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Reviews for Painted

By : melliemoore
  • From RyuuOokami on June 17, 2008
    I think you build it up very nicely. The lemon was... really good at some points and.... not that good on others. But overall I really liked it. *smile*
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  • From ANON - Rach on June 20, 2007
    That was great! Im so glad I found this fic! I really loved it!!! Wow, now im going to check out your other fics cuz I really enjyed this one!
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  • From ANON - Bec on December 08, 2006
    I found this incredibly hot. And also funny, cause I just got done painting my dining room.
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  • From ANON - Izzy on November 25, 2006
    gawf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i hole in the wall, oh god oh god....so.........damn.....funny rofl!!! so hard......too typeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! heheheheheheheheheh bwahahahahmwahahahahahah hhehehehehehehehe hehe heheheheh hmmmmmpppppppphhhhhhhhhhhh gaasp, can't breath!!! oh god, deep breaths, calm down izzy calm down.....hahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaQ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no sirwe, he's NEVER gonna here the end of it XDDDDXDXDXDXDX=D
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  • From ANON - Midnight Kyuubi on November 22, 2006
    Damn that, this had to be ome of the best fucking lemons I've ever read in my life, dammnit! I love it, I love the story...damnnit, I probably even love you!
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  • From ANON - Christina on November 21, 2006
    I loved it! Please make more stories like this
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  • From ANON - Hestia on November 13, 2006
    Wow--great job on a first lemon! May you write many more! Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Hestia on November 13, 2006
    Wow--great job on a first lemon! May you write many more! Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - aina on November 13, 2006
    thank you for writing this it was hot!! funny and entertaining...i liked the way you stayed true to their characters it really did look like something that they could do
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  • From ANON - innerchild on November 12, 2006
    that was ur first fanfic? and lemon? u gotta be shitting me. man, that was really good. funny and sexy at the same time. loved it. hope u got some other works, cause i want to read more of your stuff! :)

    -inc
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  • From ANON - terranigma11 on November 11, 2006
    0_0 Whoa...did you write that while i was sleeping? Cuz i swear this wasn't here six hours ago! I cant believe that this is your first time writing a lemon, that was just too hot! And with the paint...oh Lord! I dont know how you could have possibly found a muse in my paint scene, that scene wasnt even important. I really hope you come back to writing cuz this just proves that you should! And you better! and the fact that i inspired it...i swear i'm tearing up again...

    I await the day when you will release a chaptered fic, which i'm sure will be awesome! Your a refreshingly good writer. And you wont even dare giving up on it since i WILL break down your door and threaten you with a ten foot pole if that thought even just GRAZES your mind!

    I better see more from you, and i'm threatening you right now by the way! Thank you so much for doing this fic, i really needed that boost in motivation, since i lose it so often. Much love! Ja!



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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on November 11, 2006
    whatdya talk? that was HAWT! and sasuke wasn't even mad that he got paint all over him. that's love right there. i thought this was a perfect little bit of smut. keep it up!
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  • From on November 11, 2006
    That was hot! ^o^ Really awsome! I started to choke on my reeses pieces cause it was soooo good. XD umm...the story that is...candy isn't bad tho. XD You did really good. Hope you do more. I'd love to read them.^^
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  • From ANON - Clemen on November 11, 2006
    Great one shot. Very funny the ending. Look forward to reading your future works. Until then, take care, and god bless.
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  • From ANON - MissMayumi on November 11, 2006
    That was awesome!! ...yummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....Please write more!!
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