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Reviews for A Virgin Kiss

By : Hestia
  • From ANON - ydjessy on February 05, 2008
    TOTALLY LOVED UR FIC, I'M PLANNING ON READING SOME OF UR OTHER WORK. THIS WAS AWESOME. U SHOULD DO SOMETHING WITH NEJI BEING TOTALLY UKE. ANYWAY KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
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  • From on February 03, 2008
    i am confused

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  • From on January 15, 2008
    you firstly say that his sand wont let him bottom and then neji tops hims thus making him bottom and he doesnt even have to fight his sand. HUH? i am so confused. but i LOVE your style
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  • From Akaatje on November 29, 2007
    My god! I loved this. Especially the last couple of sentences. The love man!

    You write wonderfull. I love your style. They are so in character and stuff

    *wipes a way one tear, because the ending was beautifull*

    I staret reading this fic, and I never stopped. Lets say I am glad it is finished, so that I didn't had to wait for it.

    It was really good ^^

    Akaatje
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  • From cynaga on November 10, 2007
    One of the BEST stories on this site. I continue to enjoy... Thanks!
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on October 28, 2007
    ch 16
    damn. just the thought of waking up in diffrent places in diffrent sexual acts randomly. go neji....his night was like a haze of pleasure.
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on October 28, 2007
    ch 7
    “Suck me off, and I’ll bend over and be your bitch.”
    such motivational words. i think i was a man in a past life, because they seem to be inspiring me. Your skills of writing gay erotica are top notch. I feel all hot and bothered. I sometimes really do wish I was a guy…..ah neji and gaara are soooo fucking hot when they fuck. Sweet god In heaven. I think I want to marry you. J poor Gaara, he loves neji….gaara doesn’t even know how to deal with normal emotions. I wonder how he will fare with love.
    -forgotten
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  • From LadyLaran on October 24, 2007
    I've read the D/s one you did and decided to follow the link to your other stories and found this one. I laughed and cried through it. I think a companion tale following Naruto's discovery of himself and the relationship development between him and Sasuke would be great!
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  • From Gabo0 on October 15, 2007
    OH MY GOD. This was amazing. I especially liked Neji's dealing with his feelings of inferiority and his denial and all that. It was amazing. Although sometimes I felt Gaara was a little out of character (mostly on the lemon scenes), the whole thing fitted together in the end and I'm not sure if I'm happy or sad to reach the ending. Hope to see some more of your work, this was amazing.

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  • From sweetciel on September 01, 2007
    *cries* That is the best thing EVER! So sweet and smutty! I would love to have seen naruto and sasuke get together. But i guess that's what D/s is for huh? You are amazing. Keep up the highly addictive work ^_^
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  • From Ashcat on July 27, 2007
    Despite only having seen one episode of Naruto (and disliking it) I really enjoyed this story. I appreciated how you added in details for people who weren't super familiar with the story and made it completely understandable :) I liked the way you did the epilogue :) that was sweet and I appreciated that you had moments of doubt after the random love at first fuck in the beginning. Thank you for a great story!
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  • From Gwyllion on July 17, 2007
    Oh no.....O__O!!! I wrote such a long message to you on my compliments and it got cut off....*sobs*
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  • From Gwyllion on July 17, 2007
    Just finished your fic and my lord!!! Can I die now now that I know where heaven is? Geez...you are such a superb storyteller! I think I love you.
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  • From Shedbloodytears on May 16, 2007
    I won't be able to say this enough but I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! OMG!!! This was amazing. The ending was just... and the middle was like... and the smutt was... *huge nosebleed*. One of the best stories I've ever read. The "Love Man" made me cry in happiness, then the "Love Machine" made me cry in laughter. PHENOMINAL! EXTRAORDINARY! OMG!

    *brain explosion*

    Ougon

    Ps. I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!
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  • From Vague on May 12, 2007
    Hello Author,
    I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

    About the Archive:
    The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

    Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=55. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

    Vague
    Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
    http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
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