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Reviews for A Virgin Kiss

By : Hestia

From Allys on February 24, 2007
LOL, as usual that was fantastic. I was a little worried about the arrow for a minute, I watched Shippuden Ep3 yesterday and I was like - someone's attacking Gaara!!! But it was all good :D, and then they actually got to fuck in the sand shell, LOL XD talk about fulfilling fantasies. I love that this is becoming circular. This chapter so played with my mind, cause in the middle of being all happy for the redhead I was like - Holy shit, why can you see the stars?!! *Sighs* That was emotional :), the good kind. Oh and about the little note at the end of the last chapter - I like B/D *pouts* you do it so well too :D. Although finding a clear Dom in this would be pretty hard, anyway thanks for the installment.
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From LuthienWildglen on February 21, 2007
Lol, I have to say that as a middle child I can completely relate to Kankurou trying to be the piece maker. I couldn�t stop laughing during that entire sequence seeing as I always seem to be in the same situation; making sure no fights erupt that is. You did a great job with that scene and I just thought you should know. Are you sure you�re not a middle yourself?

Anyway though, I�m glad you�re back. The two new chapters you posted were HOT, and I was starting to wonder when Neji�s insecure side would surface, and Gaara�s dominate side would surface as well. Regardless though, I look forward to new chapters. My best wishes for you and your writing.

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From Allys on February 21, 2007
Wow, that was kinda angsty. How in hell do you make sex angsty :D?? I guess it just takes talent, ne?
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From ANON - Marstic666 on February 20, 2007
OMG!!!!!!! I love these storys! They are my fav 2 read! I really loved chapter 20 cuz of the sex toy! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!!!!!!!!!! Keep making them!
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From ANON - Tati on February 20, 2007
YaY! an update.

Thank you. *sniff* I missed Neji and Gaara. You have an awesome story here. I love it.
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From Allys on February 19, 2007
Lol, you've done it again, that wonderful mix of sexy and funny, that's so very you. Good chappie, glad you're back to this :)
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From nekochannya on February 19, 2007
Finally baaaaaaccccckkkkkK!!!!!!! I love you!!!!! *glomps* I love you I love you I love you I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was so waiting for an update from you!!! I'm really addicted to this story... I dont know what I will be doing... if you decide not to write anymore... nyah!!! please... there's lots of things to write about... just look around... not like me... I have a mental roadblock... I know what's supposed to be written but cant find the words to do so... nyah!! but this chapter really makes me happy... and hopeful!!!! Nyah!!!
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From ANON - dragonslayer1 on February 18, 2007
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!? Is it over? Please don't say it is! Must contiune must have good smut! There so little Neji Gaara stories!
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From Ecks on January 19, 2007
I really have enjoyed your story so far. Keep up the good work!
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From nekochannya on January 05, 2007
*Clears throat* Is this on? yeah? Um... well... The cat has an announcement to make.
I LOVE NEJI AND GAARA!!!! HESTIA SAN IS TO BLAME!!!! I AM TURNING FANGIRL ON THEM! NYAAAA!!!!!!
Thank you for your attention.
(this last chapter... gods... how can I describe it? Kankuro's discussion with Neji clearly shows he cares... and I almost couldnt believe the ex virgin Neji getting it on with Gaara knowing the other one was gonna return any time... nyan... I understood his concern... but still... he has balls of steel... and blue balls too... let him cum...ne?)
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From nekochannya on January 05, 2007
*comatose cat spread eagled on the afore mentioned table*
Mooto kudasai, Neji-kun! Faster! Please!! *opens eyes* Uh! Oh, you were there... um... tell me you didnt see that... right?
Anyway... that was one fucking hot scene... I love uke neji, fisted gaara and rough play all around... It was fitting... I liked the way Gaara reacted to being in his father's rooms. *nods with satisfaction* this lemon is great... you see this is what I love of your writings, those lemons have a reason... all of them... and I love my lemons to have a reason to exist... like sex does in everyday life... Jeez... you got me ranting again... Neji-kun, where was I? Oh yes... Gaara-san! Harder! push your babies inside this koneko's... (you better stop reading now... you dont want to know... Hentai!)
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From nekochannya on January 05, 2007
*A minute of silence in honor of the death of a fanfic reader...*
Nanda? Neko chan is dead?
Hai!
What happened?
She read one too many lemons... now her soul is lost to us...
Please return Nekochan!!
(now you wont have any more reviews... at least until I read the next chapter...ok?... one has to be firm in these things...)
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From nekochannya on January 05, 2007
Maybe for you the Journey was 'fruitless' but to me it was deeply intimate and really enjoyable. Specially the last parts and Hyuuga's cheekyness...nyan (does that word even exist?) So, I enjoyed this chapter a heck of a lot... you didnt get me speechless and with a sudden urge to suck on a ... lollipop... ne? Arigatou!
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From nekochannya on January 05, 2007
Now thanks to you I am in need of a hard, hot ***k. Thank you... Your descriptions are getting if anything better... and my ability to praise you and write coherently has in turn decreased... in short... you are to blame if my brain fries... but please continue.
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From nekochannya on January 05, 2007
I'm back! Sorry for not being up to date with this..nyan! Already a chapter 31? Jeez! Then they wonder why I dont update more often... I am too busy reading all those wonderful chapters to update... sou ka? I am reading again... lovely conversation before the fire... but I think I already told you my opinion on that..ne?
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