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By : littleolmee
  • From on March 21, 2007
    Loved it! If you ever come with another chapter I would love to see that too!
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  • From ANON - anon on March 21, 2007
    Hey! I really wish that there is a continuation... like an epilogue of Nobuyuki as a genin and his parent's life after 9 years of being together. I would really appreciate it. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - hope21108 on March 21, 2007
    i love you and this story if you could do somthing for to regain what was lost i would be so happy
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  • From roely on March 21, 2007
    i loved it! i was almost afraid that sasuke died! i hope that u find it within you to write a sequel! i would loved to read more for ur writting
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  • From nekochannya on March 21, 2007
    now that ties those loose ends... and makes me squee with happiness!! although greedy old me would love to see how many other siblings Sasuke can get out of his 'stud' ( I really laughed at that one... XD' It would be interesting to see how Sasuke wins Naruto over juggling his punishment and with the rejection of the whole shinobi population... nyah! poor Kakashi and Tsunade... I would have been cheering him on, but hey! I love Yaoi... LOL so Yea... have you thought about a sequel? if not... will you?

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  • From ANON - lo on March 20, 2007
    AHH... So you gave the readers some closure. That was a sweet ending, nice work.
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  • From ANON - dana on March 20, 2007
    i bow to your superior greatness and glory. thanks for writing another chapter to this story even though it was finshed. i so loved how you did this chapter especially everyone coming up and just banging sasuke in the face (ha ha ha). i vote that you have one more chapter with sasxnar smut because naruto deserves to at least have some sweet loving one time without the audience (at least the written kind). can't wait to see how you truly end the story this time. will there be any more kids. can't wait to find out.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2007
    i really like this and i hope u update soon
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  • From BishounenKrazed on March 20, 2007
    you continued!! and sasuke came home!! YATTA!! this was great. and i wouldn't mind one more chapter, but if you don't do it, this is also a good place to stop.

    i look forward to your next work!!
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  • From ANON - malina on March 20, 2007
    how about the punch from sakura? i'm really really really grateful that u continued w/ this story. the last chapter just didn't feel like an ending at all. i know ur probably not gonna like this but i have to ask anyway. one more chapter please (x3). another chapter w/ lemon on it. then continue updating "to regain what was lost". by the way i like how sasuke accept his fate as long as his w/ his family. i thought that was soo sweet.
    thanks you
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  • From Zrina on March 20, 2007
    I am so glad you added another chapter!! I LOVE it!!!! And, yes, we all need some more sasuxnaru smut, so indeed another chapter is called for!! Seriously, though, it was a beautiful ending and rounded out the story much better.
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  • From anapana83 on March 20, 2007
    Awww. I like this last chapter here. Very nice. Can't say i feel bad for the punches Sasuke got. I mean, even if Naruto got a beautiful son out of it, i'd be indignant too over Sasuke's breeding method there without consent. Anyway, it was good!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2007
    I'm glad Naruto is willing to give things a try with Sasuke and that Sasuke will get to know his son. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From emp78 on March 20, 2007
    That was so sweet! I loved Nobuyuki saying, "Welcome home, old man." lol. You wrapped the story up quite nicely.
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  • From llyoung on March 20, 2007
    Thanks for continueing this story. I hope you do add at least one more chapter after this one.
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