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Reviews for Shards of Life

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on November 27, 2006
    Oh my fucking god. This is amazing. Possibly one of the best, BEST pieces of naruto (actually, scratch that, ANY ) writng I have seen on this site.

    You. Are. Incredible for writing this.

    Everything was so well done. In character and so real. The motivation behind everyones actions...just...so on target.

    If people read this and don't review it, they're kidding themselves. It's for mind-numbing stories like this that I read fanfiction. I only hope one day that I will rise to be such an amazing author as yourself.

    Seriously, words can't describe how amazing this is. *has the most serious face I've ever had on*
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  • From ANON - hinshihoushi on November 26, 2006
    Outstanding job! It was very deep and unexpected. Very moving. I had to read it twice. Just realized that you are also the author of many of my favorite stories, so I'm not surprised at how much I enjoyed this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2006
    very deep. excellent!
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  • From ANON - GravityFail on November 26, 2006
    I loved it, you'rea talented wrighter
    I hope to see more, and the poem was great.
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  • From ANON - InfinitusNyx on November 26, 2006
    This sounds so confusing at first but if you think about it...it's understandable. kawaisou(poor) sasuke...not really. much love for ItaNaru pair.
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  • From darktoy on November 26, 2006
    SASUKE YOU SON OF A...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now, you learn! you needed to lose every single thing you had in order to understand! Serves you right! TEME!!!!!!!!!!!!! (ok, I know It hurts, I feel bad for the poor guy.... but really.... Sasuke I'm so hating you for this....)

    Naruto, suffering like that... Thank god for the faithfull meeting with Itachi... Now, If only Sasuke would learn the meaning of "MOVE ON" everything would be nice wouldn't it?

    I'm in the mood to keep writing my fic...

    I love this shot, and I am Thankfull to you Cepheus for letting me read the beginning... It was worth to wait!!!!!

    Now now... gotta work and use the little time I have now that Aniki has gone party!
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  • From ANON - c-loke on November 26, 2006
    OMG!!!!!

    That was very good...lol...I had to read it again to enjoy the irony. Sasuke was a fool and for once I am glad someone wrought a point to prove that Sasuke was wrong in his plans. I loved the work, and I'm a Itachi/Naruto fan, so it turned out great for me. lol. I always knew that Naruto could help Itachi before he fell, I'm glad someone wrought about it. It was very good. Oh man...is it too much to ask more of Naruto and Itachi? Maybe from Naruto's point of view, or maybe a new fic about them? I really enjoyed reading this one, and talent like this should be shared, please please write more!!! lol

    email me if you happen to write more of Itachi and Naruto....that's if I'm not being to pushy...sorry I can't help great work. sessephinucloud@yahoo.com

    I hope to read more of your work in the future!!!!!

    Laters....
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  • From ANON - clouded on November 25, 2006
    O.O
    Wow...
    There were some errors but never mind that.
    It was kinda confusing but it was really good.
    Poor Sasuke. How regretful.
    It's nice to have a kind of perspective showing that Itachi might not have turned out the way he did if he really did have someone that is in a way too similar with himself yet different as well.
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  • From ANON - Annie on November 25, 2006
    That was an amazing story, I loved it. It was so heart wrenchingly sad and beautiful. However, I think you went a little crazy with the enter key. Also I'm pretty sure renounce is a transitive verb. It's a tiny observation that I noticed as I was reading. Anyhow keep up the good writing.
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on November 25, 2006
    I'm speachless. I can't find the words to describe this story. I love this! I now have to go back and reread this so I can sniff some more. I look forward to your next masterpiece.
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  • From ANON - zrina on November 25, 2006
    Woah... Very Very nicely done. Once again The Naruto Effect takes place!! You did an awesome job. Your writing skills made the story clear and easy to follow, excellent job. I enjoyed it very much.
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