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Reviews for Aphrodisiac

By : MissMayumi
  • From Ikippiki on September 14, 2008
    Let me tell you this: it was hot! Although the way Naruto acts is a little weird, you kind of make him sound like sakura... but that is only my opinion... I really liked the lemon!
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  • From Rosebud on September 04, 2007
    Ah, I loved it!
    It was really good!!!! XD
    You can never go wrong with Sasuke fucking Naruto on the couch.
    I can't to read more one shots from you!
    *much love* C-2006
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  • From DismalAbstract on August 24, 2007
    Hey! I LOVED this! I like Ita/Naru better but Sasu/Naru's good too! I would say that it ended a little too abruptly and we don't know why that guy spiked his drink but hey - hot sex - who cares?

    2 suggestions though? I think it would be funny if it was Jairya or Kakashi who spiked the drink and were watching outside the window - you know perverts.
    Also there is that one really long paragraph you have? It would be easier to read if you broke it up a bit...

    But other than that? A very smexy hot lemon!
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on August 18, 2007
    Ack!(grabs tissues and hold them to nose) Daaamn that was hot. I need ice. This was just really really good and yummy. I've actually read this before today but that day I was unable to review, something was wrong with the comp.
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  • From cynaga on May 26, 2007
    Naruto giggles too much. I like your description but it lacked the emotion of relationship for me.
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  • From Gwyllion on May 06, 2007
    One word.....HAWT!! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 30, 2007
    Wow! That was awesome!
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  • From ANON - Pocky on January 08, 2007
    As far as one-shot smuts go, this one wasn't so bad. Naruto seemed too girly sometimes, and submitted too easily into Sasuke. Normally I think Naruto would be the type of person to at least put up some kind of front. However, this was the Naruto you interpreted, and except for the giggles here and there, it was acceptable.

    And, just for the sake of it, I'll have to say it got me rather hot and flustered. xD

    - Pocky
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  • From ANON - Saki on January 06, 2007
    It's actually very good. There were a couple of grammar and spelling errors but those were okay. As for the first to the last paragraph on your story, it could have been broken up to make it into two paragraphs since it was very long but still it wouldn't really affect the story at all. Just making a couple of suggestions but it's up to you. Good job.
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  • From ANON - animehead on January 06, 2007
    Nice...lol. I always love SauNaru or NaruSasu, though I tend to make Naruto seme when paired with others, actually I'm to the point where I don't even want to give them titles of uke or seme, and just have them go all out, taking turns, you know? But that's just me.

    Good smutty stuff!
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  • From ANON - dut on November 10, 2006
    hot hot hot hot hot~
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2006
    one word brillant

    loved the sex
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  • From oraday on November 10, 2006
    Hee. I'm thinkin' the person in the bar was some evil Yaoi fangirl... Then again, it wasn't a very evil act. At least Sasuke and Naruto shouldn't think so^.^
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  • From promise2003 on November 09, 2006
    I think that you did a wonderful job, because it was a very well written piece. With that said Naruto is a bit too uke for my tastes (nothing against you at all, just not my preference for the guy). There are only so many times that I can take his giggling (for me that's OOC, but I know that you uke=Naru fans are all for that...just not me). I'll have to go and see if you have more fun stories for me to read. :) Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - kelly on November 09, 2006
    .....o.O ^_^ sweet! nice smut! just to let ya know there were a few grammatical/spelling errors in a few spots, but it didn't take away from the story ^_^ good job with it by the way
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