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By : DevilnBlue
  • From bluegenjutsu on May 23, 2007
    Poor Naruto!! But I think Sasuke is going to tell those other kids off and then go hunt for Naruto. Great chapter, I loved it! :)
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  • From ANON - Tazeredfrog on May 23, 2007
    HIIII I'M BAAAAACK! -swoons for no reason- Yea it was really not a good idea reading this at 1:30am on a school night with a house full of family members staying over for the week. -sweatdrop- when you were describing that Sasuke 'owned' Naruto, it seemed like Sasuke had a whole flipping book of rules, long story short, I burst out laughing so hard I woke up the whole house. They weren't that pleased. -faints-
    GAH! When I wrote the review for the last chaper I forgot to add Happy Birthday -dies- REZ PLZ. -rez- So Happy be-lated birthday! (I've said that twice today, I forgot a neighbours birthday)
    SCOOBY DOO! Oh man, I LOVED that show when I was a kid! -laughs- oh the good ole' days.
    You make it seem like Sasuke is going to forget all about Naru-chan and side with those demon childern. -seethes- I'm looking forward to the angst-makes me all giddy. I'm such a sadist.- but I'm scared as well. I'm really a coward. -cries-
    Anyways, STUPID CLIFFY. -sobs- I'll deal I'll deal, you don't take long to update, which is FREAKING AWESOME! I've been waiting for some chapters to stories for at least 2 MONTHS. I feel like I'll die if I don't get the next chapter soon, but that's just me hahahaha. Okay so I'm totally delerious. Sleep, need sleep.
    Ja!
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  • From hisoka on May 23, 2007
    i hate reading cliff hangers, they make it hard to concintrate work for days until i find out what happens next. but as much as i hate cliff hangers i give you props for keeping people into it,good luck keepning it up.
    updates?
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  • From GoldenSensei on May 22, 2007
    Cute!
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  • From ANON - Damp on May 22, 2007
    Oh. My. God...You left us hanging *jaw's still on the floor* I can't believe you just did that. ARGH!! I MUST KNOW WHAT HE WAS GOING TO SAY!!! So please update for my little brain can't handle such dramatic cliffies *-*

    -Damp
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  • From anapana83 on May 22, 2007
    You r so EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    The was so cute. The cuddly stuff. I wanted to curl in bed with Sasuke too. I almost felt the hurt Naruto was feeling when they threw that object at him. His pain seems almost real. Very well written. I wonder what Sasuke was gonna say now! Happy late b-day btw!!! Update soon.
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  • From Dream2010 on May 22, 2007
    I noticed that you've quite a few chapters about Naru Sasu's childhood. It was really nice so you really lay out how close the two boys were. And when they grow up, well, Sasuke forgets?

    Happy Birthday! Great Job.
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  • From ANON - Briryan on May 22, 2007
    Great chapter!) You know I think that this is the first story I read that describes them using the bathroom. Sorry just had to say that. I love how Sasuke is so protected of Naruto. Looking forward to the next chapter. Happy belated Birthday!)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2007
    What will Sasuke say? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From Allys on May 22, 2007
    The beginning part was so cute. I really do love how you write the babies, yes I know they're not in pampers or anything, but anybody 6 and under is a baby to me, and Naruto seems to be about 5 or 6 maybe Sasuke is a little older but he's not 9 or anything so LOL. It's really adorable this story, I Love how possessive Sasuke is and I can't wait for him to put those other little snots in their place. Update soon please, and I know I told you Happy b-day already but, Happy Belated Birthday again.
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  • From ANON - mee on May 22, 2007
    why did you made an end of chapter so sad?? i almost cried....but it was very well written, so update soon as you can :)
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  • From Jadebyrd on May 20, 2007
    it has been well over a month since i have read fanfics, and you wouldn't believe how happy i was to see this story updated!! It made me really sad though when you said that you would discontinue the story if you dont receive a sufficient amount of reviews...i really hope you change your mind. your story is so beautiful and i love the way you are building up Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. They are so adorable and i really enjoying reading how it is that they grow so fond of each other. I have a truly blessed talent...keep up the awesome work! ^_^

    -Jenn
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  • From ANON - Damp on May 20, 2007
    They slid together happily, his body luxuriating in the fact that his dobe was back.

    Aww ^^, that was so sweet! I'm dying from the sheer cuteness of it all!! And that metaphor you used!! That was so beautifully used! You don't see many authors over here use such a metaphor and pull it off successfully.
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  • From ANON - Tazeredfrog on May 20, 2007
    Squeee! Fluff! I love them as cute little chibi's but I can't wait for the time skip, it'll be nice to see them all grown up. I think I've reviewed one of your stories before, but I really really can't remember. I don't come on AFF.Net much. -sweatdrop- I FREAKING love your writing style, the detail you put into ALL of your stories is just amazing, I'm always looking forward to the next chapter, perfect length per chapter I think as well. Not to long, not to short. All in all, it's absolutely amazing. =D
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  • From sassylion on May 20, 2007
    That was just adorable! Please continue. You have a good solid story on your hands and I love to see where it goes.
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