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Reviews for Catharsis

By : WaisetsuNingyou
  • From oohshiny on November 14, 2007
    it's very well-written, but a bit confusing. i look forward to the next chapter. email me when you update, please. my email address is deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From ANON - taishorin on January 09, 2007
    This is a great story, you are able to describe things so that all can see them clearly, whither it be the surroundings or the emotions, it is excellent.

    I look forward to reading the rest of this story, do not hesitate to finish it!

    Taishorin
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  • From ANON - L.E. Death (too lazy to log in) on January 02, 2007
    From reading only the first chapter--I would read more, but I have to complete and essay before Wednesday--I can tell you that you really have things going for you. As another reviewer has mentioned, I believe you should be getting more reviews. Your style is easy to read and you are quite good at story-telling.

    I also believe, like the other reviewer, that many are not reviewing this fic simply because of the OC. But you do it in such a tasteful manner that I find myself wondering why having the OC is such a problem. Ah well.

    Keep up the good work. ^-^

    ~L.E. Death
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  • From ANON - Tsukashi on December 22, 2006
    I've only read the first chapter so far. From what I've read you are an EXCELLENT author. I noticed that this story was marked 3 stars but the synopsis alone foreshadowed your skills as an author. And it did not disappoint. Some people can't see beyond the fact that there is an OC in the story - I had a good friend get accused of using a Mary Sue simply because she had a female OC. The person obviously didn't bother to read beyond the synopsis, as I doubt the person who negatively rated your story did.

    Some may be bothered by your use of Japanese, not understanding some of the suffixes or that kekkei genkai means bloodline limit - I am assuming Doukuseichi means something to do with poison from the context, at first I thought it was a form of eye technique, I know Dojutsu roughly means eye-technique. Anyway, you do not seem to be a person trying to show off your Japanese (which is REALLY ANNOYING), just using the appropriate words which do fit. You may want to include an author's note that explains what the terms used in your story means so those who are only watching the English version can follow along as well.

    It's already 2am, so I can't read anymore tonight, but I will be back to read more. I am always happy to find a new good author - little to no grammatical mistakes is all too rare in fanfiction. And the imagery of the genjutsu was just awesome. You really drew me into that scene.
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  • From ANON - Kilrath on December 17, 2006
    This story Rules, you use a great amount of detail and i want more
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  • From ANON - Nova on November 25, 2006
    This seems really interesting, please continue the fic, I want to see where you are going with this.
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