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Reviews for A Virgin Kiss

By : Hestia
  • From Allys on March 10, 2007
    Aaaaww! Hott dominating mirror sex and a way sweet ending. Way to go Lady. Not to mention the bit in beginning with Naruto. Love it, but you seem to be gearing up for a sad ending, sad but awfully realistic, I'm not even really sure what I'm rooting for.
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  • From ANON - Syn on March 08, 2007
    Hey I love this story...NejiGaara is now my favorite pairing!! ^_^
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  • From nekochannya on March 04, 2007
    Dont worry about the toasts... you made them personal enough that we can guess who said what. you know? Naruto's reaction to the whole thing was so much fun!!! poor thing... he will take some time getting used to the changes in his friend. Friendship changes so much when a new boyfriend is introduced... nyah!! you feel jealous and sad... but happy at the same time... you know? I loved the naturality of the atmosphere between them both. It was beautiful... and I want to read more.. ne? *greedy cat grins like crazy* thank you!
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  • From nekochannya on March 04, 2007
    I read this yesterday but here is the promised review...
    I am so happy... your story is wonderful!! the little things that make a couple, the remembered smiles, the touches, the perverted grins... you have it all down pat! I wonder what they are gonna do now... I worry for them... 'cause you can tell they love each other...
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  • From Allys on March 03, 2007
    OMG Lady... Lady, Lady, Lady, what are you trying to do to me?? Wow, I am sitting here so fucking happy right now =D, and all I can say is Thank you. Oh God, Ino and I could so hang out. The smex was some of your best and that party was the sweetest thing. The toasts were perfect, don't change a damn thing, warm and fuzzy feelings all around, that was Excellent.
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  • From nekochannya on March 02, 2007
    I repeat... that was so cuuutttteeee XD!! That chapter was really a great way to express the feelings of when one is far from the loved one for a long time. I loved it... it was like a heartbeat... surging with love and happiness, anxiousness and hope. It was in fact my favorite! I adore it! Great way to show their relationship as something more than a meeting of bodies, but a meeting of hearts and spirits... really fitting... nyah!
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  • From oraday on March 02, 2007
    Hee, I just read this update and I had to review... The non-descript lemon... Now, I've never liked non-descript lemons much. Mostly because I've had to write to many of them and they are so tough to write. Yeah, I can't really read lemons with little description and not remember my hellish experience writing them. But your 10 or so sentences were just so hot!!! I'm amazed at how well you fully conveyed everything so concisely. You didn't need to describe every moment and the effect it had... Just the way you were able to convey all those emotions and actions in so few words... Ah, it was perfect. Absolutely perfect. I think this is my favorite chapter so far. Neji's introspection and his love for Gaara just make me feel so giddy.

    Oh, and thanks for this chapter. I'm feelin' pretty inspired thanks to you. I've got a NejiGaara fic I've been meaning to write and I feel so motivated to do it now^.^
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  • From Allys on March 02, 2007
    ROFLMAO!!! They did NOT!!! LOL! OMG That's so funny XD. They just grabbed each other and fucked in the middle of the road, huuhh, ;) *wipes a tear* That was great, and the all the feelings were awesome, to be that swept away, yeah don't we all wish. The sad thing about that is that I'm dead serious, to wish for something that consuming, C'est si bon.
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  • From Zigana on March 01, 2007
    I was wondering who was going to cave first. The storm is rising, let's see where it goes.
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  • From Allys on March 01, 2007
    Ohhh! Now I'm worried. I don't want them to fight, actually it may be rather amusing if they fight, but I don't want them to break up. I'm sitting here racking my brain for a compromise but I can't think of anything, which is why you're the author and not me. Other than that Neji bought Gaara a kitty - Kawaii!!! I'm kinda sad I missed the rimming, the butt plug and the skirt incidences, but I'm sure there'll be other fun stuff for me to go all fangirl over XD I'm very interested to see where this is going.
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  • From nekochannya on February 28, 2007
    Having second thoughts, eh Neji-kun? Bad, bad Neji! With an insecure lover as Gaara thats not a good thing... I wonder where you are headed... nyah... really... interesting... I love this hint of reality into their passionate world. more?
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  • From ANON - Allys on February 26, 2007
    Wow lady, you've made the sex all deep and psychological again, and of course it's still hot as all arse. The scene at the beginning where Neji is taking in the sights (Gaara's plugged and cum filled ass that is) and it makes him hard again, Hell if that wasn't memorable and knock my socks off material, nothing is. This also seems like you're leading up to something, some revelation or issue involving Gaara and their relationship, interesting, can't wait to see where (else) this goes.
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  • From flameofthenight on February 26, 2007
    I thought you weren't going into the deep kinky stuff full throttle? :S Still good, but...
    ~The flame reviews~
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  • From nekochannya on February 26, 2007
    This is getting more interesting with every passing chapter... They really did a number on poor Gaara... and Neji has his work cut out for him if he wants to keep his lover... ne? Great job!!!
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  • From ANON - Doomeh on February 24, 2007
    XD First of all >> I adore this fanfiction, it's art to me. Hot, smutty art. Please update soon as XD There was kind of a gap for awhile for you and that made me a little sad. Second XD :3 Since I now know you actually look at NejixGaara artwork perhaps you'd like to see mine? XD It's on DA, the name is MalikxthexPsycho. Look for 'Christmas Bondage' in the search XD You cant miss it? And I also has more. Somewhere in there. *Cough* XD
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