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Reviews for The Café

By : sharinganswirl
  • From anapana83 on January 21, 2007
    I logged on just to review this story. I fell in love with it from chapter one and read the four chapters here in one sitting. Good job. I hope you update soon. BTW, that last chap, wasn't bad at all, for having been written during a writer's block. I know thats tough. Either way, you could always tweak it later on.
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  • From AreYouLonelyForMe on January 21, 2007
    Wow.....that was os awsome!!!! I totally love it!!! It's got hot Naruto and Sasukeness and it's just so awsome!!! What if Neji did open the door? That would be awkward....though it might turn into a three some...but then again Sasuke IS really possesive...hmm. Anyway great story and I can't wait until ya update!!!!

    -Jason ^_-
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  • From crazyforkakashi on January 21, 2007
    Love . They are so cute . Will be looking for more.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on January 21, 2007
    omg, you updated!! and what are you talking about? this chapter was great! though i would have liked to read the conversation between iruka and naruto about why he was so happy, even though kakashi had mostly already confirmed why. and in the last chapter, you said you had them going fast because you had "plans," and with them confessing everlasting love in chapter 4, i certainly hope whatever you have planned isn't too heartbreaking. heartbreak makes me cry.

    anyway, great job!! i look forward to your next update!!
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  • From crazyforkakashi on January 21, 2007
    I can almost see it . Making out in the park and then I think maybe it went a little to far?
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  • From crazyforkakashi on January 21, 2007
    I just found this story and this one line had me going .

    "Iruka’s face split into a grin. ‘My, my, looks like Naruto is twitterpated!’"

    Now to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - animehead on January 21, 2007
    Yay! I've missed this story so much! I was so excited when I saw an update from you! Acutally, I haven't read the most recent chapter. My kids and husband are distracting me, but when it's quiet I will read it, and leave you a proper review!
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  • From oraday on January 21, 2007
    Bah, you don't really need a beta, this chapter was wonderful. The emotions were conveyed extremely well. I definitely believed that Sasuke and Naruto just fell in love, however abrupt. It was just so befitting and it seemed like everything from before was just leading up to that point. Ah! It was so awesome!!!

    Oh, the smut was hot!!! But I think it was even better than anything I've read before. It was real lovemaking and that made it so great. Wah, I just feel so happy having read this. It was truly beautiful...

    'Kay, I think if I keep blabbing, I'll start talking like Gai-sensei so I'mma stop...

    Just, don't worry about taking your time. You write long chapters that are very well structured so the wait isn't really bad at all^.^
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  • From ANON - punkin02 on December 28, 2006
    Did Neji get with Sai? Is that why he didn't come home?
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  • From ANON - VRon on December 07, 2006
    This is really sweet, great idea ^^ I can't wait till the next chapter and anyone's (or everyone's?) reaction to Sasuke's proclaimed sexuality XD Nicely done I give you props!
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  • From ANON - oraday on December 03, 2006
    Woot! That was an awesome chapter. I loved Naru's fox costume. God, I can just imagine him dancing in it. :drools: I don't think the relationship is moving too fast, though that could be because I completely enjoyed that lemon. Sooo hot!

    Heh, I wish Neji could have been paired with Gaara, but I'm thinkin' the NejiSaiNeji pairing won't be bad.
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  • From urbanmystic on December 02, 2006
    I loved this chapter and I love this story. The costumes were cute. I also loved Neji's skills with Sai, he's soooo smooth.
    *Mystic*
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  • From ANON - mike~ on December 02, 2006
    .... that was really hot

    thx for the chapter, a jealous sasuke, a lustful fox, and "sexy back" all into one = couldn't be better!

    i await ur next update!
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  • From ANON - **Hinata** on December 02, 2006
    Once again, great chapter XD I would like to see Naruto in hand cuffs ... with Sasuke, yes, slight bondage!!! Please!

    Hinata-chan
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  • From ANON - animehead on December 02, 2006
    wonderfully written, please update soon, i don't want to go through withdrawl...:0
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