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Reviews for Never Ending Cycle

By : XLithiumX
  • From Vague on February 29, 2008
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  • From beautifullychaotic121 on February 01, 2008
    this story is very intriguing. I do hope you pick it back up again and continue it. :)
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  • From GuideShadow on March 07, 2007
    this is really good, you need to update! I feel so bad for Naruto
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  • From ANON - Emma125 on December 31, 2006
    WONDERFUL! what's gonna happen to Naru-chan?
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  • From ANON - Nita on December 30, 2006
    im really likin this story and cant wait for more...poor naruto...anywayz i hope there is more soon..have fun writin
    -Nita
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  • From ANON - Stalker-san on December 09, 2006
    I think i fell in love... 0-0

    Very nice first chapter and all the way to the fifth, but the spacing of the paragraphs took a while to get used to. You also forgot a couple of letters in a few words over the five chapters, but it still is a great fic.

    Nice story line, detail and expression. 5/5
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  • From ANON - minjin on November 27, 2006
    WOAH!! What can i say this is just amazing. I love this story!! I love the way you portay Naruto and the feelings that he has for Sasuke hehe ^^

    You have really amazing skills!!
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  • From darktoy on November 26, 2006
    Intersting, very very interesting.... Sasuke it's starting to put the moves on naru-chan... hmmmmmmm Kakashi would like to give some counseling to poor Sasuke if he heard that... (maybe he would do some teaching with the Icha Icha books?)

    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2006
    this is a sweet story
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  • From ANON - eien no ren on November 25, 2006
    Ok, you have all my attention... now... be a good girl and update, ne? I liked this first chapter a heck of a lot... good character definition... and you said MPreg? Wonderful! I love that! Nyan! Cant wait!
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  • From ANON - DrakenD4 on November 25, 2006
    AWESOME! Please continue cause this is good. ^-^
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  • From ANON - TheDeviant (too lazy to login) on November 25, 2006
    Great start!! Im sooooo excited for this fic... yay sasunaru and itanaru, my two faveorite pairings!! (even though itachi is a wee bit tipsy)

    Anyway, please update soon! I am in love!
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  • From ANON - Cepheus on November 24, 2006
    you know, you should add this to FF.net as well. if you didn't already. people would love it. ^^

    ...

    anyway, i liked the first chapter, even though everything moved a bit too quickly (and... the sleeping bag part sounded kind of disconcerning... and scary too O.o i think i enjoyed the way you're keeping the POV, even though you should show a bit more of what happens around naruto. i know you want to make it sound like he's speaking, but add some more detail, it would be better.

    as for the rest, it's a good premise and i want to know what happens next, especially about sasuke's return, and everything inbetween; also, naruto's intake of him killing orochimaru and kabuto was a bit pushed over (he would have thought about it a bit more, in my perspective) so he may have relapses on that later on...

    so this is Mpreg? and itanaru? (naruto pregnant maybe? and who would be the father?) i can't wait to get to that part. please, think about updating ASAP (as long as you can).

    Ceph
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  • From ANON - AnA La Pana83 on November 24, 2006
    I actually like the premise alot and there were some instances there that i found very funny, so for your first fic, that was a pretty good first chapter. Only thing i would reccomend is putting the appropriate spaces between the paragraphs/dialogue so that it's easier to read. You have a very good style, and i can't wait to read the next chap so update soon!
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