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Reviews for The Café

By : sharinganswirl
  • From perfect_blue_rogue on November 17, 2006
    now that's hot! need more...going into withdrawal.....
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  • From ANON - macy on November 17, 2006
    wow. that was just yummy! i am totally loving this so far. hinata's really cute too. i can hardly wait for more. looking forward to the sexiness and how the story develops =)
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  • From ANON - innerchild on November 16, 2006
    that was definitely different. but in a very good way. i really like it so far. i can't wait until you update.

    -inc
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  • From ANON - antilogicgirl on November 16, 2006
    Still liking this excessively. Hinata being mischievous is a breath of fresh air where her portrayal is concerned. Usually, as you know, she's really shy and her stammer is exaggerated. Thank you for making her intelligible. Naruto and Sasuke together in the park...on a bench, was it? Very nice. Great touch with how the Uchiha Massacre turned out, and the reasons behind it. And good luck with your school work. I still think you're nuts for taking all those classes, but everyone's crazy in their own way. Looking forward to more from you ;P

    a/j
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  • From ANON - Pho on November 16, 2006
    Hey, thanks for pointing out your story for me. It's so sweet, and their attraction is so fast, it's a nice change. I like what you have going. Yay for thanksgiving break, it means more stories! Your discriptions are awesome btw. Good work, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - burr on November 16, 2006
    that's a really wonderful story! i like the interaction between the characters. i hope you'll update soon enough, i can't wait to read the next part, it sure will be yummy! aww i hope for some narusasu, i love seeing sasuke as an uke, it's in his name after all :D
    anyway, keep up the good job!
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  • From ANON - Starry on November 16, 2006
    I love it!

    It's so sweet, but so great at the same time. It's great to see such passionate raw lust. Can't wait for the next chapter, hon!
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  • From UzumakiLover on November 16, 2006
    Oh wow, that was good. I think Neji's nice all friendly the way that he was. I'm also happy to see a calm cool Hinata. I know she's shy and all, but the way you made her... was very bold. I liked it! Also... so Itachi had already started killing Uchiha before his folks right? I was just a bit confused. I mean I know he died by his father's hand...with is sadness in a half, but yeah. Jus asking. Also!! Your scene made me love the park! Woot yay SasuxNaru ^_^ well I guess Naruto won't be so shy about calling Sasuke anymore hehe. Great job, thanks for responding back to me!
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on November 16, 2006
    another great chapter! and, wow, sasuke's past... such an interesting concept. their father killing itachi is something i've NEVER read before. and naruto's schedule is yours, ne? man, i know some music majors, but i don't think even their scehdules are quite that filled to the brim!

    anyway, i can't wait for chapter 3! naruto's not going to, like, be confused and think he likes sai, right? maybe sai's just like his ex. i don't know, but i will if you update. so update soon!
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  • From ANON - ai-chan on November 16, 2006
    i dun wanna be all paris hiltony right now but~
    seriously thats hott lol
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  • From ANON - Cindy on November 16, 2006
    Too, too much fun. Love the world/atmosphere you've created for them. I have never read a hotter "lemon" - and just from making out~! Yum! Please keep on!!!
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  • From ANON - Dark Toy on November 16, 2006
    I love it!!!!!!!!
    Why, oh why dud Itachi have to die!!!!!!!!!!! (for the sake of the script girl, deal with it)
    So lovely, so beautifull, ... so short!!!!!!!! You left me craving for more!

    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Tara on November 16, 2006
    YAY! Jealous Sasuke rocks!! lol. My apologies. That scene at the park was hawwwt!! *fans face with hand* Can't WAIT for next update!
    Hurry and UPDATE!
    I'm beginning to get attched to this story!
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  • From ANON - Tara on November 15, 2006
    WOW!! Haaaawt!! fyah-hawt!! This story is veeeerrrrry interesting!! Sugoi! I love it! LOVE-IT! LOVE-IT! Luuuuurrrve it!! Please update soon!!! Cannot wait!!

    ps: would you mind making Naruto not sooo...errm...not so much of an easy catch, if you know what I mean. Like he should keep his cool and refrain from showing his feelings...playing hard to get! I always ask for that. But that's how it should be. There always have to be a frutrated and jealous Sasuke too! Otherwise the story is incomplete! lol.

    Sayanora! Add soon!
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  • From ANON - Dark Toy on November 15, 2006
    What's with this boys these days? all about a good fuck ne?
    Love it, So just I have one request....

    UPDATE SOON!
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