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By : littleolmee
  • From ursweetheartless on February 28, 2007
    OMG THAT MADE ME CRY >.< okay, so it was probably something to do with how freaking tired i am right now, but whatever, the story was great but the ending, *GAH* please please please make a sequel quick, because, poor naruto, sasuke could be dead somewhere and he'd have to raise a kid all by himself *whibble* loves
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  • From ANON - trulywicked on January 08, 2007
    Yaaaaaaaaaaaay! Follow up story! (glomps you) Oh I'm so happy! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2007
    i could kill you! bad very bad! I wanna know what happened!
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  • From ANON - dana on January 07, 2007
    contrary to popular beleif i do not think you should be killed just slightly tortured like your leaving me (sike). i like where you ended this story. it's more like life if you can undestand what i mean. not everything is so easily solved. that does not mean that i can't wait for the sequel because i want to see what a kid between those two would look like. congrats on your job. hope everything goes well.
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on January 07, 2007
    A sequel would be wonderful. Your ending just kinda left hanging there. I look forward to see how you are going to do it. Will Sasuke be back as himself or not? I will guess I will have to wait and read it. Good Luck!
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  • From ANON - dana on December 07, 2006
    is that really the end or a cruel cruel joke that you are playing on one of your avid fans.how could such a cool story end like that. are you writing a sequel like immediately. will sasuke come back in time for the birth or will he show up years later after the child has grown up. so many questions and it seems like you are going to play hard to get with the answers. what ever i have to do in order for you to get your story writing mojo back just let me know.
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  • From ANON - hope21108 on December 06, 2006
    i love this story almost as much as to regain what was lost
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on December 02, 2006
    that was good even if it did seem unfinish
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  • From ANON - anon on December 02, 2006
    oh no! you can't end it there! please! that would be just cruel! usually i don't like mpreg, but i found the concept behind this story very unique and interesting. i think you are an incrediably gifted writer, your stories always make me really happy, and i'm begging you to please continue. i was really looking forward to seeing Sasuke and Naruto playing house in this one. so, thanking you in advance (but no pressure) ...
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  • From ANON - Istas on December 01, 2006
    Woman, you better continue writing this thing. I'm in love with it. You wrote it in such a way that I could actually see this happening in the Naruto world. I'd even offer to beta but college is being a b*tch and I'm constantly writing papers that /I/ haven't even written anything new since this semester started. Hell, I don't care if you just write an epilogue! Just write something; it needs a more...conclusive ending.

    Also, sorry I haven't been able to review lately; I'm hardly able to finish reading a chapter a night because I have so many assignments. I think my teachers are trying to kill me...
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  • From ANON - trulywicked on December 01, 2006
    Wha? You mean that there's only four chapters to this fic?(whimpers and eyes fill with tears) You HAVE to continue or at least make a sequal, please please please I love this and I so want to see a happy ending.(Falls to knees and folds hands and begs)Pretty please with naked Sasuke and Naruto on top? Pleeeeease?
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  • From ANON - Demonrights on November 30, 2006
    *laughs* great ending I do the open eneded thing a lot and people love me and hate me for it you should go check out my story dreama devils dream tonight if you feel like it. Really great story five stars JA
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  • From ANON - lo on November 30, 2006
    I am really getting into this. I can't wait to see what you do with this next.
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  • From ANON - Izzy on November 30, 2006
    what!!! ur not adding on???? i hate you!!! omg it was getting sooooo gooooooooooooood, there hasn'tbeen a yaoi sasunaru mpreg anywhere!!! like this anyway.....but i ove you for writing it =D have fun and write more, i lve ur style
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  • From ANON - Avonne on November 30, 2006
    Great story! I was a little surprised at where you left it, but it leaves alot open for interpretation - so I hope you decide to write a sequel! I'd really like to know if Sasuke returns safely to Naruto and the baby!
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