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Reviews for Wet Nightmare

By : mischiefmaker
  • From ANON - FrankTheMachine on November 20, 2006
    that was simply amazing, if only there was a little more description then this would be even better.
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  • From ANON - Yo... on November 20, 2006
    damn... i love NaruIno pairings soo much...

    HOTT STUFF!
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  • From ANON - Kelsey on November 20, 2006
    Now that was hott!!
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  • From ANON - Yeah! on November 20, 2006
    That was absolutely genious. You should continue this awesome story! I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Nellysan on November 20, 2006
    Wow I really like this one it's really...creative.
    Lol sex in the stairway with ANBU around? Jeez
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  • From ANON - HAWT on November 19, 2006
    Only one way to describe this, HAWT!! Although a slight bit more description would turn this into RED HAWT!
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  • From ANON - George on November 18, 2006
    this has got be possibly the best NaruIno smut out there!
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  • From ANON - Hahahaha on November 18, 2006
    i absolutely love this story! keep up the good work chap
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  • From ANON - mmm.... on November 18, 2006
    YES YES YES!! i love Naruto and Ino!
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  • From ANON - m-azing on November 18, 2006
    wow i got to hand it to you, this rocks!
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  • From ANON - J-Pop Princess on November 18, 2006
    For something so short, this sure was good!I can't wait to see what Naruto does to her when he can actually take his time. You set up the premise of the story very well for such a short story. I know they're called ficlets for a reason but I'd love to see something a little longer.
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  • From ANON - LilyDraken on November 18, 2006
    AMAZING! This is unbelievably HOT! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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  • From ANON - blazer6 on November 18, 2006
    nice you should do a threesome with tenten involved.
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  • From ANON - Hestia on November 18, 2006
    Well, the title's weird, but the sex was hot--I love Naruto's lines. It's not clear what part of the story you are unhappy with--that author note was very tantalizing. Was it the quick orgasm recovery? The unlikeliness of getting off in public? Oh--I just thought of a nice variation--maybe Naruto should threaten not to stop unless Ino cums? Anyway, I love how you are writing Naruto--it's a fun variation on his character! Thanks for putting part 2 up so soon!!

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  • From ANON - hey on November 18, 2006
    YES! that was awesome, keep up the good work!!
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