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By : DevilnBlue
  • From ANON - mei on May 23, 2009
    omg i love this story! >_
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on April 14, 2009
    Wow I was waiting for this chapter for forever!

    I'm really happy to see this sotyr is back on track, I've always loved it. Naruto and Sasuke-chibi are just so cute and I can't wait to see how they will finally talk to eachother after all those years.

    Please please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2009
    haha, that is one great way of having them reunite. But I love your description of Naruto like a deer in front of headlights.
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  • From ANON - hellohi on April 14, 2009
    i like the story so far and enjoy taht while you place the characters in the modern world you still manage to maintain their personalities and some of their attributes(like kimmimaro as the bone doctor). Just curious are you going to make kisame and itachi get together in the long run because i could kind of see that happen as a side pairing.
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  • From ANON - briryan on April 07, 2009
    Great chapter! I thought that the end was good. I can't wait to read Sasuke reaction to hitting or almost hitting Naruto. Looking forward tot he next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Briryan on April 06, 2009
    Sorry for the late reply. Great chapter. Poor Naruto. I hope he picks Iruka and Kakashi to become his parents.
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  • From ANON - anonanon on April 05, 2009
    Thank you for posting this story. I just discovered it today and I'm already hooked! Please update again when you can.
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  • From arabuzumaki on April 04, 2009
    would really love for you to update ^_^
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  • From TheSimi on April 04, 2009
    I'm so thankful for this update since this is one of my favorite stories. I found the timejumo interesting and it was nice to see what have become of the boys. Sasuke's relationship with Itachi seems tentative to say the least and if I were Sasuke I would actually look forward to go back to college and get away for a while. I believe you wrote Kisame wonderfully and I would like to read more about him.

    So Naruto finally got adopted...I'm so glad he got a family and curious of how it came to be. I'm also glad that Tsunade still has a place in his life.

    What will happen when Sasuke and Naruto meet again and how come the raven won't remember their past together?

    Thank you so much for a more than wonderful chapter and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From blugirlami21 on April 03, 2009
    The time jump surprised me though it really shouldn't have. The same with Itachi and Sasuke's relationship, I really didn't know what to expect from their relationship and what I saw really didn't disappoint, if that makes sense. Sasuke and Naruto's counterparts are in character for me, they are definitely not as cute as they used to be and they have obviously not kept in touch, it seems they have just not had the opportunity to continue it to this stage in their life. It makes me curious because Naruto doesn't seem like the type to give up on their relationship, it's not really in his character to do so. Sasuke on the other hand is easily an influenced character, he has always looked up to his older brother despite what their relationship now might be and if Itachi told him to forget about Naruto I don't doubt that he would. I'm glad that Tsunade was able to still hold a place in Naruto's life after the reveal. Naruto still seems to be a bit resentful but I'm glad that he got the family he so wanted. Loved the chapter and I was really happy that you updated.
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  • From ANON - bekah on April 02, 2009
    please continue the story. i understand that my fav autheress is not happy about people not posting revews, but please continue.
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  • From blugirlami21 on March 09, 2009
    I really like this story. It's probably one of the best stories of Sasuke and Naruto growing up together as children. Everybody is in character and I like that it is set in an alternate universe. Some things have remained the same, Naruto and Sasuke being orphans of a sort, Tsunade and Iruka having an almost instant liking for Naruto, etc. The fact that Itachi got off and that Sasuke helped, worries me. If the case was so stacked against him, how could the testimony of a small child who worships his brother challenge that? And Itachi seems set on keeping Sasuke and Naruto apart from each other, that's never a good thing.

    I will say that I am probably the exact kind of reader you hate on ff.net. I will say though that I have never seen your stories on ff.net, so I probably have never not left a review. If I like something, I will alert it or favorite it and I might not leave a review. Alerting usually just means that I am interested in seeing more but a favorite means that I will probably reread this story many times over. Sometimes I have nothing to say or it's late and I don't feel like writing a review and I forget the next day. It doesn't mean that I don't appreciate the time you put into writing these stories or don't respect a writers right to have some feedback. It's just that your manner of requesting reviews may be a bit off putting, but that's just my opinion. I hope you get enough reviews to update because I would hate to see such a good story not be read.
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  • From HikanDas on January 30, 2009
    Time skip! time skip! time skip!
    I can't wait. XD

    And this fic is awesome so farrrr!!!
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  • From ANON - Dragon*fly on December 21, 2008
    I like the over all flow of the story, but there are places where the gramar could use work. It seems like you need a beta.
    I like your au, and your weaving of the original into it, it's almost like a new story entirely in that light.
    Thank you for your hard work-
    Dragon*fly
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  • From ANON - Anna on December 16, 2008
    Hi,
    Just wanted to say that I like how well-developed and well planned your story is. There’s plenty of intricate details and the storyline flows very well. Personally I do not write but have read numerous Naruto fanfiction and I must say that this fiction deserves praise for it’s descriptive nature on emotions.

    The Naruto in your story is very different to the manga Naruto. However your portrayal and characterization of Naruto is so very endearing and most importantly believable. There is depth to all your characters. I especially like your rendering of Tsunade as a protective mother figure.

    I think your story is very addictive and I hope you will continue this story. It almost seems like the best part is yet come. What you given us so far is like the background info which lays out the foundation for “real story”. I suspect there will be heaps of excitement and angst in the transition to older Sasuke and Naruto. Can’t wait to read it.

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