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Reviews for Naruto's Uchiha Dictionary

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From EmpyrealFantasy on December 01, 2007
    That was so adorable. *hearts in eyes*

    I hope this isnt abandoned, as this is one of the best SasuNaru I've come across in months (I killed my cache! Wah!). This was lovely, though. It saddens me that it has been a while. More? And is this over on FFnet (search is down over there again) or somewhere I can put it on alert? Thank you, hun.
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  • From ANON - KyuubiTamer on November 30, 2007
    Please update this hilarious original idea fic! I read it outloud to my friends and they loved it!!! Lol, love the part of Naruto reading the lunch argument!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on November 12, 2007
    why why why?! why has this not been updated?! can't you see how many fans you're disappointing :( I find this story absolutely adorable and i really really truly wish you'd consider continuing it *puppy dog eyes* pretty pretty pweeaase...
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  • From sasquatchsnake on November 09, 2007
    Wow, that was amazing. I am enamored with this story - can't wait to see what happens next! ^^ The 'best friends' part was adorable, by the way. The story is really unique - I like it!
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  • From ANON - Secertsex92 on October 28, 2007
    WOMEN GET YOUR ASS IN GEAR AND WRITE MORE ON THIS FRIEKIN AWSOME STORY I WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS AND HAVE YOU LOOKED AT YOUR REVIEW NUMBERS I WILL SAY IT AGAIN GET ON THE STORY WOMEN OR ILL HURT YOU !!!!!!!!!!!
    love SS92
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  • From skyblueeyes on October 24, 2007
    BRO this is good, you have got to update LOL. i really like your style of writing. anyway toodles
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  • From MoveThemHands on October 09, 2007
    HA! I just read it all.

    Great story. So perfect! I love the way you keep them in character perfectly, and the whole perverted Neji and overprotective Sasuke is just the best XD

    *giggles* Sasuke was really smart in keeping the best necklace cause that cocky bastard can always just be "Because I am the best." if anyone asks about it. Hehehehehe

    Well wonderful story, I can't wait for more!
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  • From oohshiny on October 06, 2007
    YAY!! yet again, i luv this story, so email me when you update this one too k? k. ^^
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  • From kagomegirl on September 25, 2007
    OMG kawaii!!!! you so have to update again soon!! i wanna see how they finally get together!!
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  • From ANON - Kibou32 on September 24, 2007
    I think this story has potential for more, would you continue it?


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  • From hisoka on July 22, 2007
    such a useful book if you can read it wright that is,not everythings straight forword somethimes you need to look between the lines ne.
    updates
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  • From kagome1303 on June 22, 2007
    Aw, I think that's kind of sweet of Sasuke to have a best friends necklace thing. I actually still have a few of those from elementary school. I've kept them all this time, even though I haven't seen some of those friends in a very long time. Not just necklaces, but bracelets too. Can't wait to see what kinds of translations the dictionary have to offer next chapter. And I hope Naruto won't get into any bad situations with the obviously pervert neji.
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  • From LJofTheDarkThrone on June 19, 2007
    Need. More. Of. Possessive. And. Protective. Sasuke.

    Need. MORE. CUTENESS! *shudders at the notion of almost using the word 'kawaii'*

    Update soon, por favor. =D
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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on June 12, 2007
    8D I'm still on a little bit of a giggle/happy-high from Sasuke's blushing and the ADORABLE "best friends" (Sasuke has the "best" one. how Sasuke of him. :P) necklaces, but I'll try to leave a coherent review. :D

    Naruto smiling into the mirror at the beginging was very cute and fun to read. He even got a little angsty (just for a second) and that was also fun to read (for us angst-lovers at least). I prefer my angst short - most of the time - so it was doubley good for me.

    Naruto's outfit... okay, I really have a thing for cargo pants that dip down and show off the boxers a little, so it was completely hot to me. :D (I'm sure Sasuke and Neji had similar thoughts. xD)

    I loved Naruto's musings on the possible side-effects of wearing the neclace in public. Really, it's fantastic when characters are written actually thinking about others feelings in a logical way. (Of course, in the end, Naruto delt with it in typical Naruto fashion; a possitive attitude of believing he could deal with whatever came his way - and not brooding. [I'm looking at you, Sasuke.])

    The writing transition from Naruto leaving in the morning to him coming back to his apartment and thinking about his strange day, while not confusing in the least, wasn't entirely smooth. It somehow made the two parts of the chapter seem very distant from one another to go from morning to evening. It left me suddenly feeling like I'd missed something; however, that was rectified as I kept reading. It just put me off for a second.

    Okay, that's my constructive (I hope?) criticism for the day; on to the rest!

    Sakura... Sakura is annoying in this. (Geh! Stop pestering Naruto!) ^_^; I'm guessing that was intentional though?

    I was with Naruto on Sasuke not mentioning the necklace. You had me completely strung along. (Kudos.) I felt like I was having a realization right alongside him when I read "Sasuke didn’t know Naruto knew." and the resulting train of thought.

    OMG I love reading the lines about his chest feeling warm and constricted and him being happy, because it makes me feel warm and constricted and happy, and I get into the story even more! *^.^* (I'm such a sap--and apparently very empathetic to fictional characters. o_O)

    Neji. Oh, when he showed up, I laughed like a sadist, because surely there would be some..."tension" between him and Sasuke. I was not dissapointed. XD
    Frankly, I think anyone might need a magical dictionary to know what was really going on when those two speak to eachother. ^^;;; Really, they can never just out and say anthying...

    It's so much fun to read Naruto's reactions to what they were really saying. I have to wonder how long it will take him to realize Sasuke's hostility towards Neji is a little more than a friend's protectivness... (But that's up to you, as the author, now isn't it? ;D [damn you and your author powers DX])

    Then they start talking about jewelry -and "kunais". *snicker* "Kunais". God, Neji really is a pervy one. LOL (Also, Neji needs to lean that higher monentary value in a gift does NOT equate to it being valued more by the person who recieved it. Tsk, tsk.)

    When Sauke said this (I mean, you know - when the dictionary translated it):
    "Come on to Naruto, touch Naruto, even breathe the same air as Naruto, and I’ll have you castrated by your own kunai."
    It made me so happy. Kind of odd, I know. It was just so possesive. :D Like, he obviously cares greatly for Naruto - in that icy bastard way of his. ...Which is blatanly obvious to a naruxsasuxnaru fan reading a naru/sasu (or sasu/naru? naru/sasu/naru?) story, but it's still very nice to read. ^_^

    And then, later, Sasuke comes to --APPOLOGIZE!? :D Pinch me now cause I must be dreaming -or else it's the appocolypse. ...Or else Sasuke is in love with Naruto and can't stand the thought that Naruto might be upset with him for being..."less than courteous" to one of Naruto's friends. Yeah...maybe that last one, eh? xD

    I now have a very uke image of Sasuke blushing stuck in my mind. Not a bad thought to fall asleep on, if you ask me. :3

    Oh, and the way you presented that last part:

    "The moonlight from his window fell across his bare chest and the necklaces, gleaming off their silver charms.

    Best.

    Friends."

    Absolutely perfect and beautiful. *_* Damn, you leave me wanting more every time.

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  • From Kerrisa on June 11, 2007
    Awe that was so sweet!!! i'v had maybe 3 different 'best friends' necklaces, all of which i think i lost >_> But that was so sweet!! I wish i had a dictionary like Naruto's! =D !! Awesome update, can't wait to read more!!
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