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Reviews for Betrayal and Love (Finished)

By : DemonicTenshi
  • From yaoihime22 on April 14, 2009
    good storie i dont do narusaasu but plot wise was good
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  • From bluegenjutsu on February 05, 2007
    I love the happy ending and you wrote the lemon very well. :)
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  • From DemonicTenshi on January 13, 2007
    To my readers

    Thank you for you're reviews and Anon thank you for you review and everything however I put it in the summery that it's a Naruto and Sasuke Fic. Sorry you didn't like it but may be next time you should try reading summeries and aurthors note.

    Thank you again
    ~*~DemonicTenshi~*~

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2007
    *Sigh* this was a NaruSasu fic....*shivers and wished you had a warning saying it was*...well I liked the first 4 chapters and umm half of 5..*sigh*
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  • From ANON - riddle_me_yellow on January 12, 2007
    LOL Nurse Tenshi-Lee, I completly agree with your review. What she (or he) said!
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  • From ANON - xKuramaxHieix on January 07, 2007
    I like the plot line idea, I do, but I don't like the shortness of it. I feel that you can expand it a great deal more instead of shortening it like you have. Also, you have plenty of spelling mistakes in your story. I'm sorry your BETA is irresponsible about it and hasn't responded to your chapters, but if you would like a BETA, and a active one, I'm sure if you advertised for one you could get one. Or I'd be willing to BETA it for you. If you would like that, I would be happy to help you by editing ALL the chapters as your BETA person.
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  • From ANON - Cindy on January 07, 2007
    I like the way it began with Sasuke and Sakura and lead into Sasuke and Naruto.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2007
    good start, can see this going somehwere interesting....
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  • From ANON - Naruto's wings on January 02, 2007
    ok, last time i said that you had a few small mistakes, this time i say that it was VERY confusing. (i suck at spelling so it obviusly wasn't that) sometimes you had a question mark when it should be a comma or a period, and sometimes you should have started a new line for a sentence (when a difrent character starts to talk, it should be on a new indented line, not the same paragraph as the character before it, it makes it to confusing) but, i still love the plot, it rules, and it's kind of sad begining (but hot). again, if you need a beta (a person who edits and fixs the mistakes) i can help, just don't expect me to fix spelling mistakes, i suck at spelling.
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  • From SerenityMalfoy on December 08, 2006
    i'm glad if u do continue this story i really like it ^_^
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  • From ANON - oraday on December 08, 2006
    Who are these bastards who have been making bad comments. Honestly, there's nothing in this fic that can be justifiably be categorized as bad. I'm glad you're continuing! Just ignore those people, they don't know quality fics when they read them...

    Hope you feel better. It sucks being sick. :P
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  • From ANON - j_narusasu_c on December 08, 2006
    Please continue! I love your story!
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  • From ANON - oraday on December 08, 2006
    'Kay, so I first read the review for the fic to know if there'd be anything I wouldn't like... There were some grammar complaints, but since they were from people who couldn't actually spell grammar, much less use punctuation correctly, I didn't take them seriously. Neither should you.

    I love SasuNaru fanfiction and I read a lot. I have read some of the absolutely most horribly written things ever posted, but, because the plots were good, I didn't really mind. As for your fic, it is well written and you have a kick-ass plot.

    Seriously, I don't have any problems reading this fic. People who do are half-illiterate or something. Sure, the extra question marks were a little confusing, but they didn't take away from the overall effect so I just ignored them. The point is that you were able to convey the important subjects so that I could read around the rare mispellings and punctuation weirdness.

    This is an awesome fic and I really think you should continue it. Don't be discouraged by a couple of crummy reviews and pay attention to the more positive ones. One thing you can count on is that you'll always have SasuNaru addicts like me to support you, so chin up and get to writing and posting the next chapter^.^
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  • From ANON - FallingStAr10487 on December 08, 2006
    what!!!! NO! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! YOU CAN'T STOP! I REALLY REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY! PLEASE DON'T STOP!
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  • From ANON - dark isle on December 07, 2006
    I'm sorry but...i'm having a very hard time figuring out why it your so negative towards yourself. I've read your reviews and i failed to find even just one person outright complaining to your face or just being an ass in general. I can sense that you're easily discouraged, and just the teeniest amount of criticism forces you to berate yourself, but, unfortunately, that's what reviews are for hun.

    You know, no one is blaming you for your lack of skill, everyone has to start somewhere, and if ever someone is holding that against you, then they deserve a kick in the nuts. However, the reality is that i've only seen people support you, so your attitude makes no sense.

    I'm not patronizing you, i know EXACTLY how you feel. I used to feel down a lot for no apparent reason really but the past is long gone and now i write because i enjoy it. If your not doing this because you love it, then you probably should take it down and give yourself a break. I say it with all the intention of being a concerned stranger that you should really consider believing in yourself. Your not nearly as awful as you think, your reviews say so.

    I've been discouraged too many times to even count, but now i realize that I should have loved myself more, and not listen to the voices in my head that tell me "i'm not good enough", because those voices are liars. You are not a loser until you throw the towel, in which case, your just proving to yourself that all those voices were right all along, by giving up.

    Bear in mind that i dont think any less of you and i didnt write this to make you feel even worse about yourself. I wrote it because i CARE and that what your feeling has happened to all of us, its just you who allows it to affect you. So please, dont give up for such a pathetic reason, its really such a shame. I look forward to your next chapter, because you WILL post it, cause if you dont, then that just goes to show that you were right all along, and you've got no one else to blame but yourself.

    You've got my support, so why dont you take the time to support yourself hm?
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