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By : littleolmee
  • From ANON - Briryan on November 30, 2006
    Great story! Love to read the sequel when you write it. Kinda wanna know what Naruto had. It is a boy or a girl and did Sasuke come back? Could you email me if you and when you do put up the sequel? Please and thank you.
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  • From ANON - Sama on November 30, 2006
    Omg please please write another story to this! AHHH! I wanna know what happens! LOL awesome story though and I can't wait until the next story comes out! Ttul!
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  • From ANON - mE on November 30, 2006
    NOOOOO!!! How can you do this?! I kind a understand and kind a don't. It'd be too normal if Sasuke just came back and it'd be all happy happy, but still.. why? But either way, I really loved this story. Part of me wanted to know what's going to happen and part of me doesn't. But thank you. This was one of the best stories I've read in a while. Good work and quickly start the next one!! And with more and more and more action!! With your style.. I'm dying on nosebleed now, so I can't even imagine what would happen with story that had even more action! :D so keep up the good work. We yaoimaniacs need people like you. You're our daily drug! :D Thanks
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  • From ANON - XZanayu on November 30, 2006
    I love this story so far. I hope Sasuke is alive and comes home to Naurto and their child soon. Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on November 30, 2006
    Oh my what has happen to Sasuke and will the child Naruto having will be a boy or girl? Good story...
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  • From ANON - yura on November 30, 2006
    *shokes with the popcorn*

    I would do the same thing if I was your beta.

    But as you said, you get more with sugar than with vinegar.

    So I'll tell you that I liked this chapter very much, the sex scene was great and Naruto was very happy with the fact that he is going to have a family of his own.

    And I do hope that you write another story to tell the rest of us what happens next!

    I don't know if you're reading my other story... if you ever read it let me know, because I wil really like too hear your opinion, just don't be too mean if you don't like it please?
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on November 30, 2006
    oh

    my

    god!

    how could you just leave it like that?! naw, just kidding. it actually reminds me of something i would do. in fact, i think i did do it once... anyway, i loved it! the medical stuff kinda freaked me out. i mean, sasuke and evil medical jutsu is a mix one must take in small doses, but at least it made your story unique. others would have just had the uchiha discover that kyuubi could enable naruto to have children.

    man, i hope you write a sequel, where maybe sasuke comes back to find naruto and his son very happy, but he is being sentenced to death, and he only has a few days to spend with his family, but somehow, in the end, he's not killed...

    yeah, my muse runs away with me sometimes. anyway, great job. i look forward to your next story! or another chapter in one of your unfinished pieces, whichever comes first. ^__^
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  • From ANON - tricia on November 28, 2006
    I LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - mgp on November 28, 2006
    I like how meticulously Sasuke does everything... in front of everyone! So funny. Hm, can't wait to see how a pregnant Naruto acts.
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  • From ANON - dana on November 28, 2006
    this just keep getting better and better. not only are they doing wrong things to naruto (in my eyes now with his consent) i can't help but now feel bad that everybody was watching. are you going to have sasuke gone for a long period of time or is he going to get to see te cute picture of naruto pregnant. can't wait to see your next update
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  • From ANON - Demonrights on November 28, 2006
    Yey you updated, I really enjoyed this chapter poor Tsunade though she must really be frustrated and freaked out, well anyways update when you can ^_^ _demonrights
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  • From ANON - lo on November 27, 2006
    I like this and it is weel written. Nice job! I 'm so impressed. I can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Maddie on November 27, 2006
    I love the story so far!!!! Please update asap!
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  • From ANON - mE on November 27, 2006
    Omg!! This is probably one of the best fics I've ever read. Not just because of the plot, but the fact that you're writing from Sasukes perspective. I've never seen a fic like that. I love it! It's usually Narutos point of view in SasuNaru fics and Naruto fics in general. And besides I haven't seen a good, sorry I mean SUPERDOPERGREAT!!, SasuNaru fic in ages. They're usually AU or poorly written, but yours.. WOW! But I'll stop now or you'll think I'm only fooling around :D Thanks for this fic and keep up the great work! Hope to see the fourth chapter soon, 'cause I have very low tolerance for waiting! ;D Thanks again, luv ya!!
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  • From ANON - yura on November 27, 2006
    Wow! That was a mean moment to stop the chapter!

    Sasuke is putting up quite a show indeed, I wonder how'll he manage to flee after that, with Tsunade and Jiraiya up for his head...

    Please update as soon as possible!
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