on March 16, 2008
    And yet another excellent chapter from UM. I recommend people to not just read this story, but to try and strike discussion about it at our website as well. After all, the more the merrier.
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  • From Anonymous7 on February 06, 2008
    Hooray for updates! Hinata held her own quite excellently in this chapter, and she managed to win with Kyuubi's power, though she may not be completely aware of how she did it. Now Naruto needs to get her and the rest of his team back to Konoha, and, later, find out who was leading that mission to capture Hinata and kill him. After all, Naruto was the only one not in the fight. But considering how little time he's had with Hinata recently, and the fact that she left the alter and her family to be with him, they really deserve some time to themselves first. A great chapter with a well-written fight scene, and now you've really got me excited for the next chapter!
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  • From REM1985 on January 28, 2008
    This is one great story... even if it is depressing a majority of the time. I hope you will continue it soon; things are really getting interesting.
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  • From avatoa on January 18, 2008
    Dude this chapter was fucking sweet as well as Yakusho's transformation. I've always dreamed about doing that kind of thing ever since I saw American Dragon: Jake Long. Keep up the good work and get the next chapter out fast because the suspense is killing me.
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