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Reviews for The Café

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  • From Ikippiki on December 04, 2008
    Great story!! I just loved it! A bit too much sun and happiness for me but still!! Wow you rock!
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  • From Ikippiki on December 04, 2008
    I'm still reading the first chapter and I find your story captivating. There is something bothering me though. I'm french and fermé la bouche doesn't mean anything. Did your beta use an online dictionary? Because it looks like a mistake one would make. You should say something like "ferme ta bouche" (close your mouth), or "Café A la bouche fermée" (at mouth closed cafe), "ferme la" is more used (shut up). Hope it helps you.
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  • From charmpit on March 23, 2008
    What a sweet, fluffy ending. I'll get cavities!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on March 13, 2008
    AAAAWWWWWW *weeps tremendously* this was such a sweet ending. i'm just bursting with happiness that they worked everything out. pluuuss got to read another lovely scene of sasunaru smexing. fantastico! lol Anywho, yay for you, i loved ALL of it
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  • From chibialichan on March 13, 2008
    i loved this story... couldn't stop reading it once i got started... i am officially putting this story up as one of my favoirte sasunaru.... sorry that your beta is MIA at the moment, hope he/she turns up soon, not that your story needs it... keep up the great work and can you do me a favor and email me at kairna3@yahoo.com when you write the epilogue... can't wait to read it =^-^=
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  • From Anaheyla on October 20, 2007
    I shall eagerly await your return.
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  • From gaara89 on September 17, 2007
    This is so good! I hope you update soon!

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  • From ChatNoir on August 29, 2007
    This is probably one of the better fanfictions I've read in a long time. Entertaining and heart wrenching all at the same time. Truely fantastic. Brava.
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  • From Anaheyla on August 22, 2007
    A:YAY Sex!

    B:Damnit! I must know what happens next!

    C:Please continue. Pretty please?
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  • From Anaheyla on August 20, 2007
    Jus' finished chapter 3. This is some good shit. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on August 16, 2007
    This is a lovely story. I wouldn't picture Naruto being a flutist, but it works. Very beautiful. Update soon!
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  • From Greenstages on August 15, 2007
    whoo! Yay for sasu/naru/sasu! They sure did have fun in this chapter, huh? lol. Great. I found Sasuke a little OOC at times but I couldn't stop reading!!! And temari, I wondered if she stayed or left hahaha! I can't imagine going to sleep with that music next door :P Hope you'll update soon!
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  • From ringpop on August 15, 2007
    "They made love again and again throughout the night. They couldn't get enough of each other. At their last orgasm, Sasuke was still on top, however he was riding Naruto fast and hard. Sasuke threw his head back and yelled deeply as the sun came over the horizon." Okay, this was my favorite line of the WHOLE story.....besides the elephant part....that was good : )
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  • From ShagTag on August 15, 2007
    YEE!! I almost died-yet again.
    Need I say more???
    Cant wait for more,

    Avid fan,
    Orgy-of-Death
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  • From roro237 on August 14, 2007
    Glad you're back! Enjoyed this chapter (8) very much:)
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