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By : littleolmee
  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2006
    ACK!! NOO! YOU CAN'T JUST STOP THERE!!!

    *cries*
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  • From nekochannya on November 26, 2006
    perverted but very, very nice... I never had Sasuke pegged as an exibitionist, but that was way too hot, nyan... I just hope he remember to scram when he finishes...update!
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  • From ANON - billy on November 26, 2006
    This is great so far so don't take to long on the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on November 26, 2006
    Oh my ... And they aren't done yet. Sasuke better run as fast as he can when the walls come down...
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  • From ANON - Sama on November 26, 2006
    Omg!!! I love, absolutely love this story! You have to update and soon! Please! I can't wait for the next capture! Awesome girly! Ttul!
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  • From ANON - Izzy on November 26, 2006
    i am now a loyal fan to this story!!!! omg i love it, it explains everything to well!!! i feel bad for the 5th though, hehe naruto is like a little brother to her. i hope sasuke servives!! wait, of course he will...rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrright?(smirks) "because if he doesn't you know i'm gonna kill you :D" (jk, but really) u know what i mean, anyway...i can't wait!!! this story is heading inn a great direction, but i wish that sasuke would have done all this in a more privite place... hehe keep up the good work!!! i'll check soon
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  • From ANON - wouldnt-u-like-2-no on November 26, 2006
    omfg!...and that pretty much sums it up. nice work!
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  • From ANON - Clemen on November 26, 2006
    Sorry I didn't review the second chapter, I forgot. But here I am, wow poor naruto with everyone watching. Very original. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope you update soon. Take care and god bless.
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  • From ANON - HisNameIsMyNM2 on November 26, 2006
    I'm really enjoying this story. I hope to see another chapter soon. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2006
    I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT KEEP UPDATING
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  • From ANON - Wing_Goddess on November 20, 2006
    Doesn't Anko have a curse seal too? did she die? XD

    Please type more!! i love it so far ^_^
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  • From ANON - Briryan on November 17, 2006
    I really like this so far!) I can't wait to read how Naruto will react to what Sasuke has planned for him. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on November 17, 2006
    Well Chap Two went Faster.Sasuke seems to have picked up Oro's persuasive skills anyway! Grins. Naruto 's happy. Maybe too happy (he deserves it!) but not stupid, he notes Sasuke is changed (touchy-feely). Did Sas. abort the children in the other men?He needs more than one or even ^ kids to re-new ths sharringan,if they showed up that would help his cause, I thought those seven men (if you include sasuke) together in a dungeon teaching sex to a georgeous Sas,it would make some amazing pwp side fics (big hint). Oh yeah. I actually like this, Sasuke is smooth not out of control and Naruto gave him permission, its not non con. He would have said yes I think. but how much does Sasuke know about the seal on Naruto? It seems to unwind a bit fast , more like an out-line of a story but this is still set up right? The action /dialoue 's cool.I wouldn't have wanted to see much of that battle if your battle writing skills are not above average, though I hope we see more action with Itachi. Itachi has to die ? Is he really a bad guy? He is so yonge ? And besides,you know who, is you know what and s/he is a hero. I haven't read past K's face when he sees....so I don't know what happened. Damn. Better try to get on there again. It gives me probs,that site! Good luck and thanks.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on November 17, 2006
    Stupid thing!! this machine. I wanted to say that you treat women rather dismissively.Tsundae could do everything needed, now I realised her age ect. But the point is they exist! It's not that they don't exist, its that Sasuke don't get out much! He has only lived two places and runs from women anyway (point; women in sound are "crazy bitches" which means they don't have tea and sit in a home all day so that means they will be bad mothers? They swear? They'll kill. They have abrassive personalities? So does Naruto.{So do I} That was a cheap shot.).So it might be more acurate to say he has no time or disposition to look for a suitable one( who wants to ).^=^
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  • From ANON - blisblop on November 17, 2006
    its thourough and well written ,a bit dry but thats the nature of the subject. I'm glad he let those men go. Actualy itachi would be best but thats not to be. If those men could escape why not him? Not to be i guess, no baby.
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