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By : oraday
  • From ANON - Exane on December 16, 2006
    omg!! Fun with Sasuke = SEX! = Even More sex = a very happy reader!
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  • From ANON - Yammy on December 11, 2006
    ^_^ i love this. yes. really.

    :P kind of written oddly, but oh well.

    hmm.... update! send alert!
    y_munro@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - z on December 11, 2006
    i enjoyed it up till the end of the first chapter. many errors, and although your writing style is a little refreshing, it gets irritating a bit easily. the character personalities are a tiny bit annoying. naruto sounds too whiny and childish and he repeats his lines a little too often. we all enjoy sasukes possessiveness but you've used it a bit too much so its getting tiresome. the fact that everything in the beginning of the plot has worked out flawlessly makes the story boring. add something to it to make it more interesting. all i'm seeing is the same thing happening over and over again. overall, it seems to me like you're posting this for fun so i suppose criticism isnt really needed but just in case you take this story seriously, i wanted to give out a bit of help.
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  • From ANON - Cindy on December 11, 2006
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2006
    shadowfax_00@hotmail.com.....love the story!
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  • From ANON - ????? on December 10, 2006
    Nice new chapter, it was hilarious. Post a new chapter soon!!!! :]
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  • From ANON - Fiore on December 10, 2006
    This fic is amazing. I laugh, I cry /because of so much laughing/, god, you better keep the chapters long because I've been reading it since first chapter and, its a really good fic, I mean, you know, not written like other fics and all but it's really interesting and I can't wait to read next chapter. Great job making it funny! =)
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  • From ANON - tovah on December 10, 2006
    I like this story. I hope Sasuke will at least get a little lovin from Naruto soon
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  • From ANON - Kiana on December 10, 2006
    I liked this chapter. It was just... cute overall. =] I want to read the next one. Really badly. xD
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  • From ANON - Mija on December 10, 2006
    omg, Naruto's gonna moon Sasuke! does he WANT to be pulled off that ladder and led to the car and get raped by Sasuke??? and aawwwww glad they decided to move in together, though Im still a bit concerned for Narus virtue lol, not really he needs to get laid already darn it...sorry fould language...sick, I feel icky, sorry, anyhow totally loving this chapter, but do you think Kyuu was really hurt when he let himself be convinced to skip his and Naru's birthday tradition?? they may have boyfriends now but they are still brothers and should spend time with each other...sigh...anyhow great read, ty for the update alert, so happy, sorry took a bit longer than expected to read and respond but as I said am sick..makes me not feel so good, again thanks for the read, always makes me smile and laugh and omg I soo almost forgot about crazy perverted Genma hehe, glad hes popped up again, huggles and smiles mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Fluffy on December 09, 2006
    Well, that was fun... but a quick question.
    Is Jiraiya still the author of the Icha Icha books?
    If he is, there was no connection made (as in while introducing with Sasuke).
    Sorry, I'm a picky spaz. ^.^
    By the way, I know it's just a side plot but could we get a bit more involvement from the GaaNeji sexbeast you created? (Actually, it's probably not good for my health...)
    Lemme know when you're up for more! *glomp and retreat*
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  • From ANON - Carla on December 09, 2006
    Thanks for alerting me of your update. I wonder Naruto and Sasuke will get to the next stage of their relationship...? Soon? Maybe this sunday that Sasuke is refering too? What is Naruto's dream? And who will be heading Akatsuki? Orochimaru? Draera? Or all of them including the freak with the chakra eating sword? And what do they want with Itachi? Some special mission?

    Please email me when you next update!

    Carla
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  • From ANON - Briryan on December 09, 2006
    Thanks for letting me know you updated. Looking forward to when Sasuke finally get insides Naruto's pants. That's gonna be good. Can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kawaiicrimsonkitsune on December 08, 2006
    Nyah, hurry up and update this is getting good. I love Kyuubi and the Itachi pairing, you have to have more of that pairing in each chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kai on December 08, 2006
    Hm... I wonder how Sasuke would handle it if he knew "Ero-sempai" he just met was the person who wrote his Icha-Ichas? Same with Kakashi...
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