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Reviews for A Virgin Kiss

By : Hestia
  • From ANON - Tati on December 09, 2006
    Wow! just ... Wow! ***passes out***
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  • From ANON - Allys on December 09, 2006
    Wow that banquet scene was like a return to a five year old Gaara, that freaking episode is soo upsetting, so very sad. And then the reassurance, I felt so bad for Gaara, I'm not sure if I like seeing him humbled, I like sweet cocky kids, which is why I love Naruto. And by kids I mean boys of all ages. Then there were all those overwhelming sensations and that thing with the tenketsu when you mentioned his brain and all I'm thinking is 'wouldn't that give him a chemical imbalance, like endorphin overload, like drugs... Neji's like drugs' which made me smile, that was cute and funny and I've realised I think waay too much. Having said that I've been reading a lot of sweet stories lately and I feel the need to share, cause that's what I do with things I like - The newest one is Forgive Me 'Cause I Love You by Dirtry Angel, surprisingly good and has the most adorable chibi. Everyone's Got Secrets by Erisabesu, where I saw your review, which made me want to thank her as well for this story :) which in turn gave me the idea to plug you into to some of the amazing Yaoi out there (gotta help corrupt your mind too) :) Wow, anything by Arichang, Rasengan22, Monkey Lady and Ladywolf_Terri. And some oldies but goodies Chasing Naruto by Akai Tsume, Spiral Falling by BeccaAmon, Of Sacrifices and Love by Kirei and Cecilia, The Kiba/Shino series by JBMcDragon which begins with Mark, and The Meal by Hieisfierdemon. Okay that's a lot of stuff and I have more but that may be overload.
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  • From ANON - Kayo on December 08, 2006
    I'm dying in the beauty. I'm drowning in emotion...I'm crying. I'm not sure why. But I am. And it is because of your story. And...I'm in love. This is the highlight of my week, and it's been a fantastic week. Have I ever told you to never stop writing? It still applies. This story is funny (like the head chef!) and sweet (Gaara all over, all the time!) and passionate (no need explaining that one!) in more ways than one. Bravo.
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  • From ANON - Cindy on December 08, 2006
    You da bomb!

    Whew - best ever.
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  • From ANON - Hestia on December 08, 2006
    Hi folks--just a response to Anonymous on the nipple clamps--this may be another male/female thing. This may be a little TMI, but I always felt a bit of relief when I take nipple clamps off--especially if they are really tight ones. Yea, there is still some pain, but it's a different kind and to me it's a better kind--but I guess everybody's different. Anyway, Gaara has my kind of nipples for this story . . . Oh, and on the surge of chakra that the ninjas felt--it was just a surge of chakra, but not obviously linked to sex--in the "real" Narutoverse, people seem able to sense large ammounts of chakra, but not what jutsus or cause the chakra is being raised for. It would be sort of cool if they were aware it was sexual, but I don't want to alter the Narutoverse like that--I'm sure I've already made a number of mistakes. I don't have any clue about how Rock and Leaf got along during the 3rd's time, so I hope a liason thing would be ok--I couldn't remember any battles with Rock mentioned. I also didn't rewatch or reread the bit about Gaara's childhood--so I'm hoping I'm remembering correctly and the uncle never kissed Gaara or said that he loved him--although if he did, maybe it wouldn't count anyway since I clearly remember his declaration of hate as he was dying. Ok, sorry to sound so defensive here--I really love all the great comments you've been leaving me--they inspire me to keep going! I've embarrassingly abandoned a few stories that I've wrote into the ground, and I'm really hoping this will be my first long one I actually finish. (Though I'm happy that with fanfiction I seem actually able to get a lot farther than with original fiction--I have three novels that died around chapters 5-7, so at least I've broken that barrier!). Anyway, I'll stop rambling now,
    Love,
    Hestia
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  • From promise2003 on December 08, 2006
    Twas a kinky chapter...hee-hee. I am tired, must sleep...too tired to review, but loved as always...zzzzzzzzz
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  • From ANON - Anonymous for this comment on December 08, 2006
    Actually, nipple clamps hurt most when you take them off.
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  • From ANON - tova on December 08, 2006
    this story is just pure bliss to me It really gives me that warm fuzzy feeling all over I think you Rock!
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  • From ANON - Valenti on December 08, 2006
    SPECTACUALAR. wow... that was hott. seriously, I dunno where you get these wondurful smut (or no smut) filled chapters! whatever it is, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - eien no ren on December 08, 2006
    I loved the fireworks... I wonder how they will be received now that EVERYBODY felt them cum... nyan!!! *perverted happy thoughts!* Thanks for the update.... you made me Very VERY happy!!! No FBI after you for a while... nyan!!
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  • From ANON - ochibi-chwan on December 07, 2006
    I can't believe I'm saying this...but I think this pairing right now is even hotter than sasunaru!! I love it! ugh, i feel like such a traitor, but it's just written so well, that both gaara and neji seem unbelievably hot! can't wait to read more!
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  • From nekochannya on December 07, 2006
    flawless as ever... I felt Gaara's pain deep inside my chest... You are so good!!! I missed you, nyan... I was gonna send the FBI after you!
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  • From ANON - X1OA-Kira on December 07, 2006
    Awesome job. Can't wait for you to update~ I love this fic^o^
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  • From ANON - Kayaz on December 07, 2006
    Nice chapter...I like it... Poor Gaara is so spaced out. :P
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  • From promise2003 on December 07, 2006
    yippity skipity! I love your story as always, they are such cute little lovebirds.
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