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Reviews for Hidden Powers

By : GoldenSensei
  • From Vague on March 01, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

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  • From kagomegirl on June 19, 2007
    oh wow that was hot!! you know i would so love to see them share the uke responsibility. maybe add in a bit of mpreg if your into that lol. i think that since gaara isnt as strong as he used to be he should possibly retire and move in with naruto to konoha ^_~ they should also start a family in some way. it would be awesome. i love gaara and naruto together. they dont get enough lovin ^_~
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  • From ValkyrieNiennaHelyanwe on April 15, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    dont take it down! i mean, if you arent happy with it, dont continue writing it - but there isnt much gaanaru out there, and im in the majority that will agree with the nosebleeding shopkeeper - by god that is hot, and the smex was awesome, and if you take it down we gaanaru shippers will be devastated.
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  • From ANON - JT fin on April 08, 2007
    I like your story very much and I LOVE the paring....I just hate that good fics with this paring are so hard to find. If you're perhaps looking for a few plot ideas I have a couple...and I'd love to share...ANYway...I do love your fic and even though I'd be sad to see it go....if perhaps you started another one....I'd be happy
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  • From ANON - Seul on April 07, 2007
    I think you should continue the story. I don't think it's choppy, and I like it a lot. You're actually a good writer. It's hard to find people who don't have a million spelling errors these days. Please continue. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2007
    Just read this for the first time! I would love for you to keep writing! 0.0 pwease?
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  • From r3dhaz3 on April 07, 2007
    Awwww. Don't delete this! This is good.. well, I suppose a bit choppy... Why not just.. leave it for a bit, and when and if inspiration hits, come back and rewrite it or write another with the same theme? Naru/Gaa/Naru is good.
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  • From ANON - Larenna Night on April 07, 2007
    Look I know what you mean about choppy. It does have a good plot. I love it you have great writing skills I say you keep with it. write out one chapter fix grammical stuff. then ask reviews What can be done to it so it will seem better. To me it looks like your just going to fast one thing is happening right after another. Try and slow it down. Put more details, add more stuff about other characters. I know it is a Naruto and Gaara fic. But you want to explain what the other characters are doing not just puppet dude and Kiba. Add Timari and Shika more. These are just suggestions. If you really don't like then you don't have to do it. I write stories all the time just me there are some i never post because they suck to me but not other people. So don't worry about it if you have a question just e-mail me at LarennafaraNight@excite.com
    thanks
    Larenna Night
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  • From bluegenjutsu on March 21, 2007
    Yes, please continue this story!! Loved the GaaNaru lemon! :)
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  • From ValkyrieNiennaHelyanwe on March 21, 2007
    if you dont continue i will hunt you down and kill you in the most painful way i can think of....like locking you in a deprivatiton chamber til you scream, and then tossing you in a vat of scarabs - but since there arent any scarabs, itll have to be very hungry piranhas.



    and my god - i nearly joined the manager.......gaanaru smex rox!
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  • From DirewolfLilith on March 21, 2007
    -is holding her bleeding nose, stuffing more and more tissue up it to try and stem the blood loss- this is so hawt... if you do not continue this, i, along with naruto and gaara, will come and paddle you with toilet bowl cleaners... but, as incentive, i will give you cookies!
    -dire
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  • From wildkit on March 21, 2007
    Yes! For the sake of all that is naughty!!!! Please continue!!!!
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on March 21, 2007
    oh yeah we want you to continue! and i don't need to say anything more.
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  • From ANON - janay on March 20, 2007
    YES YES YES COUNTINE!!!!! i loooove this story! especially the part about tsunade's gigantomungous boobies!!! that was sooooo funny!!!! i was laughing so hard my stomach hurt!!! please countine!
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  • From ANON - MysteriousStranger on March 17, 2007
    Mmm, hot, sweaty, demon-boy smex. ::drools:: That was a really good lemon.
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