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Reviews for Fraternity

By : oraday
  • From promise2003 on November 10, 2006
    Yay, another update sooner rather than later. That's always a good thing.

    I do have one comment to make that disturbed me a bit. Our two lovely heroes of the story (Sasuke and Naruto) orgasmed...that means that they (excuse me cause I'm going to be blunt) jizzed in their pants and didn't do anything about it. They just went on with their happy little lives with a mess in their pants. I know that this was probably just a small oversight, but you really should have something about them changing the clothing that they have soiled. Cause the fact that they just left for the movies without doing a darn thing is really bothering me.

    Funny stuff, can't wait for the next chapter.


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  • From ANON - sai on November 10, 2006
    this is sooooooooooooooo cool e-mail me when u update
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on November 10, 2006
    You story has just the right amount of Sasu/Naru and Ita/???, because lets just face it Itachi with anyone is just plain HOT!!
    Your story has me rolling over and laughing when Naru talks to Kyuubi on the phone while Sasu molests Naru.

    Just one word......TASTY!!!
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  • From ANON - LOVEYDOVEY D.J. on November 09, 2006
    Only three reviews... this is such a great story so far :D! But don't get discouraged, you have an awesome story on your hands. Perverted, possesive Sasuke is so funny as well, please update as soon as you can, pretty please with sugar on top ^-^!!!
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  • From promise2003 on November 09, 2006
    Gaara and Neji in a closet! YES! I like that idea very much. I have to say that your style is very different, but it definitely grew on me. I love the story so far and it is getting bookmarked so I can easily find it again. I hope that you update soon, because it was so cute. For some reason I can never write SasuNaru, and usually don't read it either, but you made a story that I'm really REALLY enjoying. The humor in it is great. Far too often SasuNaru stories are just drama filled crap, but yours is really cute and funny and I love how you write the two. I am also fangirling over your version of Itachi. *squeal* Love what you have so far and can't wait for more. :)


    Darn you for not having any more stories for me to read.
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  • From ANON - kawaiicrimsonkitsune on November 09, 2006
    Hurry you must update! I LUV Kyuubi! And its really funny how possesive Itachi and Sasuke are ^^; But I want more KYUUBI! YAY Kyuubi! And poor Naru-chan, hes so clueless =3
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  • From ANON - MissMayumi on November 09, 2006
    that was good! I love how Itachi and Kyuubi keep going at it the whole chapter! please make an updation soon! the only flow is that it needs to be double spaced
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