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Reviews for Inner Sanctum

By : nekochannya

From ANON - Helen Rivers on December 06, 2006
WoW......This story is so dark and ummm...yeah. Ignore my lack of vocabulary words used to describe your story. I love your story. Can't wait to read more! Keep on writing!!
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From ANON - Jhunter on December 05, 2006
Wow....just wow. The first time I read this, it was so vivid I started shaking and threw up... Your writing is incredibly potent and vivid, very realistic and very truthful. I definitely appreciate that you included female rapists (I'm a female, and I certainly agree that my gender is capable of raping either gender). I'm actually a Sakura fan (though I like SasuNaru fanfiction only) (in the anime she's really not dumb, just a normal 12 year old with a schoolgirl crush who will grow out of it later, we ALL were like that when we were younger) and I normally don't like Sakura bashing, but it happens a lot in the fan fiction world. Hey, its FAN FICTION, that means you can do whatever you want with the characters, and if people don't like your changes then they shouldn't be reading fanfiction in the first place. Either way, I think your writing is actually incredibly prolific, very brutally honest, and nakedly open with the subject. I highly appreciate this, and find your fiction to be vastly more mature than most I read (not that i mind it, if I didnt' like it I wouldnt' read it). I've been unable to get this story out of my head all day, and its been randomly causing me to start shaking. I'm sure my friends are concerned....THAT is a good thing, that writing has the ability to cause that strong of a reaction. I should be desensitized to these topics, infact I normally am, but your story simply resonates in a more heavy and powerful manner than most. To be honest, its almost like you have experience with the topic, though I hope to god not. Its not a pleasant thing to experience. i know.

Either way, you deserve much praise for your writing, and while I eagerly await the next few chapters, I know it might take a few to get revenge formulated onto the girls....which I hope is wicked and violent and mindfuckingly annihilating. Either way, keep writing. I dont' know if I can take much more trauma to Naruto, or even Sasuke, as just witnessing his friend's altered state has already wounded him deeply. But my cruel side is out and I await torture to the girls.....eagerly.
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From ANON - ladywolfTerri on December 05, 2006
normally don't read these (rape fics)... but I was in a dark mood tonight...really wonderful writing!!... now I want to keep up with it just to see Sasuke hopefully kill them slowly.. like maybe cutting them to pieces one joint at a time??... hmm.. or cutting off their hands so they can't ever harm anyone, writing "rapist", "slut" and "psycho" into their arms and faces with a kunai.. possibly hideously disfiguring them??.. well.. they deserve it!!

looking forward to their humiliation and pain!!..^^
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From ANON - kallipso on December 04, 2006
Death rides a pale horse and certain someones are going to be seeing that horse before they know it. If Sasuke does not do it there are several others that will. But Uhicha's are known for there possessiveness. I can't wait to read more keep it coming.
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From ANON - kawaiicrimsonkitsune on December 04, 2006
Poor Naru-chan! This chapter almost made me cry! Hurry and update! This is a good story and if you dare start to stop updating then I shall torture you!
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From ANON - trulywicked on December 04, 2006
Well they say that revenge is a dish best served cold.(pictures Sasuke getting revenge on Ino and Sakura and smiles) That was good, I cried again in a bittersweet way, cause Sasuke cares so much about Naruto but at the same time Naruto's so traumatized. You're such a good fanfic author.
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From ANON - genn on December 04, 2006
omg i loved this story. por naruto i hope sasuke takes care of him. I have always hated ino and sakura theyre both so stupid throwing themselves at sasuke like they have no decency. i hopeyou keep wrighting because i want to see what happens. i hope those biotches die XD
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From ANON - oraday on December 03, 2006
Woah. Sakura and Ino are in for it now. I would feel sorry for them if it hadn't been Naruto that they hurt. Of all people, how could anyone hurt Naruto!

Well, the rape symptoms Naruto has are very appropriate. I know he's gonna get better though. It seems Kyuubi's helping out with that.

I love the prospect of Sasuke protecting his Naru-chan. Can't wait for the next chapter^.^
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From ANON - Hello on December 03, 2006
Yes, revenge. Ino and Sakura deserve whatever Sasuke would do to them, poor Naruto. :( Update soon. :D
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From darktoy on December 03, 2006
YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!! HE KNOWS, HE KNOWS, HE KNOWS!!!!!!!!!

Sasuke, you have My both holy and unholy blessings! Make them pay! Make the title of Avenger be fit for you!!! Kills those Bitches!!!!!!!! Torture them, make them pay dearly for their wickedness!!!!!

(You got me very... I'm... I don't Know! I WANT TO KILL THEM MYSELF!!!)

UPDATE SOON! PLEASE; THIS FIC IS MAKING ME GO ALL PSYCHO!
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From ANON - Devils-Advocate3 on December 02, 2006
O God.......I cried for him....;_;...(still crying).....(trying to wipe tears away)....Anyway(still trying to stop crying) I......god please in someway have sasuke love naurto....;_;....Please. I love naruto so much and it hurts to see him in pain......And out of all people....to me.......naruto is the last person who deserves to be in pain....;_;........Please......(crying some more)......For example.......can you have sasuke.....love naurto so much.......and when naruto tries to ovoid sasuke.....Sasuke tries to find out why.........And while doing so, also tries to prove to naruto just how much he loves him.....(wiping away tears again)....sniff,...sniff, sniff...And latter,......some how, sasuke finds out what that bitch sakura, and Ino did to naruto........Probably by hearing them talk about it.....how they enjoyed his pain......and finding out just how totally FUCKED UP THEY REALLY ARE!.............(just finally starting to stop crying).......And I don't know.....Sasuke fucks them up some how........I don't really care how........Just as long as they get theirs in the end............And then, sasuke.........He proves to naruto that...., no matter what..., he will always love naruto...That he will care and protect naruto till the day he die's.......And naruto starts to trust....and slowly love sasuke.......And I don't know....They move in together.....and...Sasuke has not yet went all the way with naruto.....Of course they've pleasured each other.....but never when all the way.....^^ and one day naruto is ready to go all the way with is lover.....So when sasuke comes home.....^_^ (giggling with a tear stained face) He gets the best surprise of his life. Lol but that�s just a long example of what I wish, and hopes happens. ^_^.
(Smile) Any-who,......sad but still great chapter. ^^ O and I just so you know I so believe guy's can be raped by girls....And that's probably one of best ideas you had in this chapter......Because no has ever written about that,.....well so fare that I have read at least.......And yes, that is sad........but true.....Anyway I can't wait for your update. And may it be soon. ^_^ Latter.
Kisses ^_~
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From ANON - trulywicked on December 02, 2006
I cried. Poor Naruto, you are gonna have a happy ending right? and you're gonna have Ino and Sakura punished right? Please at the very least let karma kick the little bitches in the ass. This fic is emotionally wrenching and I will continue reading if only to find out if there's a happy ending coming.
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From ANON - Nomme de Plume on December 01, 2006
okay, are you continuing from here? cause i think it'll be super cool for naruto to go unconscious and kyuubi take over and completely rampage in konoha for a while, then calm down and reveal what those bitches did! cause, yeah, the village might not believe naruto's word over the girls', but they'd damn well listen to kyuubi. and then, those two should be brought before kyuubi and tremble in fear and terror while he threatens to eat them, and then they die by sasuke's or kyuubi's hand. yeah. you should totally do that.

or not. whatever. but i totally think i just fed myself my own plot bunny. anyway, even though this fic was different and it made me madder than hell what those bitches did (btw, how in hell could ino and sakura of all people capture naruto?), i guess i still like it from a literary stand point. i look forward to reading how you resolve this.
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From darktoy on December 01, 2006
I'M GONNA KILL THOSE BITCHES!!!!!!!!!! FUCKING WHORES!!!!!!!! aAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!*screams of desperation*

SASUKE TAKE REVENGE FOR NARUTO!!!!!!!!!!!

AND YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU!�!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Hello on December 01, 2006
Poor Naruto, being blamed at what he shouldn't. Damn Ino and Sakura. Sich bitches, raping him when he didn't want to, it's not his fault, his body reacting to the simulations. Tsk, tsk. Hope someone will help him.
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